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[believe_in_rose296]

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we want to have a healthy body so we have to protect our teeth. We should eat well, eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. We should do morning exercise. We should go to the dentist when we are feeling unpleasant and we should have a medical check-up once a year. We shouldn't stay up late, work too much and we shouldn't eat too hot or cold food, drink too much beer, wine. We always have to kip fit and stay healthy

 

[tuanh038]

fruit-> fruits
exercise-> exercises
are feeling-> feel
( mình cũng không biết là đúng hay không nữa, những bạn khác xem rồi chỉ ra giùm bạn ấy nhé!! mình thì mình nghĩ vậy!!)

 

[believe_in_rose296]

we want to have a healthy body so we have to protect our teeth. We should eat a lot of fruits and vegetables. We should do morning exercises. We should go to the dentist when we feel unpleasant and we should have a medical check-up once a year. We shouldn't stay up late, work too much, eat too hot or cold food and drink too much beer and wine. We always have to keep fit and stay healthy.

 

[study_more_91]

we want to have a healthy body so we have to protect our teeth. We should eat a lot of fruits and vegetables. We should do morning exercises. We should go to the dentist when we feel unpleasant and we should have a medical check-up once a year. We shouldn't stay up late, work too much, eat too hot or cold food and drink too much beer and wine. We always have to keep fit and stay healthy.

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