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Bingbongirl

Hi everyone! Welcome to our special trip!

Today, I'd like to take you to a very interesting destination, Binh Dinh. Yes, Binh Dinh-my beloved country! Are you ready? OK, Let's go!

As far as you know, Binh Dinh is located in the south-central coast ,which is full of sunlight and wind in Viet Nam, about 1000 kilometres north of Ha noi Capital and more 600 kilometres south of HCM city . it now occupies about 6.0244.4 km2 , with a population of more than one million . Here is also the fatherland of famous people such as:Emperor Quang Trung-Nguyen Hue, Xuan Dieu, Han Mac Tu, Che Lan Vien, Dao Tan....But Binh Dinh is called by a popular name-the martial arts land.

Our province is divided into 10 districts: An Lao, An Nhon, Hoai An, Hoai Nhon, Phu Cat, Phu My, Tuy Phuoc, Tay Son, Van Canh and Vinh Thanh. The young harbour city, Quy Nhon, which is the capital city surrounded by beautiful and long beaches, provides us with much seafood and money from tourism.

Now, I will show you one of the most beautiful sites of Binh Dinh, Ham Ho. To the north of Quy Nhon, along highway 19 about an hour, we will arrive at the fairy-land. Then, you have to walk for 30 minutes to get there. Now, before your eyes are great and imposing mountains, big and small rocks with different shapes. Murmuring stream runs through the cruggy terrains. Four sides are dizzily towering mounts, primeval forests, deep blue sky..All make Ham Ho become a heaven on the ground

Not far from Ham Ho is a museum which is the place to worship the national hero, Quang Trung - Nguyen Hue. Each year, on the 5th in lunar calendar, people from all parts come here to celebrate the thunderous victory against Thanh royal dynasty. In here we also contemplate many beatiful sites as well as historical monuments such as : Cham temples, emperor rampart, Han Mac Tu relic....
Now,if you were hungry, why don’t we enjoy special food of our country? There are many specialities such as: Bau Da wine, banh hoi, coconut cakes from the country of coconuts-Tam Quan, Bun Song Than...But the most delicious food I want to tell you is Banh It. Banh It is made from "la gai" and green beans.It is wrapped by the leaves of banana trees.Once you try sample Banh It, I'm sure that you will remember and return to this place. Banh It is also used in special occasions such as: tet, festivals and you can buy them as presents for your family and relatives..And in our province, there is a tower called Banh It temple. It's so interesting! Do you think so?
There are so many things I want to introduce to you about Binh Dinh. If you come here, you will be also impressed by the people who are always friendly and helpful. How about you? If you find it interesting, come here, I am very pleased to be a tour guide to show you around here.!!! Thanks for listening!
Ps:quiet good.

 

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Narcissus234

Hometown each one
Just as a mother only
If anyone does not remember the homeland
will not become mature

hello my friends! As you know , this is the poem written by Do Trung Quan which talks about the hometown. When I read it , I were moved to tears.I think this poem is wonderful, so I like it . Am I right?

i think you're like me, because during your childhood , you’ll always bring the pictures of your native land, it may be simple, beautiful or imposing. Of course,it’s always kept in deep in your heart and with me, Tay Ninh province is the place like that

I’m very glad to introduce the place where I was born, have grown up and learnt many things which are useful to you. That place suffused with sunlight and the green of trees . of course the place I’d like to tell you is Tay Ninh.

As you know, tay ninh, which is one of 64 provinces in Vietnam, located in the southeastern of our country. Tayninh is devided into eight districts : Tanbien, Duongminhchau. Chauthanh,Hoathanh,Bencau,Godau,trangbang, tan chau- where I am living, and Tay Ninh town, encompasses the towns and much of the surrounding farmland
For a long time, Ba Den mountain has become the symbol of my native land. That mountain is the highest mountain in the South of Vietnam with a height of 986 meters. It is far from Tay Ninh about 11 km to the NorthEast and 106 km from Ho Chi Minh City. It is a vestigial and famous landscape covering an area of more than 24 km2. Ba Den Mountain is also called Black Lady Mountain. According to the legends, The beauty - Ly Thi Thien Huong, Black Lady, was forced to marry the son of a rich mandarin while her true love was fighting against the aggressors. Rather than marrying a man she did not love, she threw herself from the mountain. Several shrines and pagodas were built in the mountain as well as in the caves. Ba Hang Pagodas has attracted many pilgrims during the New Lunar Year and Vu Lan Festivals. Ba Den Mountain was the place where the headquarters of the liberation force of South Vietnam were located. During the war time, many tough battles were fought in that area and maybe because of that reason, this mountain is a symbol of the conflict in this area along the Cambodian Border.if you have an occasion, I think you should go to tay ninh,climb to that mountain and visit the pagodas in there, It is believed that your dream will come true if you pray at there . But I think it isn't the main reason, on the teachers’ day,my class climbed to Ba Den mountain. I loved the feeling when I was standing at the highest of the mountain, like the feeling of having freedom, when you and the sky are one. I think if you were me, you wouldn't want to come back home. ( just kidding !)
If you are the child on the south of Vietnam,you’ll know Dau tieng lake which is also a beautiful place. At here, the windy can touch your hair,so the weather is cool, and this lake is also helpful for the farmers in the drought days
Although the people live here have many religions,Tay Ninh is the most famous for being the home of the cao dai religion, an indigenous Vietnamese faith that includes the teachings of the major world religions. The Cao Dai religion’s Holy See, built between 1933 and 1955, is located around 5 km to the east of Tây Ninh’s town centre, where is home of the cao dai religion.

because tayninh is the home of caodai religion, I think that in the mid-autumn festival, there are many people even who come from others provinces also go to tayninh to watch rong nhang festival. although my religion is Buddhism, I like watching that festival. in that festival, there are dragons, candles, incense , and those items are very attractive.
According to the travellers, If you go to my native land, you’d go to trang bang-which is famous for banhtrang, a Speciality of this area. This food is processed by the clever hands of inhabitant in here. beautiful, tasty, original are words you can use to describe banhtrang, which is the food which can not absent from the menu of the restaurants or the meals of people in my fatherland. of course, you can go to others districts because everywhere in my native land are also beautiful places . Besides , you can go to Tan chau, I think I will become your guide. ( I promise if you come here ).
Although Tayninh is the place of the cambodia-Vietnamese frontier, I believe that with the favor of natural, the laborousness and the intelligence of everybody in here, tayninh will get better . finally, I hope you will come to my native land to prove what I say to be true
Welcome to Tay ninh
Ps: you can do better.

 

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Mrs.english

Mrs.english

Hello everybody,
I’m Chau, I’m from Hue City. Today, I’ll tell you something about my hometown_ Hue.

Hue is one of the imperial capitals of Vietnam. Hue is an important cultural, educational and heath care centre of Vietnam. Thanks to its royal architecture decated to 13 Nguyen Kings including clusters of royal palaces, citadels, shrines, pagodas and mausoleums, Hue has been known worldwide. Hue was recognized by the UNESCO as a World Heritage Site.

The history of Vietnam development, or Thua Thien Hue or Thuan Hoa – Phu Xuan – Hue as weel is considered a long process … In 1036, Princess Huyen Tran, King Tran Nhan Tong’s daughter, had to leave to become the princess of the Champa nation: King Che Man gave away the two provinces of O and Ri as a wedding present. The following year, King Tran changed the name for these two provinces to Thuan and Hoa. Thua Thien Hue became the convergence point of two cultures, one of Oriental people and the other of local ethnic people.

Thua Thien Hue is located in the Central Region of Vietnam, a sunny and windy land. On this narrow strip of land, the natural topography is very complex with dense jungles, high mountains, hilly areas, plains, lagoons and coastal areas. The climate in the tropical and monsoon area exhibits unclear between summer and winter. There are some months of the year we suffer from heavy rains, storms and the cold.

What do you know about Hue? Beautiful landscapes? Foods? Or people?

Hue is a tourism centre of Vietnam. People say Hue is beautiful and they want to visit Hue. I have lived in Hue for a long time, but I have just got to love Hue. I like to sit on a boat and see Huong river. If you go from downstream to upstream, you’ll find something interesting. Thien Mu Pagoda on Ha Khe Hill, or the mausoleums of Dong Khanh, Gia Long, or sand dunes. Everything you see can make you love Hue more…

Visiting Hue, you can’t forget delicious dishes, such as: Bun Bo, Com Hen, Nem Chua or Che. They’re really good! Beside the popular dishes, Hue is also famous for royal food. If you want to try them, you can pay 250 thousands dong spending a night in the Palace, becoming a King or Queen and eating the great royal food! We call it “The Palace by Night”

“ A beauty only belongs to Hue, something tender, something thoughtful”. Hue people, especially Hue women, are widely known to be tender and lovely. They look charming with aodai and nonla. The images of the aodai with nonla inspire by many poets and musicians…

There are many things about Hue, an essay or a speech is not enough to tell you. Just come here, you can feel Hue’s soul, to know how dreamlike Hue is.

Hope you enjoy and know more about Hue, “my love”!

Thanks for listening!
ps: good.

 

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em_be_keo_mut

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[FONT=&quot]Hi every body,I'm from Ha Noi.capital , which is very famous.So I pride on introducing about my city.No one don’t know Ha Noi. It is located in the north of the country , belongs to Red river Delve so it is very fertile. Ha Noi is the capital of Vietnam.It is a economical centre and a wonderful destination of tourists.So every year has a lot of tourists to visit Vietnam. This provides us with much money from tourism . Ha Noi is famous for many beautiful sites such as: One Pillar Pagoda, Temple of Literature , water parks , Thu Le zoo, ........espacially , thirty six streets. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]You can kn [/FONT][FONT=&quot]ow more about ancient Ha Noi here .Most people like to go to places of entertainment but I want to go for a walk on streets in the afternoon Fall.It is interesting. What about you…?
If once you arive in Ha Noi, you will be impressed by people here . They are friendly and good-natured. Oh ! Why don't you pay a visit to Ha Noi? Are you ready ?
Ok . let's go......
As far as you know , ha Noi is devided into 10 districts : Ba Dinh , Cau Giay, Dong Da, Ha Dong, Hai Ba Trung , Hoan Kiem, Hoang Mai, Long Bien , Tay Ho and Thanh Xuan,
Now, I will show one of the most especial sites of Ha Noi, Dong Da mound . Ìf you visit here in spring, you can join Dong Da festival. it is very interesting . It lasts three days. On this occasion , there are a number of visitors to visit here.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot].If you don’t like traditional festivals,you can go to the entertainment as Thu Le park,swimming pools ,clubs,….It is wonderful and exciting , too.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Or if you want tranquility, you can visit pagoda or go for a walk around lake,on streets .Specically,when you visit Ha Nọi you had better go to Uncle’Ho mausoleum.
And this time if you visit Ha Noi you can join Great hall of thousand-year Thang Long-Ha Noi.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Ha Noi is also well-known for many foods such as: Thanh Tri stuffed pancake, grilled fish , Com lang Vong, Trang Tien ice-cream .......But the most delicious foof I want to offer you is rice noodle soup with beè. It is made from noodle , beef, soup and additive such as :
galic; onion ......[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]" pho Ha Noi '' has a special status unlike any other food on all over the world. It is very Vietnamese. And it was named as one of the world by Top5 streetfood globalpost.
[/FONT]In addition,you can enjoy box tomorrow.A dish is very dilicious.I think it is a dish that most gril(hok có từ này ) enjoys. In this summer Ha Noi is an idea destination. Now,Don’t think let’s go Ha Noi.If you don’t want regret.And I always wait you,I will a good guide.
Ha Noi welcome you!!!!!!!^_^
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Đây là bài hoàn chỉnh ! còn bài kiểm tra và sửa lại thì c cần tớ send nha! dù sao thì mem cũng đọc bài đã sửa rùi mà@ [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Ps: try better.[/FONT]

 

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Hnstudent

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[/FONT][FONT=&quot]Hello every one, I am very glad to introduce my homeland to you. Born and grown up in Thai Binh – the land has thickness of history is my great pride. Thai Binh is a province located in the southern Red River Delta, It is devided into 7 districts: Vu Thu, Kien Xuong, Tien Hai, Dong Hung, Thai Thuy, Quynh Phu and Hung Ha.
Have you heard the song “Bai ca nam tan’'? This is thesong composed to encourage Thaibinhers in years of resistance. In the war, with Vietnamese people, Thaibinhers bravely carried out a war of resistance against the French colonialists as well as American empire. Many died and their labors were recognized. They are Nguyen Thi Chien, Chi Hai Nam Tan, Tran Lam, Nguyen Duc Canh and so on. Everytime someone tells about them, I feel proud of being a child of Thai Binh.
Going with the development of nation, my homeland is changing, too. Today, there are more and more high houses replacing old houses which are over 60 years. However, I still see simple things. Red River is still nice as I was a child. I had our childhood with my friends on it. When the floods came, we often stood on dykes to view it and played together in water on its bank. And when the floods were over, we played together in lands full of green grass near by it. Now I am a teenager, not a child. However, there is no change. Red River is still close to children in my village. They play together near by its bank as we used to. No one knows when it became a part of Thaibinhers’ childhood. Like other rivers, Red River regularlysupplies big paddy fields and corn fields with water and alluvium. Thanks to the valuable amount of them, the farmers have bumper crops every year.
Traveling to Thai Binh, you will have opportunity to visit many traditional crafts villages such as Vu Hoi vermicelli village (Vu Thu district), Phuong La textile village and Hoi mat – making village (Hung Ha district) and so on. Producing things which necessary for lives is the reason why traditional crafts village appeared. The products are not only features of a land but also represent how ingenious the craftsmen make them are.
Do you like traveling? If you like, Thai Binh is an interesting place for you. Visiting Thai Binh, you will return tothe origin. You can’t miss a chance to take part in the traditional games at Dong Bang Festival. And it’s very unfortunate if you go to Thai Binh without visiting the beginning of Tran dynasty – Tran Temple with big tombs here. Specially, if you visit this temple in the main festival (from 13 to 20 in January in lunar every year), you will enjoy the animated atmosphere at official seals issuing festival. And if you want to sray for good chances in love, don’t forget to visit Keo Pagoda – the sacred Pagoda completely made of wood. The temple which worships a scientist, a child of Thai Binh - Le Quy Don is a place you should go. It is situated in Doc Lap village – Hung Ha district. Many other temples worship heroes and heroines such as Tran Thi Dung, Tran Thu Do, Vu Thi Thuc Nuong are places whichattract a lot of tourists . I live in Hung Ha district, so when you come here, I can take you to these places as well as give you more details about them,
Each land has different specialties. And my land has “Cay cake”, “Quynh Coi fish soup” and Bo guava. They are all gifts from nature. Cay cake’ main content is yellow stick rice, you will enjoy it from each rice. The most famous trademark is ‘’Nguyen village Cay cake”. And about Quynh Coi fish soup? Once you have this soup, you can’t forget the taste of abanas and high – grade dry pancake. Enjoy to have your private feelings. However be a kind of guava, Bo guava is completely different from others. It has special flavors: fragrant, crispy and sweet and can only grown in somewhere in Thai Binh.
Thai Binh is known as the cradle of popular opera. Servicing for entertainment after daily hard hours of working, this art was born. Nowadays, it is still exist and services for people more and more. Most people who live in Thai Binh are farmers. Their lives are hard but not noisy, they are very leisurely in scattered houses among hundreds of plants and trees. They are very helpful and friendly, too. What do you know about Thai Binh? Visit my homeland - Thai Binh to know more about our nation![FONT=&quot][/FONT][/FONT]

Ps:so hard,try better.

 

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tranthuha93

Tranthuha93

Hello everyone, my name is Thu Ha. Today I’m very happy to become a tour guide . we will make a journey to province located in the Red River Delta . Do you know which the province is? Oh , if you can’t guess, I will have few suggestions for you. This province is about 50 kilometers north of Ha Noi capital. The east of this province is continuous to Hung Yen and Thai Binh. The west of it is continuous to Hoa Binh. Do you think which this province is? This is my native land – Ha Nam province. Ha Nam is divided into five districts : Ly Nhan, Binh Luc, Duy Tien, Kim Bang, Thanh Liem and Phu Ly capital. Do you know how Ha Nam is created? Well, I will speak to you immediately. Ha Nam is a land enriched by the silt of Red River, from the mountains Day River and received eroded land. Besides the mountains, Ha Nam is also surrounded by rivers. It is the Red river in the east, the Day river in the west, Nhue river in the north, Ninh river in the south and many others rivers flowing in the province. . The main natural conditions have created for this area features about cultural history and formed the character of Ha Nam people during the long history of building and defending of the nation .The most important factor which makes visitors remember all the time and wish to come back to Ha Nam is Ha Nam people. They are very friendly , good-natural and loveable. They are not only industrious but also intelligent. There are many heroes and famous men who were born and grew in Ha Nam . For example, Nam Cao – a talent poet, Tam Nguyen Yen Do- who came the first in three exam in the past or Nguyen Huu Tien –who devoted his life to the devolutionary cause and so on. They themselves make Ha Nam become heroic province.Have you ever gone to HA Nam ? if you have an occasion to Ha Nam , I’m sure that you will be impressed with its dramatic change. Ha Nam is no longer poor province. It becomes wonderful and noisy province. Many enterprises and factories have been built. In addition , people’s life in there has been improved.To Ha Nam , you can visit a lot of tourist areas such as Long Doi pagoda in Doi Son commune , Duy Tien district. Or Lang temple in Thanh Liem district and so on.. today I will introduce to everyone about Truc temple with five caverns . It is located in Quyen Son hamlet, Thi Son commune, Kim Bang district.It worships Ly Thuong Kiet. Legend has it that when Ly Thuong Kiet and his army were conquering in the south by ships , a big wind blew impetuously, broke down his mast and a large flag of the army up the mountain. So Ly Thuong Kiet stopped the boat and came ashore with his army to pray for victory. As a matter of fact, they had a big win . Ly thuong Kiet along with his army hold a thanksgiving . Later, to commemorate the merits of Ly Thuong Kiet , the villages built Truc temple. It was built in the mid of truc forest so it is called Truc temple.The Truc temple was built of ironwood completely. If you were in Truc temple, you would be surprised at architectures and nice patterns of temple.
Don’t forget to visit Cam mountain where has five caverns linked . when you are in cavern , you will seem to lost in the illusory place. Incense smoke hangs over your head and you will be dazzled by the light with a lot of colors in the cavern . you will enjoy the variety of stalactites with various shapes. I’m certain that you will never forget if you can see it one time.Besides, you can take part in festivals such as Truc temple festival (from January 6th to February 10th), Tran Thuong festival (from 18th to 20th August)in Ly Nhan district with a lot of games , for example tug of war, throw the dishes,…this is an occasion for you to go and pray for heath, lucky ,money to yourself or your relatives.Oh , it is pity that you go to Ha Nam without enjoying special dishes once. .you can try them one time ,you will never forget and wish try again. When you leave Ha Nam .Have ever heard Nhan Hau braised fish? Well, you must be thought that there are many places where have braised fish. Oh, Yes, but Nhan hau braised fish has difficent (I don ‘t understand what it means) flavour .It is so delicious that you will never forget if you can taste once.I don’t know that Nhan Hau people have secret of making braised fish, I only know that all homes in Nhan Hau make braised fish to eat or invite guests in “family meal” on Tet. Rice cake is eaten with Nhan Hau praised fish wonderfully. Nhan Hau praised fish has strong yellow. When you twist it into pieces you will feel browny fish but when you eat, it dissolves in your mouth. Fishes are cooked with others spices such as ginger, main rope,…So it has special flavor .In Ha Nam, there are many others dishes such as Ngu bananas, longan,….they are both wonderful and delicious. .if I only tell about Ha Nam by words, you can ‘t enjoy it well , why don’t you visit Ha Nam one time? I am very happy and really to lead you visit a lot of tourist areas and introduce special dishes in Ha Nam.I believe that you will never have to regret going to Ha Nam. YOU ARE WELCOME TO HA NAM.Thank you for listening.

Ps: perfect.

 

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Trang.160493


Trang.160493

Hello members in Hocmai house. My name is Thuy Trang. I’m 17 years old. I live with my family in Ninh Binh. Today, I will help you know more about my homeland!

Ninh Binh is a small provincial capital located about 90km to the south of Hanoi. At the crossing point from north to south, nature has given this land many landscapes .Ninh Binh is full of factors to be called "a miniature Vietnam": forest, mountain, river, sea and nature conservation areas, national parks,...

Ninh Binh has many famous areas such as Tam Coc-Bich Dong which is well-known as "Ha Long Bay on land”. Each year this place attracts thousands of visitors thanks to the pristine beauty, many caves, relics associated with the history and the culture like Thai Vi temple, Bich Dong Pagoda, Linh Coc Pagoda .... Here, visitors not only enjoy the nature of mountains, but also gaze with venetian the mysterious mountain caves.

Visiting Ninh Binh, Bai Dinh temple is a must. Even in the process of building the temple was well known for its records: the Temple campus area is 107ha, in this temple is the Tathagata Buddha in Southeast Asia's largest copper weighs 100 tons and three Tam The statues, each weighs 50 tons ... The temple has a bronze bell which weighs 36 tons. In particular, the horn 500 white stone monoliths - each of a different face worker are very finely carved and lively.

Right next to the temple is Trang An. Trang An has 100 caves, the valley, different islands. The cave has a particular beauty. Many caves, stalactites flowed from above, stacked layers, each layer, soft and iridescent, each person can imagine different shapes.

Equally popularity is Van Long Nature Reserve, the northern’s most unique. Van Long has Kenh Ga hot spring, Van Trinh action (?), the Ding Imperial Place, Hoa Lu action... Or Cuc Phuong National Park with an area of forest of about 22,000 ha, with rich flora and fauna, especially for 1,000 years old tree. This land was once the ancient capital of Dai Co Viet. Ninh Binh has many other tourism attractions such as: Phat Diem stone church, Van river, Non Nuoc mountain, Ky Lan lake, Nhat Tru pagoda,etc.

Everyone who went to Ninh Binh can’t forget the taste of the place’s specialties here either. Ninh Binh mountain goat meat is a specialty with typical rocky terrain.it was cooked into dishes as such as stew, roast, rare,.. Very delicious. Always associated with goat meat is burning rice dish, it is called "the most natural metal effect." Roughness is the most exciting Kim Son wine, a specialty of sea village in Kim Son district. In addition, rice paper of Xanh market, Kim Son soft noodles, Hoang Long potatoes,Phat Diem eel vermicelli , ... also so many people know.

Ninh Binh has a lot of interesting things. Please visit Ninh Binh! People welcome you here all the time.

Ps: you will complete your well.

 

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O0honeybaby0o

Hey, A-nhon ha-se-yo! Honeybaby si-mi-ta, ham-gak-si-mi-ta!

Hello every body! Have a nice day! ^^
I'm honeybaby. This name tells you that its owner is a sweet girl . Today, I would like to tell you about my native land, where I was born and grow up. Now, let's begin!
This name tells/ reveals/ gives you an impression/ put an impression on you that its owner is (such) a sweet girl

In our country, Vietnam, there are many famous landscapes. However, as for me, my native land, An Giang, is the place which is the most beautiful site/ one/ place in my mind.
There are many interesting/ attractive/ appealing places for visitors to visit, such as: president Ton Duc Thang’s commemorative house in his native home village of My Hoa Hung, the cathedral, the museums and a lot of pagodas,…

There are two amazing/ fascinating/ fantabulous/ fabulous festivals called Ba Chua Su and ox-race in my hometown/ home . They have attracted millions of visitors per year for a long time/ period. They’re also the An Giang people’s prides. -> They are also what An Giang’s people take pride in.

In Long Xuyen City which is the most animated/ romantic?/ rustic place of An Giang province. There is a large supermarket, where you can buy whatever you want and most products in there are high qualified with reasonable prices. This city is also beautiful at night. The church, the parks, the bridges, the hotels and the restaurants all make the city extremely charming at night. The small city seems to have no night because of many colorful lights...Enjoying the fresh wind/ breeze from the river, walking along the night market and trying local special food will make you never forget./ will be your (give you) unforgettable experiences

However, these places are just a small piece of a big beautiful painting, but, the others are only found if you have a free soul. Everybody knows that An Giang is famous for its glyceria agriculture but do you know the reason why? My native land luckily receives two sweet presents from The Creator. They are Tien River and Hau River which are two branches of a famous river - Mekong- which are the reasons for many yellow/ lush/ verdurous fields in my native land.
For many generations, living and taking full advantages of them maybe become two of the most important lessons that all children must be taught.
During the dry season, the rivers mid flow with clear and cool water. When the tidal level rises, all the kids living near the rivers call for their friends to enjoy a country game named “bathing in the river”. At these moments, the river is like a mother who is cuddling her small children with all her love.
The people in my native land are not afraid of the flood, but love it and think that it is a part of their life./ consider (regard) it as a part of their lives. When the flood is coming, the river level rises and brings with her a lot of fish, shrimps and many other pleasures which other lands rarely/ hardly/ barely have. You can go by/ use a canoe to the fields or small canals which are flooded now, go fishing or simply sit on the boat and enjoy the nice sights around you or take some photos.
When water is lower, it gives back/ returns the cool green colour to the fields. A new harvest begins. If you try once to come to these fields, I think that you will love them. The smooth green leaves with the sunshine yellow paddy grains and the friendly smiles of the warm-hearted farmers there/ here will make you never want to leave.

I love my native land, love it with all my heart although it does not have any famous beautiful scenes like other places. It only has kind and popular->comon people, simple sights/ sites, something can be called boorish. But, you know that if you come and enjoy it with all your heart, it’s not a boring place, it’s a wonderful place.

Thanks for listening!



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Pe_kitty

Hanoi, the capital of Socialist Republic of Vietnam, is the political center, as well as one of economic, cultural, science and technology/ economy, culture, science and technology . Located on both sides of the Red River delta in the rich north, Hanoi is a favorable position to become a commercial exchange center in the country. Hanoi is the place where my navel cut vegetables. Where I live and grow up.
As the capital of Vietnam with an old-aged civilization, Hanoi has preserved many famous cultural relics, and over/ more than 600 temples. Although some relics went into oblivion a long time ago in years of wars, Hanoi still preserves many scenic attractions cross.
Temper of Litterature, one of the cultural symbols of Hanoi, was built in 1070. In 1076, on this land was built Quoc Tu Giam, the first university of Vietnam. To honor the school's director of housing, from the reign of King Le Thanh Tong (1482) -> the names of those who were successful in these imperial exams were curved into the rock and on the Turtle Steles. Currently there are 82 tablets Left, placed on ice in the back of the Turtle.
The architecture in the Old Quarter near Hoan Kiem Lake is still being preserved in the way the administrators of the previous dynasties did. In the early 20th century, Hanoi consists of/ have only 36 streets, these have become parts of the Old City. Each block sales professional products of the family on a certain handicraft such as silk, gems, handicrafts and so graph- so on?. Even in ancient streets you can easily find restaurants or bars and bustling night market with many fashionable items, souvenirs and food
West Lake is the place for entertainment of the people while they still are/ stay in the capital. The lake covers about 500 hectares, the largest Hanoi lake is beautiful with temples such as Phu Tay Ho and Kim Lien Pagoda. You can cruise entertainment or enjoy the dishes at the restaurant on- along the lake’s banks. Many of the penthouses, spacious and comfortable overlooking the lake, is the most popular accommodation to international guests/ tourists/ visitors
If you have a chance to visit Hanoi I will lead you to the City of colorectal money?? to enjoy delicious ice-creams which is just new here ^ ^.

I'm happy to have introduced to you about my hometown. I sincerely thank you for listening. Hopefully, you will join me in sharing the home of our beloved.
Wish you luck.
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nowtrymybest

Hello, hello everybody!
Do you love your country?
I’m sure your answer is YES ^^, of course
And today, I’m about to talk to you about my beloved country where many beautiful memories of my childhood still preserve. Oh, I love it so much !
Have you ever heard of these following Vietnamese verses:
‘’Đường vô Xứ Nghệ quanh quanh
Non xanh nước biếc như tranh họa đồ’’
The simple meaning in English is that:’’ the street to Nghe An is meandering, the landscape here is picturesque ’’.
And now, can you guess the province I want to talk about? Yes, it’s Nghe An-my homeland/ hometown/ home.
With the area of 16. 498 km square, Nghe An, which is located on the North East of Truong Son range, is known as the largest province of Vietnam. It shares the border with Ha Tinh in the south, Thanh Hoa in the north, Laos in the west and East Sea in the east. Nghe An consists of Vinh city and 17 other districts such as: Dien Chau, Que Phong, Nam Dan, Do Luong, Nghi Loc, Tuong Duong and so on.
In my view point, it can hardly be denied that Nghe An is an attractive destination to tourists. Not only does it have various beautiful scenes but the people here are friendly and hospitable as well. Coming here, immersing in the clear cool water of Cua Lo beach or Bai Lu resort, breathing the fresh air you will refresh after hard study and working . Furthermore, there are a lot of interesting places waiting for your coming to enjoy them more. Some examples are Ho Chi Minh square, Center Park, Lam river , Quyet mountain, Sao Va waterfall, etc. and especially Phu Mat National Park.
But that’s not all, the proudest one of Nghe An people is the traditional culture. Yes! Not only is Nghe An rich of material cultural products but it also has an abundant in immaterial cultural ones. It was this land that brought up many national heroes such as Phan Boi Chau, Phan Chu Trinh and one respectable person can’t say ‘no’ to is Ho Chi Minh president/ Uncle Ho. Tourists coming here can visit Nam Dan Kim Lien, which is Uncle Ho’s homeland. I've come here several times and really been touched when seeing the simple house in which Uncle Ho was born and grew up. What a great man! Another feature is that besides tasting the Nghe An specialities: Eel soup, Doai orange, Lam rice… you can also bring them home as presents for friends or relatives. Oh, I think that's a good idea !
To sum up, there is no doubt that Nghe An is such a wonderful land that you are certainly attracted from the moment you set eyes on Nghe An.
Now, I am very happy after sharing my thoughts with you. And I have my heart set on saying:
WELCOME TO NGHE AN !
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Thuha193
Hello everybody,

I'm Thu Ha. Today, as a tourist guide, . I’m taking you to a very interesting destination, Bac Ninh. Yes, Bac Ninh-my beloved country, Are you ready?

As you know, Bac Ninh is the northern 'fence', inside of which is the capital of Vietnam. When you travel anywhere in the land of Bac Ninh, you'll also be full of historical memories are crystallized inl the typical cultural heritage of the different villages throughout the region.

First, we are going to the Thuan Thanh - the countryside of folklore art with the Dong Ho painting village, the water puppetry village of Bui Xa, the ancient and wonderful architecture of Buddist, such as Dau Pagoda, But Thap Pagoda. In But Thap pagoda, you will admire the beauty of the sculptural masterpieces typically Quan Am statue of Buddha with thousand hands and thousand eyes. This is also the hometown of many famous poets such as Nguyen Gia Thieu, Sai Thuan.

Next, we are going to Gia Binh with a romantic mountain-Thien Thai, which is fatherland of first doctoral candidate Le Van Thinh. There is a famous victory to the king in the past built Dong Lam pagada, Tinh Lu Pagoda t on the top of the mountain,. Long Phuc Palace on the mountain side are all for us to visit them frequently.

Bac Ninh is a kingdom of festivals, also is home of traditional cultural activities More 300 large and small different festivals are held in most villages of Bac Ninh province every year.There are 2 types of festivals: national and regional festivals such as the peony flower festival of Phat Tich Pagoda, fireworkmas of Dong Ky, Ly Bat De Temple festival, Dau Pagoda festival, the Huyen Quang ancestor's death anniversary... Famous and attraction is Quan Ho Duet singing village., I feel fret and upset when I hear the duo of love song
, If you have a good condition to my hometown, you will be taken to the folk songs, to the ancient temples, to the festival bearing the colors of the northern region. I'm happy if I guide for you go to visit my homeland.

Thank you for listening

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Greenstar131
Hello everyone!
My friends often ask me:" How do you go to school?". I joke with them that:"I often go to school by riding an elephant. Do you know elephants? And where have many elephants Viet Nam?
Oh! yes! It's Tay Nguyen- a highland with alot of sunlight and wind, where I was born and grow up.
For me, Tay Nguyen is neither famous as film stars nor peaceful as where people take the veil. People are simple and our life are quite busy.
If there is an occasion for you to visit here, you can see many interesting things such as a large area with coffee trees or rubber trees, tea trees...etc.
Serepok river and Xexan river never stop flowing, which make Tay Nguyen more and more romantic. This is only area of Viet Nam that doesn't boder on sea, but plays an important part in defense and economics.
Tay Nguyen has 5 provinces: Kontum, Gia Lai, Dak Lak, Dak Nong, and Lam Dong. Oh! I forget, Tay Nguyen is famous for many beautiful waterfalls that look as fairy lands such as: Cam Ly (in Da Lat), Gia Long, Trinh Nu, DRaySap (in Dak Nong)...
Do You know about the legend of these waterfalls? That is mysteries.^^
If you want to know, visit to Tay Nguyen and discover them yourself.
welcome to Tay Nguyen!

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yunjaecouple_janeno1

Because I cannot explain what hometown means, so I call three places are my hometowns:
- Yen Bai, where my mother was born.
- Lang Son, where my father was born.
- Lao Cai, where I was born.
Three hometowns, many remembrancers, but the most beautiful remembracer and my mother’s hometown are associated, Yen Bai.

When I was five, everything was very big to me. The house which belongs to my grandfather like my court, my superb court. The tea gardens like my dangerous jungles. All of my cousins like my princes, my handsome and gallant princes. My grandmother’s dog was big just like a horse and black so I called it Black Horse.
And now, I’m coming back my mother’s hometown to visit my grandparents. Everything as before but smaller. That slip-road, those trees, that mere, that house,…as before there’s no change of them. that slip-road is still the same as before, my small slip-road. trees are still the same as before, but bigger. the mere where I fell down is still the same as before. How fun having a bath with my own fish!
I’m walking on the slip-road, looking my hometown. I wonder there’re any place more beautiful and peaceful than my hometown or not? The green of the tea, the blue of the sky, the brown of the ground ,the yellow of the sunbeam, all of them make a wonderful picture, my beautiful picture. The most beautiful color of the picture is green, the color of the tea. Everytime I think about Yen Bai, I can smell gently a scent of tea. It’s very velvety, just like a wind slides over my mind, makes me remember about the vast tea gardens.
And a picture cannot be wonderful if missing one part: people. People live here are very friendly. They always make me have a feeling just like my family. Their friendliness makes you feel warmly and comfortable. They will smile with you when you are happy, share with you when you are sad, help you when you have any problem. What do you want more from them? They have everything, very kind. And the person who I like the most is my cousin, his name is Hoan. I have many cousins but I don’t know why I like him the most. I guess that because of the time he spent on me, to take care and talk to me, to share with me marvelous feelings. . But it’s just a guess.

I love my hometown a lot. Whatever happen, I still love it. And I don’t care what reason is, just I love it because of itself. I love you forever, my hometown.



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Cuncon_baby


Cuncon_baby

Quang Ngai is one coastal province located in the south central coast of Viet Nam.

Widely-known as the appellation ”Homeland of sugar-cane and sugar”, Quang Nai province is the land which has a long history of Sa Huynh culture and Cham Pa culture, especially Cham citadel system. Beside, Quang Ngai has two beauty tourism spots: Thien An’s mountain and Tra Khuc’s river.Quang Ngai is also the homeland of Truong Dinh, Le Trung Dinh and many famous intellectuals, writers, poets, musicians, artists: Bich Khe, Te Hanh, Tra Giang, Truong Quang Luc, The Bao, Nhat Sinh ...

Quang Ngai also has many festivals: the buffalo thrusting festival …. […]

(It seems like you didn’t translate respectively the English version and the Vietnamese one of the essay, then errors in context are corrected by the judge’s view)

Tourism attraction sites: Mi Khe beach, Sa Huynh beach, Ly Son island, Tra Khuc river, Ton Dung lake, Khe Hai beach, Duc Tan beach, Duc Minh beach,… each place is celebrated for its own specialties: Don in Tra Khuc river, Sa Huynh salt, Mach Nha, Phoi’s sugar, Guong’s candy, Tra Bong cinnamon,….



Dung Quat oil-filter factory (in Dung Quat industrial zone) is also the first oil-filter factory in Vietnam, located within the area of Binh Thuan & Binh Tri ward, Binh Son district, Quang Ngai province.

Quang Ngai have 13 districts and 1 city: Ba To, Minh Long, Son Tay, Nghia Hanh , Son Ha, Tay Tra, Tra Bong, Nghia Hanh, Son Tinh, Binh Son, Tu Nghia, Duc Pho, Mo Duc, Li Son and Quang Ngai city.

I live in Ba To town of Ba To dictrict. Ba Tơ is one mountainous district located to the East South - South of Quang Ngai province. The place is celebrated for Ba To Guerrilla team and Ba To’s uprising. Ba To museum stores the remaining of the uprising.
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Congchua9x

Hi everybody,

Have you ever been to Bac Ninh? Have you ever heard of the Lim festival with the famous folk song named Quan ho? Yes, it’s famous for beautiful scenery which nobody wants to miss, its rich culture with Quan ho, as well as many historical monuments, traditional handicraft villages and many famous things.

Let’s enjoy the wonderful place with me. You will doubt whether you’re in the real world.

Bac Ninh’s located in the Red River Delta of the northern part of the country. It is situated to the east of the Vietnamese capital, Hanoi, and borders Bac Giang, Hung Yen, Hai Duong, Vinh Phuc, and Ha Noi.

Bac Ninh is the smallest of all Vietnamese provinces and is divided into seven districts Gia Binh; Luong Tai; Que vo; Thuan Thanh; Tien Du; Tu Son; Yen Phong and the provincial capital, Bac Ninh. Each district has filled the spirit of Kinh Bac with tangible and intangible culture heritages.

Bac Ninh has many beautiful scenery and historical monuments, especially famous pagodas and temples such as Phat Tich, Dau, But Thap, Dinh Bang Communal House, Do Temple. Each of them is associated with a beautiful fairy tale. It worked on me like a magic when I was child. If you pray, I believe your dream will come true.

Bac Ninh has some traditional handicraft villages such as Dong Ky Wood, Dong Ho Painting, Dai Bai Bronze, Phu Lang Pottery. Coming here, you can buy many souvenirs or make souvenirs by yourself. It’s interesting.

Bac Ninh is cradle of Quan ho folk-song. Quan ho is part of not only the culture of Red River Delta for centuries but also the world’s cultural heritage and is recognized as “Masterpiece of Oral and Intangible Heritage” by UNESCO.

Quan Ho Singing was created in about the 13th century in Bắc Ninh province and was always sang during spring festivals. Quan ho performance is the most striking feature of festivals in Bac Ninh. For centuries, men and women in the northern province of Bac Ninh have participated in a festival that draws on their poetic and musical talents. During Lim festival, Quan Ho folk songs are performed between groups of singers who converse elaborate questions and answers. While the answers are improvised, there are strict rules. Singers, therefore, must not only be quick-witted, they must also have a strong grasp of the traditional tunes, as well as a deep understanding of the history and culture which gave rise to this art-form.
The Lim festival, opening on January 13th (lunar year), is the leading Quan Ho song festival as many famous Quan Ho Song villages in the area.

Groups of Quan Ho singers come to the Lim festival dressed in their traditional costumes in a distinctive style: Young men wear black long silk gauze dresses, long white pants, black turbans, while girls wear traditional long dresses called “áo tứ thân”, rosy belt, golden ear rings…

There are broadly two patterns of Quan Ho performance in Lim festivals: Quan Ho team or individual singer who attend and contribute to the festival would sing in open air spaces and around the Lim Hill.

In addition to singing performances, the Lim festival is also celebrated with traditional temple games such as human chess, wrestling and more.

Come here and let the scene and culture space overwhelm you, you will felt as if you had been in a different world and more...

Bac Ninh welcome you!


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Gioxanh

"Hạ Long xanh xanh trong ngọn gió trong lành................"
Hi everyone. You've just heard a song of my nativeland - HaLong city - the provincial capital of Quang Ninh Province. From the first time I heard that song, I knew that I love my nativeland more than any place in the world.

With the total area of about 6111 square kilometers and the population of over 1million people, Quang Ninh is a large province which located along the northeastern coast of Vietnam. QN is the only province of our country which has 2cities: Hạ Long and Móng Cái. The province also has 2 towns: Cẩm Phả, Uống Bí and 10 districts Đông TRiều, Vân Đồn, Hải Hà, Hoành Bồ, Tiên Yên, Bình Liêu, Ba Chẽ. Cô Tô, Đầm Hà, Yên Hưng

Ha Long city the pride of Quảng Ninh's people. It is not only the provincial capital of the province but also the home to the UNESCO World Heritage Site Ha Long Bay. Halong Bay consists of over 3000 limestone monolithic islands but only 1969 islands have been were named. I'm sure that once you visit HaLong Bay, you'll never want to go home! With blue sky, blue water and wonderful caves, Halong Bay is said to be the most perfect picture of creation. Therefore, 500 years ago, Nguyen Trai praised the beauty of Halong Bay as " The rock wonder in the sky"

I always take pride in being a child of Halong city. More than any other, Halong people can fell the sea breeze, the salty taste of the sea and hear the sea's breathe. Do you want to have these experiences like that? Ok, let's go to Halong now. Enjoying the fresh air, taste the delicious sea food, feeling the friendliness of halong people or just watching thousands of colorful lights at night.... that makes you never forget.

QuangNinh is where I spent all my childhood. when i grow up, perhaps I'll have a better life in other modern places like HoChiMinh City, Ha Noi capital. However,in my heart, my nativeland is always the most beautiful place in the world.
Well, this is my nativeland. Simple but beautiful. Thank you for listening. At last, my friends, don't forget to visit my QuangNinh!


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Purplecat_lin

Hello everyone, today i will take u to a very interesting destination, are u ready? ok

I want to introduce u to my hometown: Song lo - the place of gravel and rocks but this is where i was born and grew up so i love it so much.

Song lo is a rural district of Vinhphuc province.

It’s about 70 km to the north of hanoi city.

After being split from Lap thach district , it now occupies about 15.000 ha with the population of more than 9400 .Song lo is named after the river which runs through the town.

Nature and humans have created a complex variety of unique architecture. Loo river which runs around the district brings about a romantic and favorable climatic condition for animals and plans to grow and flourish as well as for economical and tourism development in the future

Moreover, my hometown has many places of interest which attract many domestic and foreign tourists to visit historical and cultural significance as well as enjoy the environment

I particularly want to tell you about Binh son tower . This tower was built with special bricks by the end of the 18th century and decorated with dedicated lines bringing vitality of the Republic of Vietnam during the feudal period of autonomy and prosperity ( Tran dynasty)

Beside Binh Son tower is Vinh Khanh pagoda, a unique Buddhist architecture, attracts many tourists on holidays. I am used to coming here with my grandma on festivals and praying. She believes that it will bring luck and happiness for the whole families and relatives.

Binh Son tower is next to Bay waterfall and De Tham cave at the altitude of 800 meter which once was taken as De Tham’s hiding place in the war against France in the late 18th century. In the summer, i love coming here with my friends, it relaxes me after hard working days.

We also have some special dishes which have become specialties such as “ ca thinh” also known as “ sour salt fish”. Fish is preserved in jars for fermented naturally for months then grilled before eating. Besides “ ca thinh” there is another well-known dish. it is “raw fish” which is made from “me” fish served with many kinds of spices like guise leaves, perils, broke bones, coriander, dandelion leaves. U can also bring them home as presents for friends or relatives.

There are many things i want to show u, may be these are not enough but one thing i can be sure that u will love it . Though my hometown maybe not as beautiful and developed as yours but (once more time i say these words) “i love my native land”

Thanks for listening!!!!^^

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Thanchetgoiemlasuphu'

Có thể sử dụng 1 trong 2 bài dưới đây:
Hi all, i was born and grew in Dienchau, Nghean. I love my native land.

Now, i'm very happy to tell you about Nghean

Certainly you know, Nghean is the largest province of Vietnam with 16487 km2, located in north-central, about 291 km from Hanoi. Nghean includes 1 city, 2 towns and 17 districts.

Nghean is known for learning tradition, many talents were born in this land.Nghean is famous for histories with many historical figures and Soviet Nghe Tinh movement (1930 - 1931), the movement caused quite a stir in Vietnam and meant great history. Nghean is the fatherland of Ho Chi Minh, revered president of Vietnam, this's a reason for why many people know Nghean like that. Ho Chi Minh was born in Kimlien village, Namdan district. Beside, Nghean attracts tourists because of wonderful sights such as: Cualo beach, Pumat national park .. , friendly people, taste and delicous foods....
Ps:you are mentioning “wonderful sights” and friendly people, taste and delicous foods are different from …you see?.So I suggest you “. Beside, Nghean attracts tourists because of wonderful sights such as: Cualo beach, Pumat national park .. .Moreover, people is so friendly,generous and delicious food which makes traditional point of Ngean.”

If you come Nghean, you should visit the Cuong temple because that's where people worship Thuc Phan king, who established Aulac. If you come there on Febuary 14 - 15, you’ll have chance to take part in the Cuong temple festival. There're many traditional games such as , wrestling, cock fighting, human chess, swinging, hiking .... ; classical drama, burning fireworks... during the festival.

Affectionate native land, second mom is my love. I love and miss my fatherland forever in spite of distance. Yes, I love my fatherland very and very much. You may be able to understand if you come to my native land and view wonderful sights, enjoy specialities or talk to friendly people. My fatherland is really great.

Postscript : Thanks for listening^^
I ‘m children of Nghean, who always wellcome you to visit my second mom and volunteer to be tourist guide for you. I'm sure you will be attracted by Nghean .








Hi everyone, i was born and grew in Dienchau, Nghe An. I love my native land.

Now, i'm very happy to tell you about Nghe An

As far as you know, Nghe An is the largest province of Vietnam with the total area of 16487 km2 ( sixteen hundred and four thousand and eighty seven square kilometres ) , located in north-central, about 291 km ( two thousand and ninety one ) south of Hanoi Capital . It’s devided in to 1city , 2 towns and 17 ( seventeen ) districts : Anh Sơn , Con Cuông, Diễn Châu , Đô lương , Hưng Nguyên, Quỳ Châu , Kì Sơn, Nam Đàn , Nghi Lộc , Nghĩa Đàn , Quế Phong, Quỳ Hợp , Quỳnh Lưu, Tân Trì, Thanh Chương , Tương Dương , Yên Thành . Here is also the fatherland of famous people such as : Uncle Ho , Ho Xuan Huong , Nguyen Du , Chinh Huu………


Vinh is considered official and economic centre of Nghe An . And it is also the largest economic center in North Central of Vietnam.

Nghe An is fam ous for many things such as : traditional fondness for learning , histories with many historical figures and Xo Viet Nghe Tinh movement (1930 - 1931) which caused really a stir in Vietnam and had great historical significance.

Nghe An is the fatherland of Ho Chi Minh, chairman of Vietnam's respect , this's one of the reasons why many people know about it and v isit there . Ho Chi Minh was born in Kimlien village, Namdan district.

In a ddition , Nghe An attracts tourists because of wonderful sights such as: Cua Lo beach, Pu Mat national park , Lang Sen , Tham Om cave…….. and recov ers much profit from this visitism .


If you go to Nghe An , why don’t you v isit the Cuong Temple ? because it’s the place where people worship Thuc Phan king, who established Aulac. Especially , you shoud come there on Febuary 14 – 15. because here will take place the Cuong Temple f estival . You will be taken p art in many traditional games such as , wrestling, cock fighting, human chess, swinging, hiking , burning fireworks ……. during this festival .


Affectionate native land, second mom is my love. I love and miss my fatherland forever in spite of distance. Yes, I love my fatherland very and very much. You may be able to understand if you come to my native land and view wonderful sights, enjoy specialities or talk to friendly people. My fatherland is really great.

Postscript : Thanks for listening^^
I’m a children of Nghean, who always wellcome you to visit my second mom and volunteer to be tourist guide for you. I'm sure you will be attracted by Nghean .

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[o0honeybaby0o]

Lười đánh tiếng Anh! =.="
Nhưng mà những phần đó mình phải thay đi bằng chữ màu xnah àh?
Còn những phần mình làm thì bỏ đi phải hok?
Hay thế nào ý?

 

[tomcangxanh]

những phần ban giám khảo đã viết màu lên thì tức là đã sửa

một số bài gạch chân và viết vs dấu = thì thay cụm đó bằng cụm giám giảo viết bên cạnh

có lẽ do gửi bằng tin nhắn nên toàn bộ chỉnh chữ đều bị xóa, nhưng dù sao cũng là bản đã chỉnh rồi, các bạn có thể so vs bài cũ để xem lại

tuy nhiên việc chỉnh sửa ở đây chỉ có thể chỉnh về ngữ pháp chứ ko thể chỉnh đc ý của bài viết

chúc các bạn thi tốt!