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jinnieohh

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mọi người vào tìm lỗi sai tron đoạn giúp mình nhé :-*
thanks you very much for your letter. iAs soon as I’ll get the dates. I’ll let you know but I don’t much expect I’ll be able to come. Perhaps we’ll be able to get something organized for July. It’s a long time ever since we got together and I’d love to catch up on what has been happening to you. If only your parent don’t want their house full of visitors in the holiday, you could come over to stay with me. There’s plenty of room and the house is just a short bike ride from the beach, so there would be lots to do. Let me know it if you think this is a good idea.
 
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believe_in_rose296

mọi người vào tìm lỗi sai tron đoạn giúp mình nhé :-*
thanks you very much for your letter. iAs soon as I’ll get the dates. I’ll let you know but I don’t much expect I’ll be able to come. Perhaps we’ll be able to get something organized for July. It’s a long time ever since we got together and I’d love to catch up on what has been happening to you. If only your parent don’t want their house full of visitors in the holiday, you could come over to stay with me. There’s plenty of room and the house is just a short bike ride from the beach, so there would be lots to do. Let me know it if you think this is a good idea.

thanks you very much for your letter. iAs soon as I’ll get the dates, I’ll let you know but I don’t much expect I’ll be able to come. Perhaps we’ll be able to get something organized for July. It’s a long time ever since we got together and I’d love to catch up on (???) what has been happening to you. If only your parent don’t want their house full of visitors in the holiday, you could come over to stay with me. There’s plenty of room and the house is just a short bike ride from the beach, so there would be lots to do. Let me know it if you think this is a good idea.

Bạn tự sửa nhé, tớ chỉ ra một số lỗi rồi đấy.
 
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believe_in_rose296

"room" ở đây chỉ có nghĩa là chỗ, khoảng không gian, không để số nhiều (nghĩa thứ nhất). Nếu nó có nghĩa là phòng, buồng thì mới có số nhiều (nghĩa thứ hai).
 
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amaranth

Bổ sung thêm mấy lỗi cơ bản:
1. As soon as không đi với Tương Lai :)
2. Trước chữ but và chữ and phải có dấu , (nếu là liên từ nối 2 mệnh đề)
3. There would be a lot to do (không phải lots)
4. Let me know if you think... (không có chữ it trước chữ if)
 
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