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Đề bài: Do you think it is hamful for school students to use social network

 

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Đề bài: Do you think it is hamful for school students touse social network

Hình như đề bài đúng ra phải là "Do you think it is harmful for school students to use social network?", phải không?

 

[Mai Thiện]

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The Internet is a global information system. Nowadays, the internet is popular everywhere in the world. The Internet provides many useful utilities for users but besides that it also has negative.: Children can connect to these websites that are for adult only. They can see the information which is not good. This is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children's healthy mental life.
Another drawback, today, Internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. These viruses create different problems in your computer .Viruses that can attack your privacy and get some information about you. It’s hard to predict what will happen if you were hacked the account information.
The next drawback is accuracy of information. A lot of information stored is stored on the websites. Some information may be incorrect or not. Sometimes you may be confused.
Another problem is the wastage of times. A lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the Internet. Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or to play games.
At home and offices, many people use Internet without any positive purpose.
In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of the Internet, Depend on you, it will be the advantages or disadvantage. You should balance study and play.

 

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Trai Họ Nguyễn, I think you can choose it in positive and negative but in this case, I'll choose positive Is this an essay or just a big write?

Social Media is a good way for students to chat, chill and have fun outside the school.
Kids can express themselves, showing off their favourite song lyrics or posting pictures of their new outfit. In fact, it has become so much a part of people's lives that you can learn someone's life story just by checking their page. Their friends, likes and dislikes, relationship status, phone number, address…everything.
You can share your feelings and your mental stresses - and it is a great way to entertain yourself after a busy daily routine.
It also makes it a lot easier to keep in touch with family and friends, especially if they live far away. But you can also make new friends by connecting with friends of friends that you might not know. In another way, you might get in trouble with social media by strangers, if they keep annoy you, you can block them, easy. With some kids' ve been a bully, it is really hard to make new friends and engage in conversation at school, but on social medias, they can talk to whoever they like, make friends and even can chat to students in their class. Yes, mum and dad do worry about your security by chatting and playing with strangers but it is also a good way to learn how to defend yourselves by not posting stupid comments, upload personal pictures too much and many other reasons you'd only know if you've been using social media. In conclusion, it is not good things to use social media too much but you can still see some good points by using Social network. Tham khao nha