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Topic: Write a paragraph (50-60 words) about the problems of overpopulation.

Nowadays, many countries are facing up to overpopulation-serious problem. In 2017, the world population reached the figure of 7,49 billion. We can be seen that the world population has been increasing faster and faster. Overpopulation leads to lots of results such as poor living conditions, low living standards, not enough food, joblessness and shortage of school, hospital,... If the world's population continued to grow at the current rate, the earth would not be able to sustain its population and the number of people will decrease. We need understand the danger of problem, we should find the way to solve them.

 

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Topic: Write a paragraph (50-60 words) about the problems of overpopulation.

Nowadays, many countries are facing up to overpopulation-serious problem. In 2017, the world population reached the figure of 7,49 billion. We can be seen that the world population has been increasing faster and faster. Overpopulation leads to lots of results such as poor living conditions, low living standards, not enough food, joblessness and shortage of school, hospital,... If the world's population continued to grow at the current rate, the earth would not be able to sustain its population and the number of people will decrease. We need understand the danger of problem, we should find the way to solve them.

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Nowadays, many countries are facing up to overpopulation-serious problem.

Today, many countries are facing serious problems.

We can be seen that the world population has been increasing faster and faster.

We can see that the world population is growing faster and faster.

not enough food, joblessness and shortage of school, hospita

insufficient food, unemployment and the lack of schools, hospitals, etc.

the number of people will decrease.

would

We need understand the danger of problem, we should find the way to solve them.

We need to understand the dangers of the problem, we should seek to address them

 

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Topic: Write a paragraph (50-60 words) about the problems of overpopulation.

Nowadays, many countries are facing up to overpopulation-serious problem. In 2017, the world population reached the figure of 7,49 billion. We can be seen that the world population has been increasing faster and faster. Overpopulation leads to lots of results such as poor living conditions, low living standards, not enough food, joblessness and shortage of school, hospital,... If the world's population continued to grow at the current rate, the earth would not be able to sustain its population and the number of people will decrease. We need understand the danger of problem, we should find the way to solve them.

Nowadays, many countries are facing up to overpopulation-serious problem.

Nowadays, many countries are facing up to the overpopulation-serious problem

We need understand the danger of problem, we should find the way to solve them.

We need to understand the danger of problem, we should find the way to solve them