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There are 10 (thật sự 9 do mình edit sai) mistakes in this passage. Find and correct them.
Most of the joggers who are overweigh are reasonable for talking about and obsessing with their weight. Since many people start jogging to lose weight (perhaps you’re one of them), it is not surprised that body size is important. More and more people are on the diet, 50% of the women and approximately 25% of the men in the US are watching what they eat. Bodyweight is the second most talked between joggers – heart disease and high bleeding pressure are the first! There are many factors that effect your weight. They include body type, diet, exercise level, sex and age. What may be an “ideal” weight for you at (đáng lẽ từ sai phải là in) the age of 27 may not be ideal while you are 54. And your ideal weight will probably be different during racing season when you were in a specific training phase.
 
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There are 10 mistakes in this passage. Find and correct them.
Most of the joggers who are overweigh are reasonable for talking about and obsessing with their weight. Since many people start jogging to lose weight (perhaps you’re one of them), it is not surprised that body size is important. More and more people are on the diet, 50% of the women and approximately 25% of the men in the US are watching what they eat. Bodyweight is the second most talked between joggers – heart disease and high bleeding pressure are the first! There are many factors that effect your weight. They include body type, diet, exercise level, sex and age. What may be an “ideal” weight for you at the age of 27 may not be ideal while you are 54. And your ideal weight will probably be different during racing season when you were in a specific training phase.

There are 10 mistakes in this passage. Find and correct them.

Most of the joggers who are overweigh => overweight are reasonable for talking about and obsessing with their weight. Since many people start jogging to lose weight (perhaps you’re one of them), it is not surprised => surprising that body size is important. More and more people are on the => a diet, 50% of the women and approximately => close to 25% of the men in the US are watching what they eat. Bodyweight is the second most talked between => among joggers – heart disease and high bleeding => blood pressure are the first! There are many factors that effect => affect your weight. They include body type, diet, exercise level, sex and age. What may be an “ideal” weight for you at the age of 27 may not be ideal while => when you are 54. And your ideal weight will probably be different during racing season when you were => bỏ in a specific training phase.
Mình k thấy cái thứ 10 đâu cả nên bạn thông cảm :<
 

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There are 10 mistakes in this passage. Find and correct them.
Most of the joggers who are overweigh => overweight are reasonable for talking about and obsessing with their weight. Since many people start jogging to lose weight (perhaps you’re one of them), it is not surprised => surprising that body size is important. More and more people are on the => a diet, 50% of the women and approximately => close to 25% of the men in the US are watching what they eat. Bodyweight is the second most talked between => among joggers – heart disease and high bleeding => blood pressure are the first! There are many factors that effect => affect your weight. They include body type, diet, exercise level, sex and age. What may be an “ideal” weight for you at the age of 27 may not be ideal while => when you are 54. And your ideal weight will probably be different during racing season when you were => bỏ in a specific training phase.
Mình k thấy cái thứ 10 đâu cả nên bạn thông cảm :<
Bạn ơi, approximately = close to kể cả về nghĩa và cách dùng luôn mà?
 
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