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Write a topic about "Stay health"
Topic sentence, there are some tip to stay healthy. First, we can do morning excercise after getting up. It helps you hace so much energy to study or work a day. Second, there are many people who put on weight. What can we do? I think we can eat les junk foog, and we eat more fruits and vegetables. So, we can stay in shape and have a good healthy by playing football, playing badminton or cycling in the park. Third, there are many childern like playing computer games, they should play outdoor activies and spend less time sitting in front of the computer. Last, we can take up a hobby because we can relaxed in the free time. In conclusion, this essay says about some tip to stay healthy.
 

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Write a topic about "Stay health"
as you know now, healthy is a very important problem. We can do many things to stay healthy like: Eat less junk food, watch less TV, eat more healthy food, do more exercise,... We also can take part in some outdoor activites, spend less time to sit in front of the computer, if you spend too much time for computer, you will hurt your eyes. Or if you eat too much junk food like : pizza, burger, or somethings like fast food, you will be obesity. But, if you do not eat enough calories for a day, you will be very tired. That is some tips for some person who want stay healthy! Thanks for reading!
 

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Topic sentence, there are some tip to stay healthy. First, we can do morning excercise after getting up. It helps you hace so much energy to study or work a day. Second, there are many people who put on weight. What can we do? I think we can eat les junk foog, and we eat more fruits and vegetables. So, we can stay in shape and have a good healthy by playing football, playing badminton or cycling in the park. Third, there are many childern like playing computer games, they should play outdoor activies and spend less time sitting in front of the computer. Last, we can take up a hobby because we can relaxed in the free time. In conclusion, this essay says about some tip to stay healthy.
Bạn ơi sai chính tả nhé và tip phải là tips nếu là tip thì sẽ là 1 nghĩa khác nhé good healthy là sai nhé phải là good health nhé vì healthy là tính từ nhé :D
 

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Bạn ơi sai chính tả nhé và tip phải là tips nếu là tip thì sẽ là 1 nghĩa khác nhé good healthy là sai nhé phải là good health nhé vì healthy là tính từ nhé :D
Mình biết rồi! Cảm ơn vì đã nhắc mình nhé!
Đôi khi mình hay nhầm "health" và "heathy"
 
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