should teenagers spend more time on such cultural activites as enjoying music or theatre and less time on sport? why or why not
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1. I now will define the topic in my own opinion. Should us teens be spending more time on music and theatre which are part of cultural activities or spending less time on sport? Firstly, I may say that the topic is incorrect as some sports are part of culture activities. Secondly, I may say that as the topic isn't correct, this is done in discussion. I am may wrong in reading the topic!
2. (Theo cách define khác)
- Sport is better as you can excersise.
- Sport involve in our daily life as it gives us strength to do many things.
- Helps you grow.
- Using too much technology (to play music) can damage some parts of your body due to its radiation.
- Lastly: You shouw combine both music and sport as then it will be balance.
P/s Nếu bạn muốn tớ hoàn thành đoạn 2, tại tớ đang gấp, nhắn tớ 1 câu ^^
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