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Đề: write bout your family customs and tradditions.

Almost all family in Vietnam have a lot of customs and traditions . My family also has some own customs and tradditions. Firstly, it's the custom in my family to have dinner at 6p.m sharp and we have to get up early in the morning to do morning exercises. secondly, we have the tradition that we always visit our ancestor's graves on the first day of lunar new year and go to a pagoda to pray the best wishes for my family. thirdly, there is a custom in my family that we go out together on sunday evenings. we will go to the cinema, go shopping and do all fun things on that nights. All my family member enjoys those customs and traditions because they make my family a sense of belonging and help us closer and closer.
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[Phạm Dương]

Almost all families in Vietnam have a lot of customs and traditions. My family also has some own customs and traditions (nghe 2 câu đầu nghe giống mỗi nhà 1 phong tục tập quán khác nhau, mỗi nhà 1 vẻ, không ai giống ai). Firstly, it's the custom in my family to have dinner at 6 p.m sharp and we have to get up early in the morning to do morning exercises (lvì sao phải là 6h mà không phải 5h hay 7h? từ đâu có? tập thể dục để làm gì?). Secondly, we have the tradition that we always visit our ancestor's graves on the first day of the lunar new year and go to a pagoda to pray the best wishes for my family (cái này giống phong tục của người miền Bắc mà em). thirdly, there is a custom in my family that we go out together on Sunday evenings. we will go to the cinema, go shopping and do all the fun things on those nights (và rồi mục đích của tối chủ nhật để làm gì?). All my family member enjoys those customs and traditions because they make my family a sense of belonging and help us closer and closer. (Suy nghĩ của em về những thứ em vừa viết)