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[Coco99]

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Đề: That employers should have 4 days of work per week.
Bạn nào cho mình suy nghĩ được không vì lần này đề hơi kì =.=
Cho mk ý tưởng của các bạn bằng tiếng Việt cx đc, viết bằng dot point, không cần phải một đoạn đâu ^^
Đề lần này chơi khó nhau, chỉ làm 4 ngày một tuần thay vì 5, theo các bạn thì nên hay không nên? Các bạn cứ viết vào nhá, trùng ý cũng được, cảm ơn.

 

[ng.htrang2004]

Đề: That employers should have 4 days of work per week.
Bạn nào cho mình suy nghĩ được không vì lần này đề hơi kì =.=
Cho mk ý tưởng của các bạn bằng tiếng Việt cx đc, viết bằng dot point, không cần phải một đoạn đâu ^^
Đề lần này chơi khó nhau, chỉ làm 4 ngày một tuần thay vì 5, theo các bạn thì nên hay không nên? Các bạn cứ viết vào nhá, trùng ý cũng được, cảm ơn.

I disagree
Risk to Customer Sales and Confidence
Having a four-day working week could put strain on employees who have children (Kiểu như nếu làm 4 ngày thì làm nhiều giờ, thay đổi thời gian biểu, ảnh hưởng đến gia đình và bản thân người lao động, không có thời gian chăm sóc gia đình trong 4 ngày đi làm đó)
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[Trương Hoài Nam]

Đề: That employers should have 4 days of work per week.
Bạn nào cho mình suy nghĩ được không vì lần này đề hơi kì =.=
Cho mk ý tưởng của các bạn bằng tiếng Việt cx đc, viết bằng dot point, không cần phải một đoạn đâu ^^
Đề lần này chơi khó nhau, chỉ làm 4 ngày một tuần thay vì 5, theo các bạn thì nên hay không nên? Các bạn cứ viết vào nhá, trùng ý cũng được, cảm ơn.

-Employees can save money on transportation.( nhân viên có thể tiết kiệm chi phí vận chuyển)
- Less time commuting means less pollution.( Ít thời gian đi lại có nghĩa là ít ô nhiễm hơn)
-More time away from the office allows them to spend more time with family.
-When they work four-day weeks, they seem less stressed and fatigued by the end of the week. That might increase their productivity.( khi họ làm việc bốn ngày trong tuần, họ dường như ít căng thẳng và mệt mỏi hơn vào cuối tuần. Điều đó có thể làm tăng năng suất của họ.)

 

[Coco99]

-Employees can save money on transportation.( nhân viên có thể tiết kiệm chi phí vận chuyển)
- Less time commuting means less pollution.( Ít thời gian đi lại có nghĩa là ít ô nhiễm hơn)
-More time away from the office allows them to spend more time with family.
-When they work four-day weeks, they seem less stressed and fatigued by the end of the week. That might increase their productivity.( khi họ làm việc bốn ngày trong tuần, họ dường như ít căng thẳng và mệt mỏi hơn vào cuối tuần. Điều đó có thể làm tăng năng suất của họ.)

I disagree
Risk to Customer Sales and Confidence
Having a four-day working week could put strain on employees who have children (Kiểu như nếu làm 4 ngày thì làm nhiều giờ, thay đổi thời gian biểu, ảnh hưởng đến gia đình và bản thân người lao động, không có thời gian chăm sóc gia đình trong 4 ngày đi làm đó)
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Hai bạn tính debate nhau hả? Chị ở giữa ngư ông đắc lợi ^^
Nam, How about the money if they only work 4 days per week, any chance they will be poorer and less productivity because the income is lower? Any eviden shown that working 4 days per week will decrease the stresses that they have already been giving by the company?

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of their? What do you mean that they won't have spare time for their family if they only work for four days? I thought they would have less time being busy or you mean they have to find another job to increase the income from only doing four days a week?

Ý kiến ko ai đúng ai sai, chị chỉ muốn biết thêm về tại sao mn lại nghĩ như vậy vì đề lần này khó!!!
Cảm ơn nha ^^

 

[mvthaomy]

-Employees can save money on transportation.( nhân viên có thể tiết kiệm chi phí vận chuyển)
- Less time commuting means less pollution.( Ít thời gian đi lại có nghĩa là ít ô nhiễm hơn)
-More time away from the office allows them to spend more time with family.
-When they work four-day weeks, they seem less stressed and fatigued by the end of the week. That might increase their productivity.( khi họ làm việc bốn ngày trong tuần, họ dường như ít căng thẳng và mệt mỏi hơn vào cuối tuần. Điều đó có thể làm tăng năng suất của họ.)

Mình nghĩ các ý này thì tốt rồi. Nhưng nếu có thể thì thêm một ý trái chiều ở cuối bài thì sẽ hay hơn:
However, some opponents argue that this change is likely to cause an decrease in the productivity due to less time spent on working, which is considered a disadvantage of cutting down on the time of work. But in my opinion, the quality outweighs the quantity, the number of day they work matters nothing if they spend all of their enthusiasm and energy on every moment at work.

 

[Trương Hoài Nam]

Hai bạn tính debate nhau hả? Chị ở giữa ngư ông đắc lợi ^^
Nam, How about the money if they only work 4 days per week, any chance they will be poorer and less productivity because the income is lower? Any eviden shown that working 4 days per week will decrease the stresses that they have already been giving by the company?

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of their? What do you mean that they won't have spare time for their family if they only work for four days? I thought they would have less time being busy or you mean they have to find another job to increase the income from only doing four days a week?

Ý kiến ko ai đúng ai sai, chị chỉ muốn biết thêm về tại sao mn lại nghĩ như vậy vì đề lần này khó!!!
Cảm ơn nha ^^

When employees work fewer hours, that could mean they’d also brings home less money.Of course, the employers could increase salaries and per-hour pay ,but there’s no guarantee.(ý nhỏ however phần kết nha chị)

Hai bạn tính debate nhau hả? Chị ở giữa ngư ông đắc lợi ^^
Nam, How about the money if they only work 4 days per week, any chance they will be poorer and less productivity because the income is lower? Any eviden shown that working 4 days per week will decrease the stresses that they have already been giving by the company?

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of their? What do you mean that they won't have spare time for their family if they only work for four days? I thought they would have less time being busy or you mean they have to find another job to increase the income from only doing four days a week?

Ý kiến ko ai đúng ai sai, chị chỉ muốn biết thêm về tại sao mn lại nghĩ như vậy vì đề lần này khó!!!
Cảm ơn nha ^^

Working 4 days per week allows employees the chance to spend time with family and friends, take time out for themselves, work on new projects, or discover new places. When they do this, they will reduce the stresses. (Làm việc 4 ngày trong tuần cho phép họ có cơ hội dành thời gian với gia đình và bạn bè, dành thời gian cho bản thân, làm việc trong các dự án mới hoặc khám phá những địa điểm mới. Khi họ làm điều này, họ sẽ giảm đi phần nào căng thẳng)

 

[Yuhip2608]

Nam, How about the money if they only work 4 days per week, any chance they will be poorer and less productivity because the income is lower? Any eviden shown that working 4 days per week will decrease the stresses that they have already been giving by the company?

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of their? What do you mean that they won't have spare time for their family if they only work for four days? I thought they would have less time being busy or you mean they have to find another job to increase the income from only doing four days a week?

Nam, How about the money if they only work 4 days per week, any chance they will be poorer and less productivity because the income is lower?

...... and less productive....

Any eviden shown that working 4 days per week will decrease the stresses that they have already been giving by the company?

....evidence .....sao lại dùng SHOWN ???

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of their

...of theirs....

 

[Coco99]

...... and less productive....

....evidence .....sao lại dùng SHOWN ???

...of theirs....

Thank you, lúc đấy cuống lên,
Because of less productivity
Has shown
Theirs
^^

 

[ng.htrang2004]

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of theirs?
I think they will have to change their biology timetable => The effect on health => Less time to care for each member in the families
What do you mean that they won't have spare time for their family if they only work for four days? I thought they would have less time being busy or you mean they have to find another job to increase the income from only doing four days a week?
I think if they only work for four days, they will have to work 12 hours a day => Less time to care for each member in the families
The children go to school more than one- third of day so they will have less time to meet their parents much time in a day => They can lie easily, play with friends too much but parents don't know anything...
Only 3 day off, many people will do past time jobs, ...

P/s: Chị tranh biện ghê quá à ... -_-

 

[Coco99]

I think if they only work for four days, they will have to work 12 hours a day

What thought leads you to this conclusion, is it compulsory to work for 12 hours in return to get 3 days off?
I personally think that it depends on the children or if as you said working 12 hours a day, will they work from early morning because you said that it will change their biology and as it has already interrupted the timetable, can the worker say work from 1am to 2pm? E.g Doctor, nurse, those jobs, will the children become naughty and mischievous?

When employees work fewer hours, that could mean they’d also brings home less money.Of course, the employers could increase salaries and per-hour pay ,but there’s no guarantee.(ý nhỏ however phần kết nha chị)

Working 4 days per week allows employees the chance to spend time with family and friends, take time out for themselves, work on new projects, or discover new places. When they do this, they will reduce the stresses. (Làm việc 4 ngày trong tuần cho phép họ có cơ hội dành thời gian với gia đình và bạn bè, dành thời gian cho bản thân, làm việc trong các dự án mới hoặc khám phá những địa điểm mới. Khi họ làm điều này, họ sẽ giảm đi phần nào căng thẳng)

How can they possibly starting on a new project if they have got no money to start with? The bills increase, needing of money increase because of their children. Their childrens are growing, needing more money, the market keeps on loosing their price and especially people with low income, will they be free and to work on their new ideas?

 

[ng.htrang2004]

What thought leads you to this conclusion, is it compulsory to work for 12 hours in return to get 3 days off?
I personally think that it depends on the children or if as you said working 12 hours a day, will they work from early morning because you said that it will change their biology and as it has already interrupted the timetable, can the worker say work from 1am to 2pm? E.g Doctor, nurse, those jobs, will the children become naughty and mischievous?

No one can claim that these children won't become naughty and mischievous

 

[Coco99]

No one can claim that these children won't become naughty and mischievous

Will you be mischievous and being rude, meanie, become a bully? If you have got a well education in the early day and surrounded in a well environment, will you be? Not everyone has to work 4 days for example someone like Santa ^^

#I am asking u ^^

 

[ng.htrang2004]

Will you be mischievous and being rude, meanie, become a bully? If you have got a well education in the early day and surrounded in a well environment, will you be? Not everyone has to work 4 days for example someone like Santa ^^

Em định off nên nói tiếng việt cho nhanh
Cái này còn phụ thuộc vào bố mẹ, bố mẹ quá bận, k quan tâm con, bị bạn bè rủ rê, lôi kéo ...

 

[Coco99]

Em định off nên nói tiếng việt cho nhanh
Cái này còn phụ thuộc vào bố mẹ, bố mẹ quá bận, k quan tâm con, bị bạn bè rủ rê, lôi kéo ...

Vậy em sẽ bị kéo theo dòng bạn như vậy à ^^
Mà Trang quên mất rằng họ sẽ có 3 ngày nghỉ nhá, vd thứ 2, 5, 6, chẳng hạn ^^

 

[Yuhip2608]

Trang, How will it affect the changes the employees that owning families and the timetable of theirs?
I think they will have to change their biology timetable => The effect on health => Less time to care for each member in the families
What do you mean that they won't have spare time for their family if they only work for four days? I thought they would have less time being busy or you mean they have to find another job to increase the income from only doing four days a week?
I think if they only work for four days, they will have to work 12 hours a day => Less time to care for each member in the families
The children go to school more than one- third of day so they will have less time to meet their parents much time in a day => They can lie easily, play with friends too much but parents don't know anything...
Only 3 day off, many people will do past time jobs, ...

P/s: Chị tranh biện ghê quá à ... -_-

each member of the families.......ko dùng in nhé......
Only 3 days off......

How can they possibly starting on a new project if they have got no money to start with? The bills increase, needing of money increase because of their children. Their childrens are growing, needing more money, the market keeps on loosing their price and especially people with low income, will they be free and to work on their new ideas?

đoạn này sửa chút cho bạn nhé:

How can they possibly starting on a new project if they have got no money to start with?

bỏ ON

The bills increase, needing of money increase because of their children

bỏ OF

Their childrens are growing, needing more money, the market keeps on loosing their price and especially people with low income, will they be free and to work on their new ideas?

Their children......

Will you be mischievous and being rude, meanie, become a bully? If you have got a well education in the early day and surrounded in a well environment, will you be? Not everyone has to work 4 days for example someone like Santa ^^

If you have got a well education in the early day and surrounded in a well environment, will you be?

well- educated hoặc good education nha.....
good environment.....

 

[Coco99]

đoạn này sửa chút cho bạn nhé:

bỏ ON

bỏ OF

Their children......

well- educated hoặc good education nha.....
good environment.....

Cảm ơn chị nha, em thế này xong chắc mất 4 điểm r @@