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ĐỀ BÀI: nowdays, the way many people interact with other has changed because of technology. In that way has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development
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Due to the development of technology, the way people keep in touch has many changes. In my opinion, the development has both positive and negative effects
Let us begin by looking at the negative. firstly, people become more isolate. They only concentrate on the iphone, ipad...... instead of concerning about their real relationships. Especially young people, they now tend to be tempted into the virtual world where they can build relationships with strangers. It isn't fully good. Secondly, the technology makes unreal relationships go up dramatically. Through the social networks, people can make friends from nationalities whom you don't have the faintest idea her character. It can bring about your being lied. This is in danger.
On the other hand, the positive of this development can't be denied. Firstly, using technology is a way of communication with other. For example, when people are away from home for other reasons, they still contact with their relatives by telephone, smartphone,........It is cheap and doesn't waste time. Secondly, everyone can make more friends who come from different culture, custom...they can exchange their knowledge about the countries and this will be very helpful if they have intention of applying for the foreign companies. Last but not least, people will have their bussiness improved, Carrying goods becomes easy and saves travel expense. Moreover, they can find and access to many investors or parters to expand their work.
Although the development of technology has 2 aspects to the human's relationships , the benefits are outweigh the drawbacks . Therefore, people need to use technology suitably to promote its positive.
 
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ĐỀ BÀI: nowdays, the way many people interact with other has changed because of technology. In that way has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development
BL

Due to the development of technology, the way people keep in touch has many changes. In my opinion, the development has both positive and negative effects
Let us begin by looking at the negative. firstly, people become more isolate. They only concentrate on the iphone, ipad...... instead of concerning about their real relationships. Especially young people, they now tend to be tempted into the virtual world where they can build relationships with strangers. It isn't fully good. Secondly, the technology makes unreal relationships go up dramatically. Through the social networks, people can make friends from nationalities whom you don't have the faintest idea her character. It can bring about your being lied. This is in danger.
On the other hand, the positive of this development can't be denied. Firstly, using technology is a way of communication with other. For example, when people are away from home for other reasons, they still contact with their relatives by telephone, smartphone,........It is cheap and doesn't waste time. Secondly, everyone can make more friends who come from different culture, custom...they can exchange their knowledge about the countries and this will be very helpful if they have intention of applying for the foreign companies. Last but not least, people will have their bussiness improved, Carrying goods becomes easy and saves travel expense. Moreover, they can find and access to many investors or parters to expand their work.
Although the development of technology has 2 aspects to the human's relationships , the benefits are outweigh the drawbacks . Therefore, people need to use technology suitably to promote its positive.
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