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It is my belief that people rely on their cars too much.Most people use their cars even for short trips where they could just walk instead,like when they are going to a store that is just around the corner or things like that.In such situations it is not necessary to drive.But most people drive anyway.Even people who are unwilling to walk even these short distances could drive less if they would just plan ahead and try to run all of their daily errands at one time instead of making numerous short trips.(2 mistakes)

 

[TajSaker]

It is my belief that people rely on their cars too much.Most people use their cars even for short trips when they could just walk instead,like when they are going to a store that is just around the corner or things like that.In such situations it is not necessary to drive.But most people drive anyway.Even people who are unwilling to walk even these short distances could drive less if they would just plan ahead and try to run all of their daily errands at a time instead of making numerous short trips.(2 mistakes)

 

[Hanh157]

It is my belief that people rely on their cars too much.Most people use their cars even for short trips where (when) they could just walk instead,like when they are going to a store that is just around the corner or things like that.In such situations it is not necessary to drive.But most people drive anyway.Even people who are unwilling to walk even these short distances could drive less if they would just plan ahead and try to run all of their daily errands at one (a) time instead of making numerous short trips.