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e copy paste lại bài của a Nhí sang đây đi em...chị sợ sửa bài ở đó sẽ bị coi là đào mộ bài viết :(
Em sợ bị nói là copy chị @hip2608 ạ. Nhưng thôi có gì anh @Minh Nhí tha lỗi cho em được không a?. Chắc có vài lỗi sai nên chị Yu muốn sửa ạ.JFBQ00159070207B
From adults to teens to children, everyone has stress in everyday life. Adults have the stress of a job, stress caring for families, and stress paying bills. Children at a younger age also face stress when parent's fight, divorce, or are not capable to learn as rapidly as other kids. Teens also face a lot of stress. Teenagers often have a harder time dealing with stresses because they are at an age when it seems not appropriate, or not cool, to ask adults for help, emotions and hormones are out of control, and sometimes they just don't understand stress causes it. Sports, school, and parents are the three main causes for stress.
The first major cause for stress is school. Test taking, trying to achieve excellent grades, starting a new school, trying to fit in, those can cause stress at school, stress cannot be always terrible, some will cause pressure that will cause one to work harder. But mainly stress leads to headaches, lack of concentration, forgetfulness, or stomachaches. I understand this past couple weeks I have undertaken more stress than I ever have felt before. I had these school comp papers due, Seneys huge test coming up, and semester tests in general; this made me feel large amounts of stress. The further students find themselves in school, the extra stress they feel over trying to search out the perfect college and deciding what to do with their lives, I know next year college will only cause additional stress for myself and family dealing with financial aid. Again school is a major source for stress.
A second stress symptom are the sports. Winning or achieving my goal is the greatest accomplishment in the world, when students participate in school sports, feeling stress from coaches, teammates, and parents are common in sports. Coaches want solid work and constant dedication to that specific sport. This causes an enormous stress considering I participate in four sports wit

E2: I think teenagers are as stressed as adults because of many reasons related mainly to school, friends and family.
In fact, doing well at school involves a lot of pressure, because they have to complete school work, projects and reports and study hard for exams.
Then, there is also the stress of having a social life and being accepted by their peers in popular groups in addition to the physical stress which result from some emotional and physical changes which can leave adolescent confused and stressed.
finally, we can mention also the stress that comes from family problems and sibling rivalry.
To sum up, we can say that a lot of reasons can led teenagers to stress, which can provoke violent reactions, depression and health problems.​
 
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Em sợ bị nói là copy chị @hip2608 ạ. Nhưng thôi có gì anh @Minh Nhí tha lỗi cho em được không a?. Chắc có vài lỗi sai nên chị Yu muốn sửa ạ.JFBQ00159070207B
From adults to teens to children, everyone has stress in everyday life. Adults have the stress of a job, stress caring for families, and stress paying bills. Children at a younger age also face stress when parent's fight, divorce, or are not capable to learn as rapidly as other kids. Teens also face a lot of stress. Teenagers often have a harder time dealing with stresses because they are at an age when it seems not appropriate, or not cool, to ask adults for help, emotions and hormones are out of control, and sometimes they just don't understand stress causes it. Sports, school, and parents are the three main causes for stress.
The first major cause for stress is school. Test taking, trying to achieve excellent grades, starting a new school, trying to fit in, those can cause stress at school, stress cannot be always terrible, some will cause pressure that will cause one to work harder. But mainly stress leads to headaches, lack of concentration, forgetfulness, or stomachaches. I understand this past couple weeks I have undertaken more stress than I ever have felt before. I had these school comp papers due, Seneys huge test coming up, and semester tests in general; this made me feel large amounts of stress. The further students find themselves in school, the extra stress they feel over trying to search out the perfect college and deciding what to do with their lives, I know next year college will only cause additional stress for myself and family dealing with financial aid. Again school is a major source for stress.
A second stress symptom are the sports. Winning or achieving my goal is the greatest accomplishment in the world, when students participate in school sports, feeling stress from coaches, teammates, and parents are common in sports. Coaches want solid work and constant dedication to that specific sport. This causes an enormous stress considering I participate in four sports wit

E2: I think teenagers are as stressed as adults because of many reasons related mainly to school, friends and family.
In fact, doing well at school involves a lot of pressure, because they have to complete school work, projects and reports and study hard for exams.
Then, there is also the stress of having a social life and being accepted by their peers in popular groups in addition to the physical stress which result from some emotional and physical changes which can leave adolescent confused and stressed.
finally, we can mention also the stress that comes from family problems and sibling rivalry.
To sum up, we can say that a lot of reasons can led teenagers to stress, which can provoke violent reactions, depression and health problems.​
ừ...chị muốn sửa chút :D
Sports, school, and parents are the three main causes for stress.
Sports, school, and parents are the three main causes of stress.
The first major cause for stress is school
The first major cause of stress in the school
I understand this past couple weeks I have undertaken more stress than I ever have felt before.
I understand this past couple week/ these past couple weeks I have undertaken more stress than I ever have felt before
Again school is a major source for stress.
Again school is a major source of stress.
A second stress symptom are the sports
A second stress symptom is the sports
This causes an enormous stress considering I participate in four sports wit
This causes an enormous stress considering I participate in four sports with
Then, there is also the stress of having a social life and being accepted by their peers in popular groups in addition to the physical stress which result from some emotional and physical changes which can leave adolescent confused and stressed.
Then, there is also the stress of having a social life and being accepted by their peers in popular groups in addition to the physical stress which results from some emotional and physical changes which can leave adolescent confused and stressed.
To sum up, we can say that a lot of reasons can led teenagers to stress, which can provoke violent reactions, depression and health problems.
To sum up, we can say that a lot of reasons can lead teenagers to stress, which can provoke violent reactions, depression and health problems.
P/s: @Minh Nhí nếu a thấy sai sót, mong a sẽ góp ý ạ...e cảm ơn :D
 
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