Z
zen_7486
[TẶNG BẠN] TRỌN BỘ Bí kíp học tốt 08 môn
Chắc suất Đại học top - Giữ chỗ ngay!!
ĐĂNG BÀI NGAY để cùng trao đổi với các thành viên siêu nhiệt tình & dễ thương trên diễn đàn.
Xin chào các bạn , mình tên là Zen ( biệt danh ) mình có làm một bài viết về một kỉ niệm đáng nhớ của em bằng tiếng anh, các bạn sửa giùm mình về cấu trúc câu ... nha , cám ơn các bạn nhiều.
Bài Viết
One day, a few of my friends and I went on a trip to Cam Ranh, a small interesting places on the coast of Nha Trang.
Cam Ranh about five miles from Nha Trang
, A town famous in this area. The beach at Cam Ranh is beautiful, and has an iron mine near.
We arrived that morning. Upon leaving the bus, we divided into different groups and look for shady places to spend the day.
Soon, most of us went swimming. While in the water, we played some fun games . People on the beach have been playing other games. Some of them even sing and dance, at that time a person shouted : '' help me, help me '' and i jumped into the sea and helped a person that on the coast, people were running back and watch ,Fortunately, she was okay. then we have brought her home
In short, everyone enjoyed the trip. In the evening, we returned home on our bus, think of the fun that we had there. it is each lesson for those who swim the implementation should be careful. This anniversary is truly memorable
. I enjoyed the trip very much.
>-
Bài Viết
One day, a few of my friends and I went on a trip to Cam Ranh, a small interesting places on the coast of Nha Trang.
Cam Ranh about five miles from Nha Trang
, A town famous in this area. The beach at Cam Ranh is beautiful, and has an iron mine near.
We arrived that morning. Upon leaving the bus, we divided into different groups and look for shady places to spend the day.
Soon, most of us went swimming. While in the water, we played some fun games . People on the beach have been playing other games. Some of them even sing and dance, at that time a person shouted : '' help me, help me '' and i jumped into the sea and helped a person that on the coast, people were running back and watch ,Fortunately, she was okay. then we have brought her home
In short, everyone enjoyed the trip. In the evening, we returned home on our bus, think of the fun that we had there. it is each lesson for those who swim the implementation should be careful. This anniversary is truly memorable
. I enjoyed the trip very much.
>-