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Đề: 150 words about your hobby
I have had many hobbies since I was a child such as: reading books, eating snacks, watching TV,singing, playing card,etc. Nevertheless, the one I like best is reading books because of some reasons. First and foremost, Books is the most effective cure for my stresses, they bring to me smiles, relaxation, interesting and new emotions. Moreover, books broaden my mind about the outer world, bring about me new and salutary knowledge about the science, biology, geography, education,different cultures,etc. Last but not least, the stories in books nourishes my soul, makes it fair. Because after every story, I learn human lessons and feel like my life more significant. Really speaking, reading books plays a vital role in my life. If you read book not usually or never, start reading more and you will find more and more interested in it.
Đề: 140 words about your hometown
Anyone has a hometown at least and I love my hometown where I was born and grew up very much. It is a small village in the East South of Quang Xuong district, Thanh Hoa province. My grandparents lived here all their life, worked as honesty farmers and raised my parents up to have us as today. The view here is so peaceful and beautiful. There is a beach near my house and many forests along the coast where attached with my childhood. Also, the neighborhood where I live has the large fields, concrete roads and red-tiled houses. Especially, people here are very kind-hearted and helpful. They are always willing to dedicate their life for their relatives, family and hometown. So there is no reason for me not to love them and wherever do I go to, my hometown is always in my heart
 
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Đề: 150 words about your hobby

I have had many hobbies since I was a child such as: reading books, eating snacks, watching TV, singing, playing card, etc. Nevertheless, the one I like best is reading books because of some reasons. First and foremost, Books is the most effective cure for my stresses, they bring to me the smiles, relaxing, interesting and new emotions. Moreover, books broaden my mind about the outer world, bring me about new and salutary knowledge about the science, biology, geography, education, different cultures, etc. Last but not least, the stories in books nourishes my soul, makes it fair. Because after every story, I learn human lessons and feel like my life more significant. Really speaking, reading books, plays a vital role in my life. If you read books not usually or never, start reading more and you will find more and more interested in it.

Đề: 140 words about your hometown

Anyone has a hometown at least and I love my hometown, where I was born and grew up very much. It is a small village in the East South of Quang Xuong district, Thanh Hoa province. My grandparents lived here all their life, worked as honesty farmers and raised my parents up to have us as today. The view here is so peaceful and beautiful. There is a beach near my house and many forests along the coast were attached to my childhood. Also, the neighborhood where I live has the large fields, concrete roads and red-tiled houses. Especially, people here are very kind-hearted and helpful. They are always willing to dedicate their lives for their relatives, family and hometown. So there is no reason for me not to love them and wherever do I go to, my hometown is always in my heart
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