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As I know, student life in Vietnam 20 years ago very difficult and poor. First, they had to study at schools that lack facilities. There was only one class for all students of different ages, both boys and girls, and one teacher who taught everything and The School didn't have a name. They didn't have the Internet in their studies. They had to go to the library, look for books on the topic, read the books, and hand-write any information that they thought was useful for their assignment. Even, some students didn't have the books to learn.Second, they didn't have bikes to have gone to school as now, they had to walk to school. Some students went bare-footed. Thirdly, They didn't have good clothes to wear, they had to wear patches.However, they didn't have homework and no extra classes. They had a lot of time to play outside and to help their parents did the housework. I love this one the most in student life in the past. I wish I could live their life to experience something interesting such as, didn't have the internet and didn't have bikes....That's great!

 

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As I know, student life in Vietnam 20 years ago was very difficult and poor. First, they had to study at schools that lack (dùng lại từ khác nhé) facilities. There was only one class for all students of different ages, both boys and girls, and one teacher who taught everything and The School (không viết hoa, sử dụng mạo từ "The" không đúng) didn't have a name. They didn't have the => không sử dụng từ này Internet in their studies. They had to (dùng từ này có hơi hướng bắt buộc, nên bỏ và chuyển go =>went) go to the library, looked for books on the topic, read the books, and hand-write any information that they thought was useful for their assignments. Even, some students didn't have the books to learn.Second, they didn't have bikes to have gone to school as now (sử dụng từ khác), they had to walk to school. Some students went bare-footed. Thirdly, They didn't have good clothes to wear, they had to wear patches.However, they didn't have homework and no extra classes. They had a lot of time to play outside and to help their parents did the housework. I love this one the most in student life in the past. I wish I could live their lifes to experience something interesting such as, didn't have the internet and didn't have bikes....That's great!

 

[TajSaker]

As I know, student life in Vietnam 20 years ago used to be very difficult and poor. Firstly, they had to study in schools that lacked facilities. There was only one class for all students of different ages, both boys and girls, and one teacher who taught everything and the schools didn't have names. Students didn't have Internet for their studies. They had to go to the library, look for books on the topic, read the books, and hand-write any information that they thought was useful for their assignment. Even some students didn't have the books to learn.Secondly, they didn't have bikes to travel to school like today, they had to walk to school. Some students went bare-footed. Thirdly, They didn't have good clothes to wear, they had to wear patches.However, they didn't have homework and no (bỏ) extra classes. They had a lot of time to play outside and to help their parents do the housework. I love this one(bỏ) the most about student life in the past. I wish I could live their life to experience something so interesting, which included not having Internet and bikes....That's great!

 

[Quang Trungg]

As I know, student life in Vietnam 20 years ago used to be very difficult and poor. Firstly, they had to study in schools that lacked facilities. There was only one class for all students of different ages, both boys and girls, and one teacher who taught everything and the schools didn't have names. Students didn't have Internet for their studies. They had to go to the library, look for books on the topic, read the books, and hand-write any information that they thought was useful for their assignment. Even some students didn't have the books to learn.Secondly, they didn't have bikes to travel to school like today, they had to walk to school. Some students went bare-footed. Thirdly, They didn't have good clothes to wear, they had to wear patches.However, they didn't have homework and no extra classes. They had a lot of time to play outside and to help their parents do the housework. I love this one the most about student life in the past. I wish I could live their life to experience something so interesting, which included not having Internet and bikes....That's great!