Technology & studying at home

[Lê Khánh Chi]

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mọi người sửa giúp e bài này ah!!!! thanks
Writing (Write an "agree or disagree" paragraph)
I agree with the idea that with the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Firstly, it's very convenient that students can learn online whatever, whenever and wherever they want. Secondly, the internet is very useful because it helps students finds informations easily and quickly. On some education forum, students can ask any questions about the things they don't know and get the answers in some minutes, from people all over the world. Thirdly, parents can manage their children while they are studying onlines. Furthermore, students don't have to buys books or spend too much money on travelling to school. In conclusion, technology developments are useful and essential in our modern lives today. Although they contain some drawbacks, they'll best serve us if we use them for their true purpose and at the appropriate time.

 

[Nguyễn Như Tuyết]

mọi người sửa giúp e bài này ah!!!! thanks
Writing (Write an "agree or disagree" paragraph)
I agree with the idea that with the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Firstly, it's very convenient that students can learn online whatever, whenever and wherever they want. Secondly, the internet is very useful because it helps students finds informations easily and quickly. On some education forum, students can ask any questions about the things they don't know and get the answers in some minutes, from people all over the world. Thirdly, parents can manage their children while they are studying onlines. Furthermore, students don't have to buys books or spend too much money on travelling to school. In conclusion, technology developments are useful and essential in our modern lives today. Although they contain some drawbacks, they'll best serve us if we use them for their true purpose and at the appropriate time.

I agree with the idea that with the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Firstly, it's very convenient that students can learn online whatever, whenever and wherever they want. Secondly, the internet is very useful because it helps students finds information(information không đếm được nhá) easily and quickly. On some education forum, students can ask any questions about the things they don't know and get the answers in some minutes, from people all over the world. Thirdly, parents can manage their children while they are studying online. Furthermore, students don't have to buy(have to+V-inf) books or spend too much money on travelling to school. In conclusion, technology developments are useful and essential in our modern lives today. Although they contain some drawbacks, they'll best serve us if we use them for their true purpose and at the appropriate time.

 

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I agree with => on (agree on sth; agree with sb) the idea that with the help of technology, students will benefit greatly from studying by themselves at home. Firstly, it's very convenient that students can learn online whatever, whenever and wherever they want. Secondly, the internet is very useful because it helps students finds=> find (students số nhiều) informations => information ( không đếm được ) easily and quickly. On some education forum, students can ask any questions about the things they don't know and get the answers in some minutes,=>bỏ dấu phẩy from people all over the world. Thirdly, parents can manage their children while they are studying onlines=>online (online thì không tội gì phải thêm s). Furthermore, students don't have to buys =>buy books or spend too much money on travelling to school. In conclusion, technology developments are useful and essential in our modern lives today. Although they contain some drawbacks, they'll best serve us if we use them for their true purpose and at the appropriate time.
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