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Nowadays, more and more people choose to live in the city. In this essay, I will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
It can't be denied that living in the city has many benefits. First of all, if we live in the city, we will have many chances get the developing science and technology. It means that we will have more job opportunities and broaden our knowledge more easily. Secondly, we will have many different ways to spend our free time. There are a lot of theatres, concerts and other kinds of entertainment. There is always a lot to do and visit There are a lot of possibilities of shopping. In various shopping centres and galleries you can buy whatever you want. What is more, a big city is a potential market for trading activities, so we can earn more money to provide our family a comfortable life
Besides advantages, living in the city brings to us a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, a problem about which everyone is worrying is environment. The increase of factories based on industrialization and modernization has severely polluted environment. Smoke from factories' chimneys not only pollutes the air but also makes people get many serious cancers. Sewage is bumped into rivers without being purged, which threatens underwater ecosystems. The second drawback of living in the city is society's vices such as drug addiction. Young people. especially the students, are easily spoiled by bad habits. If people use up all the money, they can't control themselves and even become robbers or murders. Moreover, a problem that many people living in the city have is heartlessness. With some people, it's not worth being worried and it has no effect on our life, people are too busy to care for any others. But if more and more people become heartless, the society will be worse, no one cares another one, they live boring lives, every purposes became meaningless, without love, sympathy and many other good things.
There are good things as well as bad thing of living in the city. However, I strongly believed that advantages outweigh disadvantages. If people know how to live and enjoy their life, living in the city is one of the most interesting things that people want to experience.
 
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em nghĩ anh nên tự làm trước, sau đó đăng viết tiếng anh đó của anh lên, rồi mọi người sẽ sửa lỗi cho anh
Làm như vậy anh sẽ tiến bộ hơn đấy
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Living in the city is perfect selection for many people. Because of some advantages. Firstly, living in the city is very convenient. Because there are many thins such as supermarkets, restaurants,....So you don't need to drive for a long time in order to go shopping or work. You also can go there by public transport such as taxi, buses,... And it's a lot easier to enjoy nihts out because you don't have to worry about missin the train or bus.Secondly, public transportation is a rat benefit to live in the city. Trains, busus,... are effective method to move from your hose to other places. Because it is very cheap, it can save money for you.Nowadays, some cities encourae peple tp rike a bike to protect the environment. Last but not least, cities are the cetre of culture. It can bring great opportunities for you. You can find atr galleries, musuens, ... everywhere. So you can enjoy activities you like. In conclusion, living in the city is good selection.
 
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Trong câu: You can find atr galleries, musuens, ... everywhere. So you can enjoy activities you like. In conclusion, living in the city is good selection. Bạn viết sai từ atr và musuens phải là art và museum
Trong câu: Trains, busus,... are effective method to move from your hose to other places. Because it is very cheap, it can save money for
từ busus viết sai phải là buses nếu nó là số nhiều
Câu Because there are many thins such as supermarkets, restaurants,....
sai từ thins phải là things mới đúng nhé
Lần sau chú ý chính tả tiếng anh nhé
 
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