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You want to borrow Hoa's computer. Write an email to Hoa (about 100 words).In your email you should

- Explain why you need to borrow the computer.

- Say how long you will need it for

- Tell Hoa when you will return it.

 

[NGÔ TRÍ TIẾN - ĐÓM]

Dear Hoa
After sending this email, my computer will have to be serviced. At that time I couldn't study anymore, I had an online course next week. If I fail to complete the course, I will miss out on the important knowledge in this course. Can you please lend me your computer until next week? I promise you won't have access to your personal information and folders in that computer. Thank you very much.
Có j anh bổ sung cho e luôn ạ

 

[npan_184]

Dear Hoa !!
Today I'm writing this to you because I want to borrow your computer to make a presentation. I am in the time of making a presentation and my computer has unexpected error, can you lend me the computer because there are only 5 days left to submit. You can lend me your computer for 4 days to finish my homework on time. I guarantee that I will take good care of your computer, if your computer fails then I will be responsible. After 4 days, I will bring the device to my home and deliver it to you. Thank you.

 

[minhloveftu]

Dear Hoa
After sending this email, my computer will have to be serviced. At that time I couldn't study anymore, I had an online course next week. If I fail to complete the course, I will miss out on the important knowledge in this course. Can you please lend me your computer until next week. I promise you won't have access to your personal information and folders in that computer. Thank you very much.
Có j anh bổ sung cho e luôn ạ

Dear Hoa
After sending this email, my computer will have to be serviced. At that time I couldn't study anymore, I had an online course next week. If I fail to complete the course, I will miss out on the important knowledge in this course. Can you please lend me your computer until next week ? (câu hỏi thì phải dùng dấu chấm hỏi nhé) I promise you won't have access to your personal information and folders in ---> on that computer. Thank you very much.

Dear Hoa !!
Today I'm writing this to you because I want to borrow your computer to make a presentation. I am in the time of making a presentation and my computer has unexpected error, can you lend me the computer because there are only 5 days left to submit. You can lend me your computer for 4 days to finish my homework on time. I guarantee that I will take good care of your computer, if your computer fails then I will be responsible. After 4 days, I will bring the device to my home and deliver it to you. Thank you.

Dear Hoa !!
Today I'm writing this to you because I want to borrow your computer to make a presentation. I am in the time of making a presentation and my computer has unexpected error ------->an unexpected error, can you lend me the computer because there are only 5 days left to submit. You can lend me your computer for 4 days to finish my homework on time. I guarantee that I will take good care of your computer, if your computer fails then I will be responsible. After 4 days, I will bring the device to my home and deliver it to you. Thank you.
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