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I am living in a nuclear family with my parents and my older brother. So i will talk about my type of family that i'm living in what i like and dislike. Nuclear family is family that two generations are living under the same roof. Traditionally, it means that the parents are living with their children. I like my type of family because i learn a lot of lessons from my parents about kindness, responsibility and honesty. Firstly, living in nuclear family is comfortable because there aren't many different viewpoints so conflicts don't hapeen. Secondly, everyone will share the household chores equally and finish it . Thirdly, all family members have their own space to work or relax. However, when my brother leaves home and goes to school in city. Sometimes, i feel lonely- that is one of the disadvantages which i don't like about living in nuclear family
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I am living in a nuclear family with my parents and my older brother. So i will talk about my type of family that i'm living in what i like and dislike. Nuclear family is family that two generations are living under the same roof. Traditionally, it means that the parents are living with their children. I like my type of family because i learn a lot of lessons from my parents about kindness, responsibility and honesty. Firstly, living in nuclear family is comfortable because there aren't many different viewpoints so conflicts don't hapeen. Secondly, everyone will share the household chores equally and finish it . Thirdly, all family members have their own space to work or relax. However, when my brother leaves home and goes to school in city. Sometimes, i feel lonely- that is one of the disadvantages which i don't like about living in nuclear family
Thank you!!!

I am living in a nuclear family with my parents and my older brother. So I will talk about my type of family that I'm living in what I like and dislike. Nuclear family is the family that two generations are living under the same roof. Traditionally, it means that the parents are living with their children. I like my type of family because I learn a lot of lessons from my parents about kindness, responsibility and honesty. Firstly, living in a nuclear family is comfortable because there aren't many viewpoints so conflicts don't hapeen. Secondly, everyone will share the household chores equally and finish it. Thirdly, all family members have their own space to work or relax. However, when my brother leaves home and goes to school in the city. Sometimes, I feel lonely- that is one of the disadvantages which I don't like about living in nuclear family.


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