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Living in big city is something that many young people dream about. But living in a city can cause a lot of drawbacks such as: air pollution, high cost of living, noise,… But, the most important problem I think is traffic . It comes from many reasons. Firstly, The population of the city is overcrowded make the demand for travel higher, From there comes a second problem that the streets very narrow and many potholes.And the last reason is that there are too many means of transportation such as car, motorbike and few public transport. From the above causes have effected to traffic jam, People take hours to move and the work can be delayed. One very serious and growing consequence is that accident. It í very terrible.In conclusion, beside advantages living in the city has many disadvantages too. They should have solutions to solve this problem.

 

[Quân KUN sKy]

bạn viết hay đấy
đúng rồi bạn
^^

 

[tuananh982]

Living in a big city is something that many young people dream about. But living in a city can cause a lot of drawbacks such as: air pollution, high cost of living, noise,… => etc. But, the most important problem I think is traffic . It comes from many reasons. Firstly, The population of the city is overcrowded make the demand for travel higher, From there comes a second problem that the streets very narrow and many potholes.And the last reason is that there are too many means of transportation such as car, motorbike and few public transport. From the above causes have effected to traffic jam, People take hours to move and the work can be delayed. One very serious and growing consequence is that accident. It í very terrible.In conclusion, beside advantages living in the city has many disadvantages too. They should have solutions to solve this problem.
còn lại nội dung mình thấy ổn

 

[shirona]

Living in the big city is something that many young people dream about. But living in a city can cause a lot of drawbacks such as air pollution, the high cost of living, noise,… But, the most important problem I think is the traffic. It comes from many reasons. Firstly, The population of the city is overcrowded make the demand for travel higher, From there comes a second problem that the streets very narrow and many potholes. And the last reason is that there are too many means of transportation such as the car, motorbike and few public transport. From the above causes have affected traffic jam, People take hours to move and the work can be delayed. One very serious and growing consequence is that accident. It is very terrible. In conclusion, besides the advantages of living in the city has many disadvantages too. They should have solutions to solve this problem.

chỗ gạch chân là mình sửa luôn rồi đấy

 

[ngochaad]

chỗ gạch chân là mình sửa luôn rồi đấy

Living in the ===> a big city is something that many young people dream about.
ko thể xác định được nha bạn . Đây là ns chung về các thành phố lớn chứ ko phải 1 thành phố đã xác định