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1. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following statement:"Your teenager years are the best years of your life"


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It is often argued that the most fulfilling stage of a person’s life is during adolescence, while others believe that adulthood, despite things like a job, family and money concerns, is better. This essay agrees with the former, rather than the later view. It will first discuss how grown-ups are much less fulfilled than teenagers because of the pressures they are under and then discuss how contented most teenagers are, before coming to the conclusion that the ages of thirteen to eighteen really are the best years of our lives.

Upon reaching maturity people are expected to fend for themselves and this often leads to unhappiness. This is because most adults have rent and bills to pay, as well as a partner and dependents to look after, which more often than not, leads to them doing a job they don’t enjoy in exchange for money. A recent study by Queen’s University, Belfast found that 79% of people would leave their jobs if they didn’t have a mortgage and 64% of people stated that their job made them depressed at some point.

On the other hand, young people are free from these worries because they are often supported financially and free from any real troubles. Most live with their parents who pay for all their needs and the only thing they have to focus on is studying. Research carried out by Cambridge University found that only 29% of 15-16 year old students said they were ‘happy’, but when questioned 10 years later 84% said that they were ‘much happier’ when they were 16.

In conclusion, youth really is wasted on the young because older people are under much more strain when it comes to money and people relying on them.
 
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It is commonly believed that teenage years are the best period in our life. I definitely agree with that statement.
First of all, being teenager means that you aren't already a child but you aren't an adult yet. It is time when you can try some real, adult life but you can also have a lot of fun as you are young enough to play.
What's more, teenagers usually don't have to work, they get money from their parents. It means that they have a lot of time to develop their hobby, try different sports, make new friends etc.
Some people may say that being teenager is boring because you don't have the right to decide about yourself, you have to ask your parents for permission for many things, and you are not allowed to go to some places. That's true but I think teenage life is still interesting enough.
To sum up, I think that teenage years, as every other period in our life has some pros and cons. However, from my point of view the advantages strongly overweight the disadvanteges.

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1.he failed in the examination last year---->he did not pass in the examination last year
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1.he failed in the examination last year---->he did not.......
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3.i started working for the company a year ago----->I've.,....
4.she didn't say a word as she left the room------->she left..
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1. He didn't pass the examination last year.
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4. She left the room without saying a word
 
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