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Some individuals believe raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I accept that this policy is good to some extent, I believe it is not the best because there are much better measures to reduce traffic accidents.
It might be a good idea to increase the minimum age required for driving because of some reasons. Firstly, since younger people are usually less mature and less responsible with their manners, they might not be aware of the importance of following the rules. Therefore, it is reasonable to ban them from travelling on the street to prevent them from breaking the law and causing accidents. Secondly, as older people are more experienced, they can know how to react quickly to handle dangerous situations on the road, while younger ones might not be able to. To illustrate, if the brakes of a car suddenly stop working, a young driver might panic, and accidents are more likely to occur.
However, I would argue that there are much better methods of ensuring road safety. The first one is to have stricter punishments for driving offenders. For example, people who break traffic rules should be required to pay huge fines or be banned permanently from commuting on the street. This makes commuters more likely to respect the law, and traffic accidents can be limited. Another solution is to encourage people to use public transport rather than private vehicles. This can be done by reducing the price and increasing the frequency of buses and tubes to make it more convenient for users.
In conclusion, I believe apart from increasing the legal age for driving, there are more effective ways to make sure that travelling on the street is safe for everyone.
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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. I totally agree.

I think that increasing the minimum legal driving age can help reduce traffic accidents, thus improving the safety of roads. First, young people are unaware of traffic, they tend to drive fast instead of keeping themselves and others safe. They are not mature enough to understand the consequences of the actions they cause. Moreover, they don't have the patience to wait for the signal light. It is very dangerous not only for themselves but also for many others.

In addition, the government should take stricter measures such as: paying a lot of money for red lights or not wearing helmets when participating in traffic. A stronger measure is a prison sentence for acts of alcoholic content, rapid launch, overtaking, causing injury or death, ... These penalties may be more effective.

In conclution, I believe that in addition to increasing reasonable age for driving, there are many ways to ensure that traveling on the road is safe for everyone
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