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Mình có viết 1 bài về chủ đề trên, mong mọi người xem và góp ý cho bài được hoàn chỉnh hơn ạ

My idol is singer Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous song as Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong,... She has 2 brothers. After she graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children dance and sing. In 1991, she partipated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with maximum mark. No one could reach it before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... I admire her because she has a beautiful voice and professional performing styles.

@phuongdaitt1 @Phạm Dương @Narumi04

 

[ng.htrang2004]

My idol who is a singer is Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous songs such as Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong,... She has 2 brothers. After she graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children to dance and sing. In 1991, she partipated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with maximum mark. No one could reach it before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... I admire her because she has a beautiful voice and professional performing styles.

Bài này có một chút hơi sai sai chỗ kết bài, kiểu nói về tiểu sử thì câu này không nên đưa bài phần kết. Cấu trúc cũng chưa được đa đạng lắm.

 

[Thiên Thuận]

My idol who is a singer is Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous songs such as Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong,... She has 2 brothers. After she graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children to dance and sing. In 1991, she partipated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with maximum mark. No one could reach it before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... I admire her because she has a beautiful voice and professional performing styles.

Bài này có một chút hơi sai sai chỗ kết bài, kiểu nói về tiểu sử thì câu này không nên đưa bài phần kết. Cấu trúc cũng chưa được đa đạng lắm.

Xem nào, theo em thì ở phần kết bài anh nên viết gì? Anh gặp khó khăn ở phần kết bài 1 tí...

 

[ng.htrang2004]

Xem nào, theo em thì ở phần kết bài anh nên viết gì? Anh gặp khó khăn ở phần kết bài 1 tí...

Có thể không cần kết bài trong bài này vẫn được, không vấn đề gì, nhưng nếu có thì có lẽ tốt hơn, kiểu "With her big contribution to the music, she is considered as one of the most excellent artists in Vietnam" Em nghĩ thế sẽ hay hơn.

 

[Phạm Dương]

Như Quỳnh has been described as a "traditional female vocalist". Along with her vocal performances when performing live, she also wears the traditional áo dài, which accentuates her image of a Vietnamese woman's "virginal innocence" in conjunction with her natural charm. Her performances have been described as having a sweet voice, with lyrics revolving around the homeland of Vietnam and impressive singing and dancing skills. Her vocal range at her debut was soprano; it has since deepened to mezzo-soprano by the release of the song "Duyên phận".

 

[phuongdaitt1]

Mình có viết 1 bài về chủ đề trên, mong mọi người xem và góp ý cho bài được hoàn chỉnh hơn ạ

My idol is singer Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous song as Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong,... She has 2 brothers. After she graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children dance and sing. In 1991, she partipated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with maximum mark. No one could reach it before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... I admire her because she has a beautiful voice and professional performing styles.

@phuongdaitt1 @Phạm Dương @Narumi04

Sửa thử nha ^^
My idol singer is Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous songs are Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong, and so on. She has 2 brothers. After she had graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children to dance and sing. In 1991, she participated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with flying colours (Thêm muối :v). Surprisingly, no one could reach that high mark before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... With her big contribution to the music, she is considered as one of the most excellent artists in Vietnam. For me, I always look up to my idol singer because she has a beautiful voice and her performing styles are professional.

 

[Phạm Dương]

Lê Lâm Quỳnh Như was born in Đông Hà township, QuangrTrij Province of South Vietnam, on 9 September 1970, as the oldest in a family of three. Her mother was going to name her Đông Hà, after her birthplace but decided to name her Lâm Quỳnh Như instead. She was born sickly, and nearly died. For most of her childhood, her family lived through economic troubles after the Fall of Saigon. At a very young age, she performed in H Chi Minh City first regularly on the stage of her old elementary school, and later in local children's television programs. Như Quỳnh studied music under professor Ba Thai of the Vietnamese National Music Institute and for a time, she taught music to young children in District1, Ho Chi Minh city. In 2018, she stated that her mother was also interested in music, but her grandparents forbid her from attending art school, as they wanted children to focus on general education.
Như Quỳnh's singing career formally began in 1991, where she performed in the Television Singing Contest in Ho Chi Minh City and won the special prize. In April 1993, Như Quỳnh's family immigrated to the United States and settled in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. In 1994, her parents met a fellow countryman with connections to Asia Entertainment Inc

 

[nguyendangkhoa1370]

Mình có viết 1 bài về chủ đề trên, mong mọi người xem và góp ý cho bài được hoàn chỉnh hơn ạ

My idol is singer Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous song as Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong,... She has 2 brothers. After she graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children dance and sing. In 1991, she partipated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with maximum mark. No one could reach it before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... I admire her because she has a beautiful voice and professional performing styles.

@phuongdaitt1 @Phạm Dương @Narumi04

My idol is singer Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on September 9, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for folk music. Some of her popular songs include as Duyen Phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong, ... She has two brothers. After graduating from high school, she taught children to dance and sing. In 1991, she participated in the first singing competition (Tieng hat) and won the first prize with the highest score. No one can achieve it before. In 1993, she moved to the United States with her family. Since 1996, she has collaborated with the Asian Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many DVDs, albums and popular songs ... I admire her because she has a good voice and when she is on stage she is very confident

 

[Narumi04]

Mình có viết 1 bài về chủ đề trên, mong mọi người xem và góp ý cho bài được hoàn chỉnh hơn ạ

My idol is singer Nhu Quynh. Her real name is Le Lam Quynh Nhu. She was born on 9th Sep, 1970 in Quang Tri. She is famous for singing folk music. Some of her famous song as Duyen phan, Nguoi tinh mua dong,... She has 2 brothers. After she graduated from high school, she voluteered to teach children dance and sing. In 1991, she partipated in 1st Television Singing contest (Tieng hat truyen hinh) and achieved the first prize with maximum mark. No one could reach it before. In 1993, she moved to USA with her family, From 1996 up to now, she has taken turn collaborating with Asia Center and Thuy Nga Center. She has many famous DVDs, albums, recordings,... I admire her because she has a beautiful voice and professional performing styles.

@phuongdaitt1 @Phạm Dương @Narumi04

T sửa câu đầu nhé, còn ý sau lấy của Hà Trang đi, vì ý sau của t cũng tương tự hoặc gần vậy viết lại mất công :v
My admirable singer/ favourite singer is Nhu Quynh.
Ý của Thuận thì thường người ta dùng là a singer called Nhu Quynh hay a singer, Nhu Quynh hay ý của Hà Trang nhưng thấy nó dài quá. Nhưng mà dùng 2 cái trên thì cũng không hay, đặc điểm luận văn là có nhiều từ lạ và ngắn gọn súc tích là ăn điểm cao )