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Write about your favorite leisure activity of 50 - 60 words.
Last weekend, you visited a popular tourist attraction with your family. Write a short article about your trip for the school magazine (80 - 100 words).

 

[Kim Thừa Quân]

Write about your favorite leisure activity of 50 - 60 words.
Last weekend, you visited a popular tourist attraction with your family. Write a short article about your trip for the school magazine (80 - 100 words).

2 đề bài à???

 

[Kim Thừa Quân]

Write about your favorite leisure activity of 50 - 60 words.

Dàn ý:
What is your favorite activity?
How many hours a day do you play?
Who do you play with?
Your thoughts on that subject?

 

[ng.htrang2004]

Write about your favorite leisure activity of 50 - 60 words.

Các ý cần cho bài viết nhé:

1. What is this activity?
2. Why do you like to do it?
3. When did you start?
4. When do you usually do it?
5. Who do with you? (if)
6. Your feeling

 

[Asuna Yuuki]

Write about your favorite leisure activity of 50 - 60 words.
Nhật tham khảo bài về drawing của Ri nhé...Cấu trúc đơn giản với dễ thuộc lắm...
Drawing is one of my hobbies. I started learning to draw when I was 5 years old. At that time, I didn't like drawing as nơ. I have started this hobby for one year when I was in class 6. To do this hobby, all things which I need are pencils, an eraser, colours and some paper. I can draw anything I want with them. I have shared my hobby with my best friend, who has the same hobby as mine. I often do three steps to make a picture. First, I sketch it. After that, I line it again with a pencil or a ball point pen. Then, I color it. I don't have any fantasy so most of my picture which I draw are duplicated. I find drawing easy and useful, especially it's very interesting. My hobby - drawing plays a very important part in my life, so I think I will continue it in the future

 

[Haru Bảo Trâm]

Cho mình góp ý tí.

Drawing is one of my hobbies. I started learning to draw when I was 5 years old. At that time, I didn't like drawing as now. I have started this hobby for one year when I was in grade 6. All things I need for my hobby are pencils, an eraser, colours and some paper (paper không đếm được). I can draw anything I want with them. I have shared my hobby with my best friend, who has the same hobby as mine. I often do three steps to make a picture. First, I sketch it. After that, I line it again (mình nghĩ again mang ý nghĩa là lặp lại, chỉ cần "line it" thôi) with a pencil or a ballpoint pen (không cách ra nha). Then, I colour it (nếu ở trên bạn dùng tiếng Anh - Anh thì dưới đây cũng vậy, cho nó thống nhất với nhau). I don't have any fantasy so most of my picture which I draw are duplicated. I find out that drawing is easy and useful, especially it's very interesting. My hobby - drawing plays a very important part in my life, so I think (nếu đã khẳng định vẽ là một phần quan trọng thì tại sao lại là "tôi nghĩ"?) I will continue it in the future. (nghĩa là trong tương lai mới tiếp tục, còn bây giờ thì nghỉ sao?)​

Góp thêm ý cuối là bạn sẽ cố gắng để trở thành họa sĩ trong tương lai ^^ Nếu không cũng được, mà mình nghĩ nếu có thì hay hơn. Đã thích phải theo đến cùng ^^
Chỉ là góp ý thôi nhé, sai đừng ném đá T^T

 

[Asuna Yuuki]

Cho mình góp ý tí.

Drawing is one of my hobbies. I started learning to draw when I was 5 years old. At that time, I didn't like drawing as now. I have started this hobby for one year when I was in grade 6. All things I need for my hobby are pencils, an eraser, colours and some paper (paper không đếm được). I can draw anything I want with them. I have shared my hobby with my best friend, who has the same hobby as mine. I often do three steps to make a picture. First, I sketch it. After that, I line it again (mình nghĩ again mang ý nghĩa là lặp lại, chỉ cần "line it" thôi) with a pencil or a ballpoint pen (không cách ra nha). Then, I colour it (nếu ở trên bạn dùng tiếng Anh - Anh thì dưới đây cũng vậy, cho nó thống nhất với nhau). I don't have any fantasy so most of my picture which I draw are duplicated. I find out that drawing is easy and useful, especially it's very interesting. My hobby - drawing plays a very important part in my life, so I think (nếu đã khẳng định vẽ là một phần quan trọng thì tại sao lại là "tôi nghĩ"?) I will continue it in the future. (nghĩa là trong tương lai mới tiếp tục, còn bây giờ thì nghỉ sao?)​

Góp thêm ý cuối là bạn sẽ cố gắng để trở thành họa sĩ trong tương lai ^^ Nếu không cũng được, mà mình nghĩ nếu có thì hay hơn. Đã thích phải theo đến cùng ^^
Chỉ là góp ý thôi nhé, sai đừng ném đá T^T

Có cấu trúc find + doing sth + adj mà =^=
Trừ mấy cái lỗi do Ri nhanh tay hơn nhanh não ra... :v thì mấy cái còn lại đã được sửa rồi mà...
Ví dụ như cái "To do this hobby, all things which I need..."