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Write about one of the subjects you like best

When I am asked about my favourite subject, maybe it’s a little bit confused. Noneless, I think I like English best.


There’ re many reations for me to chose English. Fisrt, that’s about the requirement. Nowadays, every single of company, university or school all request the student have to know how to speak English. So if you want to pass in a good university, you must learn English for sure.
Second, when you study hard, learn from morning till night and then you get a good job in a out country-company, you have to communicate with everyone who don’t speak your mother tongue by English. Thus, English play an important thing in your work and life.
And last, when you grow up and you can afford for your life, when you utterly can have a long-vacation abroad, you definitely must communicate with the foreigner, consequently, English becomes a advantage for you to talk with another people, help you make friends, and understand the traditional culture of another country.


This is all advantage I want to mention about English. It help me have a better life so I think I like it best.

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Noneless, I think I like English best.
Bạn có thể viết
At school, I have learnt a lot of subjects such as Maths, Literature, Physics,.... Of all the subjects, I like English best
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Fisrt, that’s about the requirement.
bạn nên viết:
Firstly, English is a requirement for our study
every single of company, university or school all request the student have to know how to speak English
all the universities select students who can speak English. And English is a compulsory subject at school, too. If you want to pass in a good university, you must learn English for sure.
And last, when you grow up and you can afford for your life, when you utterly can have a long-vacation abroad, you definitely must communicate with the foreigner, consequently, English becomes a advantage for you to talk with another people, help you make friends, and understand the traditional culture of another country.
bạn nên chuyển đoạn này lên trước đoạn second bởi vì bạn đang nói lý do bạn học English cho ý được rành mạch hơn
bạn có thể viết như thế này
Second, when we grow up, we can apply it for our life . When you have a long-vacation abroad, you definitely must communicate with the foreigner. Consequently, English becomes a advantage for you to talk with another people, help you make friends, and understand the traditional culture of another country. Moreover, English is an important language that helps you find a good job
This is all advantages I want to mention about . It help me have a better life so I think I like it best.
Second, when you study hard, learn from morning till night and then you get a good job in a out country-company, you have to communicate with everyone who don’t speak your mother tongue by English. Thus, English play an important thing in your work and life.
Đoạn này bạn nên thay thế bằng cách chia sẻ cách học tiếng anh của bạn để góp phần cho bài bạn hay hơn

Bạn nên chọn những chi tiết cần thiết nhất và dễ viết nhất để hoàn thành bài luận, không nên sử dụng yếu tố tiếng việt nhiều để viết thành bài luận. Nếu bạn muốn bài bạn phong phú hơn thì bạn nên học thêm từ vựng, cấu trúc câu,... nhé !
Bạn tham khảo nha
 
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