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Some people say that the health is more important than money.Write a paragraph to support your idea
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Health is more important than money is a positive and open-minded idea. There is an old proverb “Health is better than wealth” which demonstrates that many people in previous generations has understood that money is needed, so as our health. It is even more important than money. Money can not give us everything but health can. With a strong health, we can conquer and achieve no matter how hard the goal is. If you have cancer or grave diseases, your money is useless. Because money cannot heal you up mentally and physically and you will not enjoy comforts. Therefore, that is why I agree that health is more important than money.

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Health is more important than money is a positive and open-minded idea. There is an old proverb “Health is better than wealth” which demonstrates that many people in previous generations has understood that money is needed, so as our health. It is even more important than money. Money can not give us everything but health can. With a strong health, we can conquer and achieve no matter how hard the goal is. If you have cancer or grave diseases, your money is useless. Because money cannot heal you up mentally and physically and you will not enjoy comforts. Therefore, that is why I agree that health is more important than money.

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Health is more important than money is a positive and open-minded idea. There is an old proverb “Health is better than wealth” which demonstrates that many people in previous generations have understood that money is needed, so as our health. It is even more important than money (??? thiếu sự liên kết ý). Money can not give us everything, but health can (Nghe câu Có tiền mua tiên cũng được chưa em?). With robust health, we can conquer and achieve, no matter how hard the goal is. If you have cancer or grave diseases, your money is useless. Because money cannot heal you up mentally and physically, and you will not enjoy comforts (nhưng nó sẽ giúp em sống lâu hơn 1 chút, và có lẽ 1 kì tích nào đó xảy ra và ngta chữa lành thì sao? Con người luôn kì vọng vào cái gọi là kì tích, chỉ cần có thời gian). Therefore, that is why I agree that health is more important than money.
 
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