với đề này thì em cũng có mấy ý như này ạ
mở đoạn thì sẽ nói những câu kiểu như Travelling is now more and more popular for everyone. Many places in the world rely heavily on tourism as a key source of income and employment nowadays, however, tourism can also be a source of problems too.
Tiếp theo mình sẽ nói về các vấn đề mà tourists gây ra ví dụ như environmental problems, steal, draw on the wall, pressure on population,....
ở phần thân bài nếu muốn lấy điểm nhiều hơn mình nên nói thêm solution nữa nhaa
còn với kết bài thì mình có thể dùng các cụm từ như To sum up, to summarize, In conclusion,......hoặc nếu muốn từ ngữ phong phú hoặc đa dạng hơn mình có thể dùng In a nutshell, To put them in a nutshell
đây là bài mẫu mà em viết ra, có gì anh chị tham khảo ạ, em cảm ơn
Everyone know that travelling is now more and more popular for everyone. Many places in the world rely heavily on tourism as a key source of income and employment nowadays, however, tourism can also be a source of problems too. First and foremost, many places in the world rely heavily on tourism as a key source of income and employment nowadays, however, tourism can also be a source of problems too. One of the drawbacks of tourism is the pressure on population. For example, the number of arrival raises the number of people in an area, which causes traffic jams and social vices. Many cities and towns become overcrowded with tourists, their vehicles increase traffic jams as well as air and noise pollution.Besides, tourists consume a lot of local resources such as water, food, energy, etc., which results in many other depressions. Things like ancient buildings, monuments, and temples often struggle to cope with the vast amounts of tourist traffic and they suffer wear and tear or damage.., tourism can also have bad effects on the natural environment. The building of facilities as hotels can damage the natural areas of tourism and destroy wildlife habitats too. Then, the large amount of tourists can rise the amount of pollution and waste in its areas which is caused by developing of traffic and visitors. All of these are really distructive environment in its countries. Commonly, I believe that there are some solution which tourists can do to reduce the worst effects of tourism. If holidaymarker want to go on holiday, they should think where they will go and choose the place which is not overcrowded. Also, they should think how to minimize polution and rubbish if they want to visit and leave some places on their holiday.
bài sắp xếp ý khá lộn xộn ạ