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We have many idols: singers, actors, writers etc. They can be your parents, your friends, your teachers. Our friends and I have our idols in many difference areas. We love them, admire them. Because of many reasons: they’re perfect, they’re beautiful, they have dreams and they follow them, or, very simple, they have more things than we have, so we idolise them. That’s all!
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We’ve learnt from our idols many things; we try our best to succeed like them; We wanna them to proud of us - their fans!; We wanna them to interested in our county: Vietnam! Idolising idols, we learnt more about their countries, their traditions etc. So we can in-rich my mind. Idolising idols, we usually take part in out door activities as a fanclub...
So, idolising idols help us to be better!
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Our love for idols, anyways, it advertised for Vietnam, we think so. For example, if a singer post on his/her twitter: “Vietnam!”. How many people who search on Google th key word “vietnam”? Idols sell “PHO VIET NAM” on their countries, how many people who know about the traditional food of Vietnam? Idols wear Ao Dai, how many people who know about the national costume of Vietnam? The answer is: uncountable. And my idol’s mother said that she wanted to visit Vietnam even once!
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So what about idolatry? It’s a disaster! We think so! Not only idols, but also what making people disaster can be the tragedies. However, we have to understand, what’s “tragedy”? Buying DVD of idols, photos of idols to hang them on the wall, queuing for hour to have the signatures of idols, crying hard because of seeing idols etc are tragedies? To us, it’s not! It’s nomarly love. We’re all young, if we don’t fall in love, don’t show and following our love, isn’t it so waste?
Just the YOUTH! A LITTLE CRAZY is normal!
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But idolising idols too much that following them every where and every time, break into their house, give them the horrible presents, deliberately cause accidents in order to be special with idols so they’re disaster! Does it make your relations with idols more robust?
We live on our parents, now because of a stranger, we throw all things!!! What a pity!!!
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Idols are men, they’re not gods! Let’s leave them in their own life and we have to respect ourshelves!
Some of idols have good habit of their mind, but some doesn’t. Some of them are righteous, but some are not. Some of them follow their dreams hard, but some doesn’t. So we have to know what we should learn from them.
And my idol told us “If you didn’t study hard, you wouldn’t be my fan!”
Idol who said this deserves to idolatry, right?
 
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