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Đề bài : according to recent approaches to eduction, students with physical ( not mental ) disablities should attend ordinary school. Nevertheless many people believe that these students should be educated in special schools in isolation. To what extent do u concur with this point of view u should provide reasons to support ur viewpoint
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Firstly, all children deserve the right ot an education. students with physical disabilities don't just learn some subjects such as: physical education, music, engineering......... However, they can take part in the lecture about the norms of society. For example, the children with hearing impairment will be taught about traffic signs by specialised teachers instead of sitting quite in the music lessons.
Secondly, the ordinary school will help the disabled become more sociable and friendly. By listening their stories and emotion, the normal student can figure out more solution to help them overcome the difficulties in the class. This will partly break the barrier with the disabled students and non- disabled students
lastly, the disabled can creat their own courage and strong will when participating in school. They can be tear away and contempt because of their lack of body. However, don't worry. They are able to prove that the imperfections of the body won't prevent them from achieving success in the school through their academic result. From that , if they weather the storms, they can become more confident in the life

 

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Đề bài : according to recent approaches to eduction, students with physical ( not mental ) disablities should attend ordinary school. Nevertheless many people believe that these students should be educated in special schools in isolation. To what extent do u concur with this point of view u should provide reasons to support ur viewpoint
Mình chọn qđ thứ nhất nha các bạn . mình chỉ viết thân bài thôi
Firstly, all children deserve the right ot an education. students with physical disabilities don't just learn some subjects such as: physical education, music, engineering......... However, they can take part in the lecture about the norms of society. For example, the children with hearing impairment will be taught about traffic signs by specialised teachers instead of sitting quite in the music lessons.
Secondly, the ordinary school will help the disabled become more sociable and friendly. By listening their stories and emotion, the normal student can figure out more solution to help them overcome the difficulties in the class. This will partly break the barrier with the disabled students and non- disabled students
lastly, the disabled can creat their own courage and strong will when participating in school. They can be tear away and contempt because of their lack of body. However, don't worry. They are able to prove that the imperfections of the body won't prevent them from achieving success in the school through their academic result. From that , if they weather the storms, they can become more confident in the life

1. students with physical disabilities don't just learn some subjects such as: physical education, music, engineering......... However, they can take part in the lecture about the norms of society => hai câu này có thể nối = not only ... but also này Students with physical disabilities not only need to learn some subjects such as: physical education, music, engineering... but also take part in the lecture about the norms of society

2. Secondly, the ordinary school will help the disabled become more sociable and friendly => Secondly, the ordinary school will create the disabled a good environment to become more sociable and amiable people in society

3. This will partly break the barrier with the disabled students and non- disabled students => This will partly break/tear down the barrier between the ...

4. lastly, the disabled can creat their own courage and strong will when participating in school. => Lastly, the disabled can create their own courage and strong when putting themselves in the environment of the ordinary school

5,. They can be tear away and contempt because of their lack of body. However, don't worry. They are able to prove that the imperfections of the body won't prevent them from achieving success in the school through their academic result. From that , if they weather the storms,they can become more confident in the life => They can be torn away and have a feeling of being neglected because of their lack of body. However, they are able to prove that the imperfections of the body won't prevent them from achieving success in the school through their academic result. From that , if they weather the storms,they can become more confident in the life