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Crime preventing is as crucial in the workplace as it is in the home or neighbourhood. Reducing crime is as much a part of good management as prompt delivery, good staff relations, and other acceptable management functions. Losses from shops through shoplifting are extremely high and ultimate, those losses are payment for
5 by all for us in high prices. These are many opportunities for shopkeepers themselves to reduce shoplifting. As with all types of criminal, prevention is better than cure. The best deterrent is the present of staff properly trained in how to identify potential shoplifters. There are also many secure devices now available. Video camera surveillance is a popular system, even with quite email retailers. In clothes shopping, magnetic tag marking systems that set off an alarm if they are taken out of the shop have proved their worthless. However, there are many simpler measures that retailers should consider. Better lighting and ceiling-hung mirrors can help staff to watch all parts of the display area. Similarly, simply arranging shelves and display units to allow clear fields of víible is a good deterrent.
 

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Crime preventing is as crucial in the workplace as it is in the home or neighbourhood. Reducing crime is as much a part of good management as prompt delivery, good staff relations, and other acceptable management functions. Losses from shops through shoplifting are extremely high and ultimate, those losses are payment for
5 by all for us in high prices. These are many opportunities for shopkeepers themselves to reduce shoplifting. As with all types of criminal, prevention is better than cure. The best deterrent is the present of staff properly trained in how to identify potential shoplifters. There are also many secure devices now available. Video camera surveillance is a popular system, even with quite email retailers. In clothes shopping, magnetic tag marking systems that set off an alarm if they are taken out of the shop have proved their worthless. However, there are many simpler measures that retailers should consider. Better lighting and ceiling-hung mirrors can help staff to watch all parts of the display area. Similarly, simply arranging shelves and display units to allow clear fields of víible is a good deterrent.

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Crime preventing -> prevention is as crucial in the workplace as it is in the home or neighbourhood. Reducing crime is as much a part of good management as prompt delivery, good staff relations, and other acceptable -> accepted management functions. Losses from shops through shoplifting are extremely high and ultimate, those losses are payment -> paid for
5 by all for us in high prices. These are many opportunities for shopkeepers themselves to reduce shoplifting. As with all types of criminal-> crime, prevention is better than cure. The best deterrent is the present -> presence of staff properly trained in how to identify potential shoplifters. There are also many secure -> security devices now available. Video camera surveillance is a popular system, even with quite email retailers. In clothes shopping -> shops, magnetic tag marking systems that set off an alarm if they are taken out of the shop have proved their worthless -> worth. However, there are many simpler measures that retailers should consider. Better lighting and ceiling-hung mirrors can help staff to watch all parts of the display area. Similarly, simply arranging shelves and display units to allow clear fields of visible -> vision is a good deterrent
  • Giải thích:
(1) Đầu câu ta dùng một danh từ: crime prevention - phòng chống tội phạm
(2) Other + N (số nhiều)
Mang nghĩa bị động nên ta sửa thành accepted (adj) - được chấp hành
(3) Pay for - Trả cho...
(4) Types of crime - Các loại tội phạm
(5) Presence of - Sự hiên diện của ...
(6) Security devices - Các thiết bị an ninh
(7) In clothes shops - Các của hàng quần áo
- Không dùng "shopping" vì shopping (mua đồ) thì ghép vào cụm từ sẽ không phù hợp
- Ta chỉ viết là: Shopping for clothes - Mua quần áo
(8) Prove one's worth - Chứng minh giá trị của ...
(9) Fields of vision - Tầm nhìn

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