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[Huỳnh Nguyễn Bích Vân]

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Bài 1( Write about you):
I am very lucky enough to have a lot of frieds but my best friend is Nguyen Linh Chi.We are same years old, 14 years old. She lives at Ha Tinh. She is very tall but she is thin and has long straight black hair. She lives with her parents and elder sister. Her father is a bussiness man and her mother is a English teacher. Her elder sister is a student. Chi is very kind and sometimes, she's very humorous. She always helps other people. Her hobbies are reading books and study English. Her best friends are Hieu,Vy and me. I like playing with her very much.
Đề 2: Write about your sister
This is my sister. Her name is Mai. She sixteen years old. She is a student. She's tall but she's thin. She has long straight black hair. She is helpful and generous, she always helps everyone. She likes cooking and reading books. Her best friends are Nga and Lan. I love her.
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Bài 1( Write about you):
I am very lucky enough to have a lot of friends but my best friend is Nguyen Linh Chi.We are the same age, 14 years old. She lives at Ha Tinh. She is very tall but she is thin and has long straight black hair. She lives with her parents and her elder sister. Her father is a business man and her mother is an English teacher. Her elder sister is a student. Chi is very kind and sometimes, she's very humorous. She always helps other people. Her hobbies are reading books and studying English. Her best friends are Hieu,Vy and me. I like playing with her very much.
Đề 2: Write about your sister
This is my sister. Her name is Mai. She is sixteen years old. She is a student. She's tall but thin. She has long straight black hair. She is helpful and generous, she always helps everyone. She likes cooking and reading books. Her best friends are Nga and Lan. I love her.

 

[Huỳnh Nguyễn Bích Vân]

Bài 1( Write about you):
I am very lucky enough to have a lot of friends but my best friend is Nguyen Linh Chi.We are the same age, 14 years old. She lives at Ha Tinh. She is very tall but she is thin and has long straight black hair. She lives with her parents and her elder sister. Her father is a business man and her mother is an English teacher. Her elder sister is a student. Chi is very kind and sometimes, she's very humorous. She always helps other people. Her hobbies are reading books and studying English. Her best friends are Hieu,Vy and me. I like playing with her very much.
Đề 2: Write about your sister
This is my sister. Her name is Mai. She is sixteen years old. She is a student. She's tall but thin. She has long straight black hair. She is helpful and generous, she always helps everyone. She likes cooking and reading books. Her best friends are Nga and Lan. I love her.

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