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Đềbài:
Think about a problem that your community is having. Write a short paragraph to propose a volunteer activity to help solve problem
- What is the problem?
- What are the negative consequences of that problem
- What do you want to do to help solve that problem
- How are you going to do it
Bài làm

My community is experiencing problems with landfills that are getting too full. Producing too much trash pollutes the environment, and that's not good for my community "s long-term health. So,I would like to propose a volunteer activity to sovle this problem. I would like to create a garbage cleaning project To do this i need help from everyone in the community. let us join together to create a cleaner and more beautifull enviroment .Firstly, we can do help improve the situation by recycling .We will collect the rubbish and recycle it.Seconly,We will all distribute leaflets to spread the word for all people not littering the environment.We will contribute money to do this.Finally,We will plant more trees .We will plant more trees instead of littering.So it good for our health .We will try earnestly to do this project.I hope we will succeed as planned
CÁc bạn hãy sửa lỗi bài văn trên hộ mình.Mình cần gấp .Thanks trước ^.^

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My community is experiencing problems with landfills that are getting too full. Producing too much trash pollutes the environment is not good for my community's long-term health. So,I would like to propose a volunteer activity to solve this problem. I would like to create a garbage cleaning project. To do this, I need help from everyone in the community. Let us join together to create a cleaner and more beautiful enviroment .Firstly, we can improve the situation by recycling .We will collect the rubbish and recycle it.Secondly, we will all distribute leaflets to spread the word to all people that they shouldn't litter the enviroment.We will contribute money to do this.Finally,We will plant more trees .We will plant more trees instead of littering so that it is good for our health .We will earnestly try to do this project.I hope we will succeed as planned
 

miiachimte456

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Đềbài:
Think about a problem that your community is having. Write a short paragraph to propose a volunteer activity to help solve problem
- What is the problem?
- What are the negative consequences of that problem
- What do you want to do to help solve that problem
- How are you going to do it
Bài làm

My community is experiencing problems with landfills that are getting too full. Producing too much trash pollutes the environment, which is not good for my community "s long-term health. So,I would like to propose a volunteer activity to sovle this problem. I would like to create a garbage-cleaning project . To do this i need help from everyone in the community. let us join together to create a cleaner and more beautifull environment .Firstly, we can help improve the situation by recycling .We will collect the rubbish and recycle it.Seconly,We will all distribute leaflets to spread the word for all people not littering the environment.We will contribute money to do this.Finally,We will plant more trees instead of littering, because it is good for our health .We will try earnestly to do this project.I hope we will succeed as we had planned before.
CÁc bạn hãy sửa lỗi bài văn trên hộ mình.Mình cần gấp .Thanks trước ^.^

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