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mọi ng` sửa ngữ pháp giúp em bài nài

If i ruled the world, the first thing i'd do is make the goverment spend more money on invest stuff that use solar power.In my opinion , i think that this work will make global warming stop and help bring back the fresh air.
The second thing i'd do is make the lesson shorter. In my view, students should play more and study enough.
The next thing i'd do is ban hunting because i don't like to see people kill those poor animals.
There are some less serious thíng i'd do,too. I'd make comic books free for children and develope music industry.

 

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mọi ng` sửa ngữ pháp giúp em bài nài

if i ruled the world, the first thing i'd do is make the goverment spend more money on invest( investing chứ) stuff that use solar power.in my opinion , i think that( bỏ that đi , nghe hơi kỳ) this work will make global warming(the warming global situation: Tình trạng trái đất nóng lên) stop and help bring back the fresh air.
the second thing i'd do is make the lesson shorter. In my view, students should play more and study enough.
the next thing i'd do is ban hunting because i don't like to see people thó poor animals.
there are some less serious thíng i'd do,too. I'd make comic books free( tớ ko hiểu ý này cho lắm) for children and develope music industry.

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[kuckutkute]

mọi ng` sửa ngữ pháp giúp em bài nài

If i ruled the world, the first thing i'd do is make -> to make/ makin' the goverment spend more money on invest stuff that use solar power.In my opinion , i think that this work will make global warming stop -> stop bein warmed up and help bring back the fresh air.
The second thing i'd do is make the lesson shorter-> to lessen the studyin'. In my view, students should play more and study enough.
The next thing i'd do is ban -> to ban hunting because i don't like to see people kill those poor animals. -> I think protectin wild life/ poor(wild) animals is necessary
There are some less serious thíng i'd do,too. I'd make comic books free for children and develope music industry.-> I ll alow children to read comic for free or without payin. I'd make an enermous step in music developement

tớ sửa bừa, vài cái sửa nghĩa cho hợp, sai thì vẫn phải tks nhá )

 

[dangkhai_99]

If i ruled the world, the first thing i'd do is make the goverment spend more money on invest stuff that use solar power.In my opinion , i think that this work will make global warming stop and help bring back the fresh air.
The second thing i'd do is make the lesson shorter. In my view, students should play more and study enough.
The next thing i'd do is ban hunting because i don't like to see people kill those poor animals.
There are some less serious thíng i'd do,too. I'd make comic books free for children and develope music industry.

'd= would mà nếu bạn dùng là I'd thì phải có like to
Mình nghĩ bạn nên thay I'd thành I'll (I will)

 

[kuckutkute]

If i ruled the world, the first thing i'd do is make the goverment spend more money on invest stuff that use solar power.In my opinion , i think that this work will make global warming stop and help bring back the fresh air.
The second thing i'd do is make the lesson shorter. In my view, students should play more and study enough.
The next thing i'd do is ban hunting because i don't like to see people kill those poor animals.
There are some less serious thíng i'd do,too. I'd make comic books free for children and develope music industry.

'd= would mà nếu bạn dùng là I'd thì phải có like to
Mình nghĩ bạn nên thay I'd thành I'll (I will)

tớ nghĩ dùng i'd do st là đúng rồi, cậu nên xem lại kiến thức về câu điều kiện : dùng type 2 để diễn tả kết quả của một hành động khó có thể xảy ra .. If +s+v , S+ will : type 1 này dùng để diễn tả kq của hd sẽ xảy ra ở tương lai :d