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My name's Huong. I'm in 11T2 class. I was born in family comprises about 6 member. There are my parent, two my brother, my sister and me. My parent are farmers. My sister and two my brothers are students. They have special personality and everyone is wonderful for me. To have many acquaintances to judge me "you are friendly, outgoing, talkative, and humorous". But i think i'm naughty and a little crazy. I like freedom, to take part in volunteer organization to help people to overcome problems in life. I dislike selfish, gruff and i very hate to suspect someone of something. In my opinion, the important thing in life is to listen to anything. When you to listen, you can understand and avoid conflict. So i have dreamed to become a doctor about psychological to listen and to solve the problem for anyone. And you should to listen to love. "
 

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My name's Huong. I'm in 11T2 class. I was born in family comprises about 6 member. There are my parent, two my brother, my sister and me. My parent are farmers. My sister and two my brothers are students. They have special personality and everyone is wonderful for me. To have many acquaintances to judge me "you are friendly, outgoing, talkative, and humorous". But i think i'm naughty and a little crazy. I like freedom, to take part in volunteer organization to help people to overcome problems in life. I dislike selfish, gruff and i very hate to suspect someone of something. In my opinion, the important thing in life is to listen to anything. When you to listen, you can understand and avoid conflict. So i have dreamed to become a doctor about psychological to listen and to solve the problem for anyone. And you should to listen to love. "
My name's Huong. I'm in 11T2 class. I was born in a family comprises about 6 members. There are my parent, two of my brother, my sister and me. My parent is farmers. My sister and my other two brothers are students. They have a special personality and everyone is wonderful to me. To have many acquaintances to judge me "you are friendly, outgoing, talkative, and humorous". But I think I'm naughty and a little crazy. I like freedom, to take part in volunteer organization to help people to overcome problems in life. I dislike selfish, gruff and I very hate to suspect someone of something. In my opinion, the important thing in life is to listen to everything (anything). When you listen, you are understandable and able to avoiding conflict. So I have dreamed of becoming a doctor in psychological to listen and solve the problem for anyone. And you should listen to love. " Bạn tham khảo nhé:D
 

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My name's Huong. I'm in 11T2 class. I was born in family which comprises of 6 members. There are my parents, two my brothers, my sister and me. My parents are farmers. My sister and two my brothers are students. They have special personality and everyone is wonderful for me. To have many acquaintances to judge me "you are friendly, outgoing, talkative, and humorous". But I think I'm naughty and a little crazy. I like freedom, taking part in volunteer organization to help people to overcome problems in life. I dislike selfishness, gruff and I very hate to suspect someone of something. In my opinion, the important thing in life is to listen to something. When you listen, you can understand and avoid conflicting. So I have dreamed to become a doctor about psychology to listen and to solve the problems for anyone. And you should listen to love. "
mình đã sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cho bạn, mong bạn sẽ tham khảo nhé
 
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