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Hãy viết đoạn văn nói về lợi ích và tác hại của công nghệ qua đoạn hội thoại dưới đây:
Nick: Hey, Duong and Chau, do you remember Dr. Nelson's talk science and technology?
Chau: Yes. He said that science and technology would help us solve the world's problems in the future.
Nick: Right. I think world hunger is a problem now, and develops ways to get high yieds in farming will help feed the growing population on earth.
Duong: Good point. Also we may be able to live on other planets, m overcrowding won't be a problem any more...
Nick: And I like the idea of having lessons at home with a robot, and cc the Internet.
Duong: And no more paper books. We'll have e-books, and tablets for everything.
Chau: That doesn't sound like a benefit to me. I'd still want to go to school. I'd like to communicate face-to-face with teachers and friends. In my opinion, science and technology will bring new problems to people.
Duong: Like what?
Chau: Well, robots will bring unemployment, and high yieds in farming may destroy the environment and sending people to Mars may cause pollution...
Nick: You're right: so many new proplems...
@Phạm Dương
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[minhthu2k5]

Mở: giới thiệu chung về công nghệ
Thân: Công nghệ thực sự rất có ích cho con người như....., Song bên cạnh đó cũng có những mặt hại như.....(nêu ra nhé, dựa vào đoạn hội thoại trên). Bạn cũng có thể nêu ra một vài ví dụ về lợi ích và tác hại của nó
Kết: Công nghệ là rất có ích nhưng cũng có hại
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[Hoang Anh Tus]

Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time.
Smartphones enable people to stay in touch, even over long distances, and they are relatively safe and reliable to use. There are devices that people can use to communicate with plus at the other end of the planet and getting and keeping in touch with other people is very easy.
The disadvantages of smartphone is that it means people no longer need to meet in person as much, and interpersonal relationships are suffering worldwide because people are communicating through a small handheld device. A lot of people have smartphones and they use them almost semi-continuously, including in public settings when they could be making new friends, finding new lovers, and interacting with their current friends.
The advantages of the internet are that people can communicate over vast distances and can gain access to information and get answers to their questions very quickly. The disadvantage is that the Internet isn’t moderated in the way that people think and lots of it is filled with misinformation and outright lies.
Even brand-named websites which have a lot of trust are not accountable for what appears on their own websites. Even respected and branded news sites have stories that have passed through many people’s hands and originally started as lies with zero accountability throughout the dissemination process.
In conclusion, technology brings about such a lot of advantages. However, it’s people’s duty to use it in an appropriate way to make it beneficial.
Nguồn: lazi

 

[harder & smarter]

Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time.
Smartphones enable people to stay in touch, even over long distances, and they are relatively safe and reliable to use. There are devices that people can use to communicate with plus at the other end of the planet and getting and keeping in touch with other people is very easy.
The disadvantages of smartphone is that it means people no longer need to meet in person as much, and interpersonal relationships are suffering worldwide because people are communicating through a small handheld device. A lot of people have smartphones and they use them almost semi-continuously, including in public settings when they could be making new friends, finding new lovers, and interacting with their current friends.
The advantages of the internet are that people can communicate over vast distances and can gain access to information and get answers to their questions very quickly. The disadvantage is that the Internet isn’t moderated in the way that people think and lots of it is filled with misinformation and outright lies.
Even brand-named websites which have a lot of trust are not accountable for what appears on their own websites. Even respected and branded news sites have stories that have passed through many people’s hands and originally started as lies with zero accountability throughout the dissemination process.
In conclusion, technology brings about such a lot of advantages. However, it’s people’s duty to use it in an appropriate way to make it beneficial.

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Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time. For example the invention of smartphones. Smartphones enable people to stay in touch, even over long distances, and they are relatively safe and reliable to use. There are devices that people can use to communicate with a plus at the other end of the planet and getting and keeping in touch with other people is very easy.
The disadvantages of a smartphone are that it means people no longer need to meet in person as much, and interpersonal relationships are suffering worldwide because people are communicating through a small handheld device. A lot of people have smartphones and they use them almost semi-continuously, including in public settings when they could be making new friends, finding new lovers, and interacting with their current friends. In conclusion, technology brings about such a lot of advantages. However, it’s people’s duty to use it in an appropriate way to make it beneficial.

 

[Hoang Anh Tus]

Đã cắt nhỏ bài của bạn ở trên và chỉnh sửa 1 số chỗ nhé
Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time. For example the invention of smartphones. Smartphones enable people to stay in touch, even over long distances, and they are relatively safe and reliable to use. There are devices that people can use to communicate with a plus at the other end of the planet and getting and keeping in touch with other people is very easy.
The disadvantages of a smartphone are that it means people no longer need to meet in person as much, and interpersonal relationships are suffering worldwide because people are communicating through a small handheld device. A lot of people have smartphones and they use them almost semi-continuously, including in public settings when they could be making new friends, finding new lovers, and interacting with their current friends. In conclusion, technology brings about such a lot of advantages. However, it’s people’s duty to use it in an appropriate way to make it beneficial.

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