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From very old days, Christmas is well known all around the world for its special features. It is celebrated primarily on December 25th to commemorate the day Jesus was born. People often decorate their house with lights, Christmas trees, and much more, prepare the meals for this special day. Besides, children will hang their Christmas socks with the hope of receiving some lovely gifts from Santa Claus. Christmas day is the day that family members gather together around the fireplace, enjoy the meal, talk, play games in the warm atmosphere. Christmas is one of the most meaningful holidays of the year for people to stay together and take a rest after a hard-working year.
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From very old days, Christmas is well known all around the world for its special features. It is celebrated primarily on December 25th to commemorate the day Jesus was born. People often decorate their house with lights, Christmas trees, and much more, prepare the meals for this special day. Besides, children will hang their Christmas socks with the hope of receiving some lovely gifts from Santa Claus. Christmas day is the day that family members gather together around the fireplace, enjoy the meal, talk, play games in the warm atmosphere. Christmas is one of the most meaningful holidays of the year for people to stay together and take a rest after a hard-working year.
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From very old days, Christmas is famous all around the world for its special features. It celebrated primarily on December 25th to commemorate the day Jesus was born. People often decorate their house with lights, Christmas trees, and much more including prepare the meals for this special day. Besides, children will hang their Christmas socks with the hope of receiving some lovely gifts from Santa Claus. Christmas day is the day that family members gather together around the fireplace, enjoy the meal, talk and play games in the warm atmosphere. Christmas is one of the most meaningful holidays of the year for people to stay together and take a rest after a hard-working year.
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From very old days, Christmas is famous all around the world for its special features. It celebrated primarily on December 25th to commemorate the day Jesus was born. People often decorate their house with lights, Christmas trees, and much more including prepare the meals for this special day. Besides, children will hang their Christmas socks with the hope of receiving some lovely gifts from Santa Claus. Christmas day is the day that family members gather together around the fireplace, enjoy the meal, talk and play games in the warm atmosphere. Christmas is one of the most meaningful holidays of the year for people to stay together and take a rest after a hard-working year.
Tham khảo nhé ^^

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From very old days, Christmas is well known all around the world for its special features. It is celebrated primarily on December 25th to commemorate the day Jesus was born. People often decorate their house with lights, Christmas trees, and much more, prepare the meals for this special day. Besides, children will hang their Christmas socks with the hope of receiving some lovely gifts from Santa Claus. Christmas day is the day that family members gather together around the fireplace, enjoy the meal, talk, play games in the warm atmosphere. Christmas is one of the most meaningful holidays of the year for people to stay together and take a rest after a hard-working year.
AI SỬA DÙM MÌNH ĐI

From very old days, Christmas is well known all around the world for its special features. It is celebrated primarily on December 25th to commemorate the day Jesus was born. People often decorate their house with lights, Christmas trees, and much more, prepare the meals for this special day. Besides, children will hang their Christmas socks with the hope of receiving some lovely gifts from Santa Claus. Christmas day is the day that family members gather together around the fireplace, enjoy the meal, talk, play games in the warm atmosphere .Christmas is one of the most meaningful holidays of the year for people to stay together and take a rest after a hard-working year.

===> Christmas Day is the day when family members gather together under warm fireplaces, enjoy meals, talk, play games in the warm atmosphere.