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I have a lot of dreams for the future. For a career, I really want to become an English teacher in my country. Being a teacher is a dream for me since childhood. I'm trying to improve myself everyday. I hope the dream can come true.
First, I want to explain why I want to become an English teacher in Vietnam. In our country, English education is only the beginning of our society. People have the passion to learn it. Then, because of globalization, our country needs a great deal of English control. All diplomatic matters require English. If I was an English teacher, I would help people learn English well. Then all the work will be very easy. This is really great,
Being a teacher is a harder task than I thought. It can require many degrees, qualifications and abilities. I have the passion to be a teacher. I think this is a very important thing. I like communicating with different people and introducing my own country. I am always proud of my country.
On the other hand, I have many weaknesses in English. Being a teacher is a far cry for me. I have to improve English to teach students. English requires all skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Sure, I will spend a lot of time practicing my skills. I must have a good background in English. In addition, teachers should have some psychological knowledge that I have never touched before. Capturing student psychology is really essential to helping students grasp the best
To do good work for today is the most important thing today. Future career is just a goal for me to work hard. Get a good result in the national high school exam and get into a university that is all I will have to do in the near future. yes i will achieve my dream.
 

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I have a lot of dreams for the future. For a career, I really want to become an English teacher (à teacher of English) in my country. Being a teacher is (has been) a dream for me ( my dream) since (My) childhood. I'm trying ( I try ) ( mình nghĩ k nhất thiết phải dùng HTTD) to improve myself everyday. I hope the dream can come true.
First, I want to explain why I want to become an English teacher in Vietnam. In our country, English education is only the beginning of our society. People have the passion to learn it. Then, because of globalization, our country needs a great deal of English control. All diplomatic matters require English. If I was an English teacher, I would help people learn English well. Then all the work will be very easy. This ( nên dùng that) is really great,
Being a teacher is a harder task than I thought. It can require many degrees, qualifications and abilities. I have the passion to be a teacher. I think this (it) is a very important thing. I like communicating with different people and introducing my own country. I am always proud of my country.
On the other hand, I have many weaknesses in English. Being a teacher is a far cry for me. I have to improve English to teach students. English requires all skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Surely, I will spend a lot of time practicing my skills. I must have a good background in English. In addition, teachers should have some psychological knowledge that I have never touched before. Capturing student psychology is really essential to helping students grasp the best
To do good work for today is the most important thing today ( câu này hơi tối nghĩa ). Future career is just a goal for me to work hard. Get a good result in the national high school exam and get into a university that ( không cần dùng that) is ( are) all I will have to do in the near future. yes i will achieve my dream
Thật ra phần mở đầu k cần viết dài như thế.
Nếu bạn đã dùng first ở ý 1 thì ý hai không ghi là on the other hand. Và khi bạn giải thích về lý do bạn chọn, hãy để tối thiểu 2 ý và tối đa 3 ý. Và phàn việc bạn làm gì để trở thành teacher tách ý riêng như vậy , bạn viết khá tốt
Từ Being...own country nếu là ya đoạn một thì hơi dính đến đoạn hai rồi ( require các thứ í) Bạn có thế chuyển phần này thành second . Main idea chính là sở thích của bạn. Và cố gắng phát triênr thêm
Mình tìm được một số lỗi ngữ pháp như thế.
 
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