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Becoming a police has always been alive in my mind since I was a child and it has also been my family's hope. So I always try my best to learn better. As a police, I can help and protect everyone, make their life peaceful, arrest criminals and bring justice, contribute to make my country more beautiful.
Besides, I also have a stable job after graduation. And I can take care of my parents who educate me all their life. Until now, my dream is still become a police officer. I will try my best and I hope one day, my dream can be true.

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Becoming a police has always been alive in my mind since I was a child and it has also been my family's hope. So I always try my best to learn better. As a police, I can help and protect everyone, make their life peaceful, arrest criminals and bring justice, contribute to make my country more beautiful.
Besides, I also have a stable job after graduation. And I can take care of my parents who educate me all their life. Until now, my dream is still become a police officer. I will try my best and I hope one day, my dream can be true.

Becoming a police officer has always been alive in my mind since I was a child and it has also been my family's hope. So I always try my best to learn better. As a police officer, I can help and protect everyone, make their lives peaceful, arrest criminals, and bring justice, contribute to making my country more beautiful.
Besides, I also have a stable job after graduation. And I can take care of my parents who educate me all their life. Until now, my dream still becomes a police officer. I will try my best and I hope one day my dream can be true.