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the beautiful country that i want to set foot in is KOREA. there are many reasons that i would like to visit this country. For one thing, it looks like a stunningly beautiful . Its natural scenery seems captivating to me with so many interest landscapes. South Korea is a land country with economic in development so the life of people stabilixed. Anorther reason, because i have seem so many shows that hight the great places to goand yummy things to eat in koreaand i want to see everythingfirst hnd instead of though a television sreen. Andthe last reason that make mewant to visit korea by KPOP of this place,because i realy like kpop music, i want see these the best kpop music stages and how special that can meet my IDOL
IT is possible with me current conditions, the korea is a step too far for me to make sure. i will later visited this country. KOREA the beautiful country..wait for me...
mình hỏi mọi người để viết bài này, xin hãy giúp mình làn nữa, chữa,sủa sai,thay đổi bài của mình giúp với..MAI MÌNH THI ÒI

 

[Issy Key]

Hi bạn, bạn tham khảo bài mình nhé ^^

it looks like a stunningly beautifu

This destination looks stunningly beautiful

Its natural scenery seems captivating to me with so many interest landscapes

With so many interesting landscapes

South Korea is a land country with economic in development so the life of people stabilixed.

South Korea is a land country and is a developed country, therefore, the life of people are stabilixed.

Anorther reason, because i have seem so many shows that hight the great places to goand yummy things to eat in koreaand i want to see everythingfirst hnd instead of though a television sreen.

Hight? Has chăng bạn?
Ý bạn là bạn đã xem rất nhiều chương trình ẩm thực và đến đấy để thưởng thức đúng không bạn? => great place to go and eat yummy things
Another reason is because, I have watched so many food shows that lead to food paradises. Many delicious dishes to pick and enjoy.

Andthe last reason that make mewant to visit korea by KPOP of this place,because i realy like kpop music, i want see these the best kpop music stages and how special that can meet my IDOL

And the last reason that makes me ... is because KPOP. KPOP music is my favourite, I want to see my IDOLs on stage in person, or going to their Fansign, it is such a special and wonderful feeling to see them in real life.

IT is possible with me current conditions, the korea is a step too far for me to make sure. i will later visited this country. KOREA the beautiful country..wait for me...

'Will later visit' bạn không cần phải thêm 'ed' đâu ^^
Mình không hiểu phần 'the korea.. too far.. make sure' lắm ^^
Bạn có thể tới thăm Hàn Quốc không?
Nếu có: It is possible for me to go there with my current condition. Korea isn't far away from me to visit. I will definitely visit this amazing country.
Nếu không: It is impossible.... condition. To visit Korea is still out of my reach but, I will surely visit it later. Wait for me, Korea!
Issy Key

 

[Phạm Dương]

The beautiful country that I want to set foot in is KOREA. there are many reasons that I would like to visit this country. For one thing, it looks like a stunningly beautiful. Its natural scenery seems captivating to me with so many interest landscapes. South Korea is a land country with economic in development so the life of people stabilized. Another reason, because I have seemed so many shows that hight the great places to go and yummy things to eat in Korea and I want to see everything first and instead of through a television screen. And the last reason that makes me want to visit Korea by KPOP of this place, because I really like Kpop music, I want to see these the best Kpop music stages and how special that can meet my IDOL
IT is possible with my current conditions, Korea is a step too far for me to make sure. I will later visit this country. KOREA the beautiful country..wait for me...