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my last weekend was very interesting bc I with my brothers celebrated the birthday of my mom. She is a busy woman and rarely has relaxing tie so we wanted to give her a surprise. This morning, we pretended to be asleep until she worked. After her left, we woke up and prepared everything with my father's help. We cleaned and decorated the house. My brothers was eager to do this bs we had many bubbles. The important preparation is doing a cake. Although it was the first time, i finish it with the support of my dad. It tasted chocolate, had 2 floods and was decorated many cherries on. in the afternoon, when my mother arrived, she was astonished and pathetic. We took a photo and ate together. It is a unforgettable memory for me
CHỦ ĐỀ: write a paragraph about your last weekend

 

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my last weekend was very interesting bc I with (and, dùng and ok hơn bạn nhé) my brothers celebrated the birthday of my( our, nếu trên kia bạn để là tôi và anh trai tôi tổ chức sinh nhật cho mẹ thì nên là của chúng tôi nhé) mom. She is a busy woman and rarely has relaxing tie(time) so we wanted to give her a surprise. This morning ( that morning, việc này xảy ra từ tuần trước nên phải để là buoir sáng hôm đó), we pretended to be asleep until she worked. After her left( leaving, left là động từ không thể đứng sau tính từ được bạn nhé), we woke up and prepared everything with my father's help. We cleaned and decorated the house. My brothers was eager to do this bs we had many bubbles. The important preparation is doing a cake (was making a cake, sự việc xảy ra trong quá khứ, và nếu bạn muốn nói là làm bánh thì bạn nên dùng cụm “ bake a cake” hoặc “make a cake”). Although it was the first time, i finish( finished, sự việc trong quá khứ) it with the support of my dad. It tasted chocolate, had 2 floods and was decorated many cherries on. in the afternoon, when my mother arrived( came back home), she was astonished and pathetic. We took a photo and ate together. It is a(an) unforgettable memory for me

CHỦ ĐỀ: write a paragraph about your last weekend

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