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Germany is a famous and rich country. But it was had a history with many war. And one of the most famous war of Germany is unification of Germany. Back to history, the old kingdom will be Germany is Prussia. We will started when The French First Republic was founded. And if you know little about history of Europe, you will know Napolenic war. During Napolenic war, The Holy Roman Empire was eliminated. The last Emperor of Holy Roman Empire founded Austria-Hungary Empire. But It founded a German Confederation. But Prussia and Austria Empire have many disagreement so they had war. Prussia won a war because they had many train. And Prussia founded North German Confederation. When Otto von Bismarck was a Minister President of Prussia, Prussia had a plan is Prussia occupied many kingdoms of South Germany by war. But France disagreed. Because many kingdoms of South Germany were a friend of France. When France and Prussia have a bad relationship, Spain have no king. Spain very fear about it. So, Spain sent Prussia a letter about need Prince of Prussia was a king of Spain. But France rejected it. So relationship of Prussia and France was very bad. They have a bad relationship until 29th , July, 1870 French Emperor Napoleon III declared war with Prussia. When Kingdoms of South Germany know France will occupy Rhine river, They declare war with France. With technology train, Prussia and Kingdoms of South Germany won a war. They went to Paris and occupied it. Napoleon III surrounded Prussia and accepted arrested by Prussia. He lived like a prisoner to the end of life. Kingdoms of South Germany accepted join with Prussia. France must give Prussia Lorrein and Alsace. Prussia was Kingdom of Germany. In Versailles palace, Otto von Bismarck claimed Wilhelm – Emperor of Prussia was a Emperor of Kingdoms of Germany. So this the end of this paragraph. You can see Germany very tired to unificated Germany. See you again in next paragraph about history.

 

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Germany is a famous and rich country. But it was had a history with many war. And one of the most famous war of Germany is unification of Germany. Back to history, the old kingdom will be Germany is Prussia. We will started when The French First Republic was founded. And if you know little about history of Europe, you will know Napolenic war. During Napolenic war, The Holy Roman Empire was eliminated. The last Emperor of Holy Roman Empire founded Austria-Hungary Empire. But It founded a German Confederation. But Prussia and Austria Empire have many disagreement so they had war. Prussia won a war because they had many train. And Prussia founded North German Confederation. When Otto von Bismarck was a Minister President of Prussia, Prussia had a plan is Prussia occupied many kingdoms of South Germany by war. But France disagreed. Because many kingdoms of South Germany were a friend of France. When France and Prussia have a bad relationship, Spain have no king. Spain very fear about it. So, Spain sent Prussia a letter about need Prince of Prussia was a king of Spain. But France rejected it. So relationship of Prussia and France was very bad. They have a bad relationship until 29th , July, 1870 French Emperor Napoleon III declared war with Prussia. When Kingdoms of South Germany know France will occupy Rhine river, They declare war with France. With technology train, Prussia and Kingdoms of South Germany won a war. They went to Paris and occupied it. Napoleon III surrounded Prussia and accepted arrested by Prussia. He lived like a prisoner to the end of life. Kingdoms of South Germany accepted join with Prussia. France must give Prussia Lorrein and Alsace. Prussia was Kingdom of Germany. In Versailles palace, Otto von Bismarck claimed Wilhelm – Emperor of Prussia was a Emperor of Kingdoms of Germany. So this the end of this paragraph. You can see Germany very tired to unificated Germany. See you again in next paragraph about history.

Germany is a famous and rich country. But it was had a history with many war => wars. And one of the most famous war of => wars in Germany is unification => the unification of Germany. Back to => in history, the old kingdom will be Germany is Prussia. We will started => start when The French First Republic was founded. And if you know little about history => the history of Europe, you will know Napolenic => Napoleonic war. During Napolenic => Napoleonic war, The Holy Roman Empire was eliminated. The last Emperor of Holy => the Holy Roman Empire founded Austria-Hungary => The Austria-Hungary Empire. But It founded a German Confederation. But Prussia and Austria Empire have many disagreement => disagreements so they had war. Prussia won a war because they had many train => trains. And Prussia founded North German Confederation. When Otto von Bismarck was a Minister President of Prussia, Prussia had a plan is Prussia occupied many kingdoms of South Germany by war. But France disagreed. Because many kingdoms of South Germany were a friend of France. When France and Prussia have a bad relationship, Spain have => has no king. Spain very fear about => fears of it. So, Spain sent Prussia a letter about need => the need Prince of Prussia was a king of Spain. But France rejected it. So relationship of => the relationship between Prussia and France was very bad. They have a bad relationship until 29th , July, 1870 French Emperor Napoleon III declared war with Prussia. When Kingdoms of South Germany know France will occupy Rhine => The Rhine river, They declare war with France. With technology train, Prussia and Kingdoms => the Kingdoms of South Germany won a war. They went to Paris and occupied it. Napoleon III surrounded Prussia and accepted arrested by Prussia. He lived like a prisoner to the end of life. Kingdoms of South Germany accepted join with Prussia. France must give Prussia Lorrein => Lorraine and Alsace. Prussia was Kingdom => the Kingdoms of Germany. In Versailles palace, Otto von Bismarck claimed Wilhelm – Emperor of Prussia was a Emperor => an Emperor of Kingdoms => the Kingdoms of Germany. So this the end of this paragraph. You can see Germany very tired to unificated => of unified Germany. See you again in next => the next paragraph about history.

 

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Germany is a famous and rich country. But it was had a history with many war. And one of the most famous war of Germany is unification of Germany. Back to history, the old kingdom will be Germany is Prussia. We will started when The French First Republic was founded. And if you know little about history of Europe, you will know Napolenic war. During Napolenic war, The Holy Roman Empire was eliminated. The last Emperor of Holy Roman Empire founded Austria-Hungary Empire. But It founded a German Confederation. But Prussia and Austria Empire have many disagreement so they had war. Prussia won a war because they had many train. And Prussia founded North German Confederation. When Otto von Bismarck was a Minister President of Prussia, Prussia had a plan is Prussia occupied many kingdoms of South Germany by war. But France disagreed. Because many kingdoms of South Germany were a friend of France. When France and Prussia have a bad relationship, Spain have no king. Spain very fear about it. So, Spain sent Prussia a letter about need Prince of Prussia was a king of Spain. But France rejected it. So the relationship of Prussia and France was very bad. They have a bad relationship until 29th , July, 1870 French Emperor Napoleon III declared war with Prussia. When Kingdoms of South Germany know France will occupy Rhine river, They declare war with France. With technology train, Prussia and Kingdoms of South Germany won a war. They went to Paris and occupied it. Napoleon III surrounded Prussia and accepted arrested by Prussia. He lived like a prisoner to the end of life. Kingdoms of South Germany accepted join with Prussia. France must give Prussia Lorrein and Alsace. Prussia was Kingdom of Germany. In Versailles palace, Otto von Bismarck claimed Wilhelm – Emperor of Prussia was a Emperor of Kingdoms of Germany. So this the end of this paragraph. You can see Germany very tired to unificated Germany. See you again in next paragraph about history.

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Germany is a famous and rich country. But it was had a history with many wars. And one of the most famous wars in Germany is the unification of Germany. Back to history, the old kingdom will be Germany is Prussia. We will start when The French First Republic was founded. And if you know little about the history of Europe, you will know Napoleonic war. During the Napoleonic war, The Holy Roman Empire was eliminated. The last Emperor of the Holy Roman Empire founded the Austria-Hungary Empire. But It founded a German Confederation. But Prussia and Austria Empire have many disagreements so they had war. Prussia won a war because they had many trains. And Prussia founded North German Confederation. When Otto von Bismarck was a Minister-President of Prussia, Prussia had a plan is Prussia occupied many kingdoms of South Germany by war. But France disagreed. Because many kingdoms of South Germany were a friend from France. When France and Prussia have a bad relationship, Spain has no king. Spain very fears about it. So, Spain sent Prussia a letter about need Prince of Prussia was a king of Spain. But France rejected it. So the relationship between Prussia and France was very bad. They have a bad relationship until 29th, July 1870 French Emperor Napoleon III declared war with Prussia. When Kingdoms of South Germany know France will occupy the Rhine river, They declare war with France. With technology train, Prussia and Kingdoms of South Germany won a war. They went to Paris and occupied it. Napoleon III surrounded Prussia and accepted arrested by Prussia. He lived like a prisoner to the end of life. Kingdoms of South Germany accepted join with Prussia. France must give Prussia Lorrain and Alsace. Prussia was the Kingdom of Germany. In Versailles palace, Otto von Bismarck claimed Wilhelm – Emperor of Prussia was an Emperor of Kingdoms of Germany. So this the end of this paragraph. You can see Germany very tired of unified Germany. See you again in the next paragraph about history.