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Tìm lỗi sai va sửa lại
FIRST DAY AT WORK
Well, Trisha, that's my own first day at my new job out of the way. I wasn't sure what to expect, but it turned out okay. My manager was really nice, much nicer than yours boss sounds from your letter. No sooner had i arrived at work than did he made me a cup of tea! It was a really pleasant surprise. Not only did he do that, but he was also kind enough to explain to me how everything worked. The office is really modern and its comfortable. The other people all have their own desks, but mine desk still hasn't been delivered, so i'm sharing with someone else for now. Little did i not realise when i took the job that i was going to enjoy it so much. I have finally found a job that i am happy in, and so will you have, i'm sure. Hope tomorrow's as much fun!

 

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Tìm lỗi sai va sửa lại
FIRST DAY AT WORK
Well, Trisha, that's my own first day at my new job out of the way. I wasn't sure what to expect, but it turned out okay. My manager was really nice, much nicer than yours boss sounds from your letter. No sooner had i arrived at work than did he made me a cup of tea! It was a really pleasant surprise. Not only did he do that, but he was also kind enough to explain to me how everything worked. The office is really modern and its comfortable. The other people all have their own desks, but mine desk still hasn't been delivered, so i'm sharing with someone else for now. Little did i not realise when i took the job that i was going to enjoy it so much. I have finally found a job that i am happy in, and so will you have, i'm sure. Hope tomorrow's as much fun!

Well, Trisha, that's my own first day, at my new job out of the way. I wasn't sure what to expect, but it turned out okay. My manager was really nice, much nicer better than yours boss sounds from your letter. No sooner had i I had arrived at work (Hình như cái này cấu trúc đảo thì phải) than did he made me a cup of tea! It was a really pleasant surprise. Not only did he do that, but he was also kind enough to explain to me how everything worked. The office is really modern and its comfortable. The other people all have their own desks, but mine desk still hasn't been delivered, so i'm sharing with someone else for now. Little did i not realise when i took the job that i was going to enjoy it so much. I have finally found a job that i am happy in, and so will you have, i'm sure. Hope tomorrow's as much fun!
@hip2608 chỉnh xem sai chỗ nào, tui thấy sao mấy câu cuối lấy tính từ làm chủ ngữ là thế nào nhỉ.

 

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Tìm lỗi sai va sửa lại
FIRST DAY AT WORK
Well, Trisha, that's my own first day at my new job out of the way. I wasn't sure what to expect, but it turned out okay. My manager was really nice, much nicer than yours boss sounds from your letter. No sooner had i arrived at work than did he made me a cup of tea! It was a really pleasant surprise. Not only did he do that, but he was also kind enough to explain to me how everything worked. The office is really modern and its comfortable. The other people all have their own desks, but mine desk still hasn't been delivered, so i'm sharing with someone else for now. Little did i not realise when i took the job that i was going to enjoy it so much. I have finally found a job that i am happy in, and so will you have, i'm sure. Hope tomorrow's as much fun!

trong tiếng Anh ko có từ nào viết là ''i'' em nhé...

My manager was really nice, much nicer than yours boss sounds from your letter.

My manager was really nice, much nicer than your boss sounds from your letter.

r. No sooner had i I had arrived at work (Hình như cái này cấu trúc đảo thì phải) than did he made me a cup of tea! It was a really pleasant surprise.

No sooner had I arrived at work than did he made me a cup of tea! (câu này đúng mà )

My manager was really nice, much nicer better than yours boss sounds from your letter.

dùng '' nicer'' vẫn đc nhé nhưng bỏ ''much'' đi

The other people all have their own desks, but mine desk still hasn't been delivered, so i'm sharing with someone else for now

tôi sửa: . The other people all have their own desks, but my desk still hasn't been delivered, so i'm sharing with someone else for now

Little did i not realise when i took the job that i was going to enjoy it so much.

câu này đúng rồi mà, ko phải sửa nha

I have finally found a job that i am happy in, and so will you have, i'm sure.

câu này ông sửa đúng rồi