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Some people say that cell phones have improved modern life. others believe that cell phones have caused many to people. What is your opinion? In about 150 words, write an essay to assert your point of view on this problem.

 

[Yun KM]

Some people say that cell phones have improved mordern life. I agree with this point of view because of many reasons
Firstly, it helps people connect with each other easily by calling and sending message. Secondly, we can get the hotest news in the world throungh the cell phone by reading newspapers on the web. Moreover, people can also relax when listening the music on the cell phones. Beside, we can play games, read stories as well as take photos by using the cell phones
In short, there are many other reasons making me think that cell phones have improuved mordern life but I can't mention all in a short paragraph like this. I'm sure that it plays an important rule in our life
Nguồn : Sưu tầm

 

[doan dieu linh]

Thanks to advanced technology, cell phones have become more and more popular in our life. From my point of view, cell phones have improved modern life. First and foremost, cell phones are a good means of communication. Thanks to them, people can keep in touch with their family, their relatives and their friends regardless of the distances. For example, only by a cell phone can you daily talk to or chat with your friends who live very far away from you. In the second place, cell phones are also good for every angle in life. Thanks to its small size, people can take them everywhere at any time. For example, in business, people can make a deal with their counters by a video chat on a cell phone rather than have a meeting face to face. This is very convenient especially for their partner living abroad. Moreover, cell phones are a necessity for people’s entertainment. To illustrate, after a busy day at work or at school, they can listen to music or play games or watch a movie, as a result, they may feel more relaxed and more energetic to many things such as doing housework, homework and so on later. Last but not least, it is estimated that almost all of the people who use cell phones are teenagers. Therefore, no one can deny that cell phones have minute by minute become indispensable in teenagers’ routine. In reality, cell phones help teenagers to study better and better. For example, before an exam, instead of being up to all night to revise so many lessons they had studied, teenagers can benefit greatly from cell phones. They can try on some tests on the Internet, search for information they want or look into some parts in the lessons which they don’t take in too much. Seeing that the speed of the Internet is very fast, students can acquire a lot of knowledge in a very convenient way. While I appreciate the advantages of cell phones, I think that they also have some drawbacks including having bad effects on people’s mind, causing some diseases and so on. All in all, it is immediately obvious that cell phones make out life more and more modern, hence people should take them into consideration to make our life better and better

 

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Some people say that cell phones have improved modern life. others believe that cell phones have caused many to people. What is your opinion? In about 150 words, write an essay to assert your point of view on this problem.

Our lives have greatly changed thanks to the development of modern technology including mobile phones. Some people believe that mobiles bring only benefits to human beings. However, they also have some disadvantages.
Mobile phones are the best way for us to communicate with each other. We can make a phone call or send a message to our friends, families and colleagues much easier and quicker. In addition, it is more convenient when using mobile phones, especially with people who usually have to move long distances. For example, my father works very far from home and he always comes home at weekend. Therefore, he uses a mobile to keep in touch with my mother and me to make sure everything at home is all right. Sometimes, he calls us to announce that he has to work overtime. In this occasion, using mobile is the quickest and cheapest way of communication because his office does not allow staffs (to) use telephone for private (purposes) and my father does not have enough money to buy a laptop so as to connect the Internet.
Moreover, modern mobiles have a lot of functions. Some mobile phone producers have introduced many types of mobiles which can be used as cameras or video recorders. Most mobiles are designed to replace music players or even computers. Thus, we can not only talk to others but also see them on the screen.
However, mobile phones cause some problems. The first one is the time we spend on them. For instance, young people like students spend much time on talking with friends by mobiles. While adults such as businessmen use mobile phones for its major function , younger usually uses them for listening to music or playing games. Hence, young people depend much on mobiles that some of them become addicted to mobile phones. Furthermore, mobile phones are difficult to clean. According to some latest studies, a mobile phone is much dirtier than a bathroom so that it can make people who own it become sick.
In conclusion, mobiles have changed our lifestyle forever since they were invented. Despite they have some disadvantages, they are essential in modern life.

 

[doan dieu linh]

In recent years, the world has witnessed a booming number of mobile phones. They are dramatically changing the way people contact each other. It is apparent that mobile phones have had a profound influence on personal lives. However, not all the effects of them have been positive.

To begin with, using mobile phones is one of the popular methods for people to communicate, relax and do business. By using call or video phone, text message, we are able to keep in touch together despite a long distance. These days, with the significant development of cell phones, they enable users to entertain such as surfing the internet, sending photos or downloading videos and games. According to research, the number of people accessing the web through mobile phones is now accounting for well over 15% of worldwide internet usage. Furthermore, some Office applications for mobile phones, for example, Microsoft Office are helping employees do their business more effectively.

Although it is true that people are now getting a number of advantages from mobiles, these communication technologies also have several negative impacts. Firstly, using cell phones too much will probably be harmful to human's health as it can increase the risk of brain cancer. In addition, children are spending a lot of their free time using mobiles with the purpose of chatting or playing games. This is time-consuming and affects negatively on their studies. Lacking face-to-face communication is also the result of using mobiles. Instead of going out or dating, many people prefer to stay at home and use their cell phones to connect to others.

In general, mobile phones have both pros and cons to our society. They make people's lives and works become more convenient. Yet, mobile phones still impact badly on health, time and communication of individuals. To avoid these problems, each person should manage the time of using mobiles reasonably. Besides, the awareness of people about the disadvantages of mobile phones should be improved.

 

[doan dieu linh]

Nowadays, the mobile phone plays a major role in our lives, which brings many benefits to us but also contains some drawbacks. Both these sides will discuss in this essay.
Generally, the mobile phone will certainly bring about a lot of advantages. First of all, the mobile phone is considered the quickest means of communication in our daily life, we can contact easily with our friends and our relative wherever by calling or sending messages. Second, the mobile phone is also a means of entertainment for people. We can listen to music and play games on the mobile phone. Moreover, by using the latest apps for smartphones, we can access to the internet to watch Film and check our profile in social networks and update our status wherever we are. Final, If we have a smartphone in hand, our studying becomes more effective such as look up a dictionary, find out many sources of reference on the internet which is useful for studying.
On the other hand, the mobile phone is also many disadvantages. First, telephone user becomes too addicted their mobile phone if they are too depends on it, moreover, the ability of human communication is limited if the mobile phone is more present in some event such as class meetings, on the bus, in the park…some people only focus on their phone without communicating. The use of mobile phones too much will make people take a lot of time, it not only influence study results, makes students distraction but also it is the cause of disease about eyes. Final, we shouldn't use a mobile phone while we are driving because it can lead to traffic accidents.
In conclusion, the mobile phone is necessary for our modern lives today. However, it is helpful or not, which depends on our ways of using it. It will be better if we use its true purpose and at an appropriate time.

 

[Rainy Nhật Hạ]

Bài 1
Nowadays, mobile phone seems to be an indispensable part of our life because of its significant benefits and almost everyone has one for their own, young children are not exception. However, regardless of any purpose, is allowing kids to use mobile phone too soon a sound action? Not few people undoubtedly agree to this idea but the others including me have the opposite opinion. From my viewpoint, cell phone does children more harm than good. First and foremost, it is obvious that they can distract kids’ attention. For instance, numerous games on mobile phone are so attractive that children can’t help sticking their eyes on the screen. Additionally, constant messages let them can’t keep stay focused, they just pay almost all their attention to reply those texts instead of keeping an eye on what they have to do with schoolwork or housework. Second, perhaps it is considered as an effective tool to help children cheat on exams. Young generation relies heavily on modern technology, whenever taking an exam, they don’t strain every nerve to find out the correct answer but simply “google” it. Because of small size of smart-phones, students can bring them along into the exam room without being detected by supervisors. Then they can surf internet or text friends to ask for help. Third, cell phones are able to cause some serious health problems such as insomnia or even cancer. If you put cell phone next to you when you are sleeping, you will be startled by its sudden ring tone or vibration. Many times like that will make it hard for you to fall asleep again, sleepless status also puts you under strain. Besides, according to some recent surveys, if you contact with mobile phone too much you will be more likely to suffer from brain cancer. Finally, they have a negative effect on children’s writing skill. The reason is that when they send message too much, they surely use many symbols, abbreviations, specific codes. Consequently, it’s easy for them to forget how to use grammar structures as well as new words in the right way. All in all, basing on many negative influences above, I venture to say that if we want our kids develop in a better environment, we shouldn’t allow they to approach hi-tech equipment like mobile phone.
Bài 2
Mobile phone is one of the best inventions of the modern life. It brings tremendous convenience and efficiency for people. However, many critics say that this is a negative development. I disagree with this statement. I think the pros of mobile phone far outnumber its cons. Mobile is more convenient for people to keep contact with their kin and their friends. Obviously, it is easily when taking a call rather than sending a handwritten letter to asking after someone’s health, not to mention the case losing the letter. Young people, who live far away their family, thanks to mobile phone can give the information of their parents easily. In some emergencies case, this is really useful. Mobile also helps young people approach the modern life. Through sending message for friends, surfing the Internet, listening the radio on mobile phone the youth can receive a lot of crucial information about their school, national as well as the world news. Additionally, cell phone also provides many entertainment services that can ease some pressure from the youth' studying. It refreshes their mind to be willing to continue facing the stressful classes and life issue as well. To sum up, I emphasis that mobile phone brings many benefits for young people. However, parenthood should instruct their children to use cell phone in the corrective manner in order to they do not abuse mobile phone so much.
Bài 3
In today's world, children are very different from their preceding generation. They start to have mobile phones at early ages while children many years ago were not facilitated with these gadgets. Therefore, there are arising concerns over bad development that may happen to children. In my perspective, cell phones cannot leave serious affects on children. Adversely, these gadgets can help them in their lives. First of all, cell phones help to fulfill their demand. Today, most children are going to schools and study throughout a day. So having a device is vital because they need to contact with their families when they get into trouble or encounter urgent situations. It seems uncomfortable when they are dealing with difficulties and have to borrow others' phones to call for help from outside. Secondly, in the world that innovations are emerging everyday, cell phone has quickly become a fundamental means of telecommunication. Thus, equipping children with a mobile phone facilitates them to get access to the world at large where they can get updated with the latest movement of the world. However, their uses of mobile phones should be controlled by adults since not everything appearing on the screen is good for their well-being. Last but not least, information is being digitalized and uploaded online in stead of being printed on paper. For that reason, a discretion to use mobile for learning purposes is requisite for children. They can use cell phones, especially smartphones, to acquire valuable information on the Internet. For example, nowadays, it is hard to find any method more effective to learn English than study online. There are recordings, videos, lectures available for them to download and learn to speak. To sum up, although mobile phones can help to develop personal skills, it is perilous if children fail to use them sensibly. Adults should take responsibility to tackle bad developments that happen in children
Bài 4
Today more and more young children have mobile phones. Critics say that this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree? What is your own opinion? Now is the digital age so having mobile phones to contact with one another no longer be dreams of many people. Even more children own their private mobile phones, which brings harmful effects, according to critics’ thought. However, in my opinion, the exact problem is the way they use mobile phones, which leads to negative consequences. First of all, mobile phones helps children have more chances to socialize. Children need mobile devices to arrange group study or outdoor activities with their friends. Never has making meeting been easy like now. Children do not have to send letter, they just need sit in sofa and list their favorite friends, then put the buttons to call them. Moreover, children also can use mobile phones to share some hot news with their friends. To children, the events such as giving birth of their dog, the appearance of their idol on TV are very important. Besides, children also need mobile phones to call their parents or their teachers in some cases. If they get lost in a large park without any devices to contact with adults, they will easy to be kidnaped. And having mobile phones to share some difficult problem in school with teachers is necessary to every child. However, children now are attracted by many multi-functions of mobile phones and use them in wrong way, which causes negative effects. They sometimes talk with their friends for a long time on the phone even when having meals or studying, which bothers people in their family and reduces their study’s productivity. Sometimes, parents must pay a huge bill for children’s using mobile phones. Nowadays, there are many games or special applications installed in mobile phones, which makes children addicted and spend lots of their time on playing them. They prefer playing football game with cell phone to going out to play with their friends in real fields. The girls like being a visual doctor on mobile phones more than playing with their dolls. In conclusion, cell phones bring many benefits to children. However, if children’s using mobile phones is out of control of adults, it can lead to many harmful influences on children’s development.
Bài 5
With the popularity of mobile phones, there are more and more children have their own mobile phones nowadays. Although critics say that this will have negative effects on children, I believe the advantages of children having mobile phones outweigh its disadvantages. The obvious argument that children should not have their own mobile phones is it takes children’s time for other activities. For example, by spending time on chatting and texting with friends, children may spend less time on studying. Additionally, playing games on smart phones places is considered to place negative effects on the development of children’s brains. Nevertheless, it is factual that having mobile phones also has many conveniences for both children and their parents. Firstly, it is an excellent tool for parents to manage and control their children. By letting children have mobile phones, parents can always check where their children are and what they are doing. Some smart phones support GPS tracking system which helps to detect any lies of children. Secondly, smart phones are good tools for studying especially foreign languages. They act as MP3 players so that children can listen to foreign languages anywhere. Smart phones also include electronic dictionaries which are very convenient for studying. Finally, mobile phones also help children to connect with more friends. By using mobile phones, children can keep contact with friends who live in far distances. Those relationships will help children with their career when they grow up. In conclusion, as many technology developments, mobile phones have both advantages and disadvantages effects on children. However, I believe that the good side of children having mobile phones outweighs the bad side.

Good luck !!

 

[Lục Hạ Băng]

Nowadays, mobile phones have genuinely played an important role in our lives. Over the world, mobile phone users have risen for years but many of them don't understand the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones correctly. "Does own a mobile phone do more harm than good?" This question has been under controversy.
From the standpoint of a mobile user, I confirm that mobile phones have a great deal of convenience. Besides the similar benefits to the telephone's ones such as helping people living far from the house connect to their relatives, the mobile phone is useful in emergencies. For examples, what will we do if we suddenly see a serious traffic accident while travelling on the road? In my opinion, calling doctors with mobile is the best and fastest way to help the victims.
In addition, many mobile producers have been attempting to improve their products and make them suitable for all kinds of people for a long time. The mobile today should not be simply called "the phone" because a lot of features are added to it. The mobile can function as a music player, like a watch, etc. It means that instead of bringing many instruments, we only need to carry one mobile to watch the time, to listen to music, etc.
Mobiles are helpful but the misuses of them can result in intensive effects. There is a huge number of teenagers using the mobile to download sex movies, to play violent games, …These bad activities are gradually debilitated their brains and make the users have difficulty focusing on study. Some researchers revealed that the mobile's sound has a bad influence on the human's hearing and there is a strong association between the growth in the number of users and the increasing rate of heart disease. So, overusing mobile phones can ruin our health.
In conclusion, I think it is very hard to find out an exact answer to the question. However, mobiles are still necessary for us and our lives would be very mundane if in which there were not mobile phones.
Nguồn: Internet