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Mình có 1 bài tập viết đoạn luận văn bằng tiếng anh vs chủ đề "chuẩn bị cho Asian Games ở VN" để kiểm tra nói. Sau đây là bài chuẩn bị của mình, mong mn đọc và góp ý những lỗi sai
"Today I will tell you about the preparation for the Asian Games.To prepare for the coming Asian Games, we have a lot of thing to do. First of all, we will build one more National Stadium, some sports building and car parks. Secondly, National Sports Centres and local stadiums will be upgraded because they are not in good condition. Next, we will widen training areas and roads to sports buildings. After that, hotel, guest houses with modern facilities are going to be equiped. To prepare for Asian Games on the radio and TV, we will recruit volunteers to serve the Game (university teachers and students with good English). Finally, we will hold competition to choose an official song.
 

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Mình có 1 bài tập viết đoạn luận văn bằng tiếng anh vs chủ đề "chuẩn bị cho Asian Games ở VN" để kiểm tra nói. Sau đây là bài chuẩn bị của mình, mong mn đọc và góp ý những lỗi sai
"Today I will tell you about the preparation for the Asian Games.To prepare for the coming Asian Games, we have a lot of thing to do. First of all, we will build one more National Stadium, some sports building and car parks. Secondly, National Sports Centres and local stadiums will be upgraded because they are not in good condition. Next, we will widen training areas and roads to sports buildings. After that, hotel, guest houses with modern facilities are going to be equiped. To prepare for Asian Games on the radio and TV, we will recruit volunteers to serve the Game (university teachers and students with good English). Finally, we will hold competition to choose an official song.

Today I will tell you about the preparation for the Asian Games.To prepare for the coming Asian Games, we have a lot of things to do. First of all, we will build one more National Stadium, some sports buildings and car parks. Secondly, National Sports Centres and local stadiums will be upgraded because they are not in good condition. Next, we will widen training areas and roads to sports buildings. After that, hotel, guest houses with modern facilities are going to be equipped. To prepare for Asian Games on the radio and TV, we will recruit volunteers to serve the Game (competition) (university teachers and students with good English). Finally, we will hold the competition to choose an official song
Đây là ý kiến của mình ^^
 
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