writing unit 1

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WRITING UNIT 1: LEISURE ACTIVITY
Task 1: in your opinion, what is the best leisure activity for teenagers? Write a short paragraph about it.

In my opinion, playing sports is the best leisure activity for teenagers. Firstly, playing sports will help teenagers’s health become better and have an ideal body. Secondly, it makes them feel dynamic ,they can entertain and relax after study and work hard when playing sports. In addition, playing sports can help teenagers improve their confidence and they will make many new friends. For these reasons , I think playing sports is best for teenagers
Task 2 : write a paragraph about the free time activity you like best.

Reading books in my free time is the activity I like best. Firstly, reading books gives me new knowledge, improves my concentration and my thinking. Secondly, I always feel happy and relieve stress after study hard when reading books. A good book wiil help me relax and forget the problems in my life. In addition, I feel more confident when communicating because I have learned many skills from books. For these reasons, I think teenagers should read books in their free time.

 

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Theo mình thì một số chỗ nên sửa thành như thế này
WRITING UNIT 1: LEISURE ACTIVITY
Task 1: in your opinion, what is the best leisure activity for teenagers? Write a short paragraph about it.

In my opinion, playing sports is the best leisure activity for teenagers. Firstly, playing sports will help teenagers’s health become better and have an ideal body. (Nếu bạn ghi thế thì vế sau có nghĩa là giúp sức khỏe của thiếu niên có một thân hình lí tưởng => Chữa thành help teenagers to be healthier and enable them to have ideal body ). Secondly, it makes them feel dynamic. They can entertain and relax after studying and working hard when they play sports. In addition, playing sports can help teenagers improve their confidence and they can make many new friends. For these reasons , I think playing sports is the best activity for teenagers.
Task 2 : write a paragraph about the free time activity you like best.

Reading books in my free time is the activity I like best. Firstly, reading books gives me new knowledge, improves my concentration and my thinking. Secondly, I always feel happy and relieve stress after studying hard when I reading books. A good book will help me relax and forget the problems in my life. In addition, I feel more confident when I communicate because I can learn many skills from books. For these reasons, I think teenagers should read books in their free time.[/QUOTE]
Lưu ý : after là giới từ, động từ đứng sau giới từ ở dạng Ving.