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Friendship is the bond between two spirit in tune. Indeed, I also have a best mate. This is Kent Nguyen who always beside whenever I need. I first met him while we going to the Cu Chi tunnels organized by the school and he sits next to me. Kent and I go back years .He is 16 years old now, He is a handsome man with cropped hair full of charm and beady eyes. Kent has got a V - triangle face that attracts girls. What is more, He great sense of style so he always looks well - dressesd even in casual clothes.Everybody can see him open - mainded. He is always friendly and loves to have fun. He's got a fantastic sense of humour, understanding me, sincerely. He oftens makes me laugh when I'm sadness and stands by me at hard time. I felt so lucky to have such a friend. His hobby is play soccer and he spend a lot of free time on it. He also enjoys chatting with my friend on the Internet or participating in activites about explore animal life, too. As well as, he not only a good friend but also as my relatives. Although life has changed, but I know that the friendship of us still. Do you belive that friendship eternal ?
 

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Friendship is the bond between two spirit in tune. Indeed, I also have a best mate. This is Kent Nguyen who always beside whenever I need. I first met him while we going to the Cu Chi tunnels organized by the school and he sits next to me. Kent and I go back years .He is 16 years old now, He is a handsome man with cropped hair full of charm and beady eyes. Kent has got a V - triangle face that attracts girls. What is more, He great sense of style so he always looks well - dressesd even in casual clothes.Everybody can see him open - mainded. He is always friendly and loves to have fun. He's got a fantastic sense of humour, understanding me, sincerely. He oftens makes me laugh when I'm sadness and stands by me at hard time. I felt so lucky to have such a friend. His hobby is play soccer and he spend a lot of free time on it. He also enjoys chatting with my friend on the Internet or participating in activites about explore animal life, too. As well as, he not only a good friend but also as my relatives. Although life has changed, but I know that the friendship of us still. Do you belive that friendship eternal ?
He great sense of style so he always looks well - dressesd even in casual clothes.
He great sense of style so he always looks well - dressed even in casual clothes
Everybody can see him open - mainded.
Everybody can see him open - minded
He oftens makes me laugh when I'm sadness and stands by me at hard time.
He often makes me laugh when I'm sad and stands by me at a/the hard time.
He also enjoys chatting with my friend on the Internet or participating in activites about explore animal life, too
He also enjoys chatting with my friend on the Internet or participating in activities about explore animal life, too.
Do you belive that friendship eternal ?
Do you believe that friendship eternal?
Friendship is the bond between two spirit in tune.
Friendship is the bond between two spirits in tune
Indeed, I also have a best mate.
Indeed, I also have the best mate
His hobby is play soccer and he spend a lot of free time on it.
His hobby is playing soccer and he spends a lot of free time on it.
Mình thấy có mấy lỗi chắc là do đánh máy+ sơ suất ...bạn để ý chút là đc nha :D
 
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He is 16 years old now, sửa thành He 16 old now
 

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Hình như là two spirits in tune...

I first met him while we going to
while we were going
tunnels, org...
he sat
to Cu Chi
Kent and I go back years .
Câu này nghĩa là sao bạn nhỉ? ^^ Bạn đánh thiếu gì r :v
more, He great sense of style s
He has great...
dresses ...
through hard time :v
is to play or is playing soc...
spends alot..
my friends...
exploring ....
is not...
take away 'as'
still what?? still going? still there forever?
is enternal...
Mk đóng góp một tí với bài của chị Yuhip trên kia. ^^
p/s Bạn nên nói rõ về một thì, mà ns về thì nào thì dùng đúng ngữ pháp của thì đấy.
Cheers :v
 

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He great sense of style so he always looks well - dressed even in casual clothes

Everybody can see him open - minded

He often makes me laugh when I'm sad and stands by me at a/the hard time.

He also enjoys chatting with my friend on the Internet or participating in activities about explore animal life, too.

Do you believe that friendship eternal?
Mình thấy có mấy lỗi chắc là do đánh máy ...bạn để ý chút là đc nha :D
đoán là goole dịch viết xuống
 
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Hình như là two spirits in tune...


while we were going

tunnels, org...

he sat

to Cu Chi

Câu này nghĩa là sao bạn nhỉ? ^^ Bạn đánh thiếu gì r :v

He has great...

dresses ...

through hard time :v

is to play or is playing soc...

spends alot..

my friends...

exploring ....

is not...

take away 'as'

still what?? still going? still there forever?

is enternal...
Mk đóng góp một tí với bài của chị Yuhip trên kia. ^^
p/s Bạn nên nói rõ về một thì, mà ns về thì nào thì dùng đúng ngữ pháp của thì đấy.
Cheers :v
lần sau e sửa bài e trích cả câu nha....nhìn thế này khó biết thuộc đoạn nào lắm nếu là bài viết dài :D
 
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