Sources of energy

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Mọi người xem bài của mình đã ổn chưa và chỉnh sửa giúp mình với!!!
In the world, there are many non-reusable energy sources such as oil, coal, ... So, we should use more economically to protect the environment. We can save more by turning off the TV when not in use, not opening the refrigerator regularly or walking or cycling instead of driving, ... We also have the best way instead of using power the amount of power cannot be reused, we can use reusable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy, etc. Those energies are available natural energy, maybe Used forever and does not pollute the surrounding environment. We can use them to generate electricity for everyone. Because the energy we are using is not an infinite energy source, so we need to use it in the best way to save for the future.
@Tín Phạm, @Tohru - san, @Nguyễn Như Tuyết

 

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Mọi người xem bài của mình đã ổn chưa và chỉnh sửa giúp mình với!!!
In the world, there are many non-reusable energy sources such as oil, coal, ... So, we should use more economically to protect the environment. We can save more by turning off the TV when not in use, not opening the refrigerator regularly or walking or cycling instead of driving, ... We also have the best way instead of using power the amount of power cannot be reused, we can use reusable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy, etc. Those energies are available natural energy, maybe Used forever and does not pollute the surrounding environment. We can use them to generate electricity for everyone. Because the energy we are using is not an infinite energy source, so we need to use it in the best way to save for the future.
@Tín Phạm, @Tohru - san, @Nguyễn Như Tuyết

In the world, there are many non-renewable (thay cho reusable )energy sources such as oil, coal, ... So, we should use energy more economically to protect the environment(mình nghỉ không cần "to protect the environment" đâu). We can save energy by turning off the TV when not in use, not opening the refrigerator regularly and walking or cycling instead of driving, ... We also have the best way instead of using power the amount of power cannot be reused(chỗ này là sao mình chưa hiểu lắm), we should use renewable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy, etc. Those energies are available natural energy sources ,we can use them forever and generate electricity for everyone without polluting for the environment (mình nghĩ viết như vầy sẽ hay hơn). . The energy we are using is not an infinite energy source, so we need to use it in the best way to save for the future.
(mình sửa củng không chắc đúng hết nên để chắc hơn bạn nên nhờ chi @Phạm Dương sửa giúp)

 

[Phạm Dương]

Mọi người xem bài của mình đã ổn chưa và chỉnh sửa giúp mình với!!!
In the world, there are many non-reusable energy sources such as oil, coal, ... So, we should use more economically to protect the environment. We can save more by turning off the TV when not in use, not opening the refrigerator regularly or walking or cycling instead of driving, ... We also have the best way instead of using power the amount of power cannot be reused, we can use reusable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy, etc. Those energies are available natural energy, maybe Used forever and does not pollute the surrounding environment. We can use them to generate electricity for everyone. Because the energy we are using is not an infinite energy source, so we need to use it in the best way to save for the future.
@Tín Phạm, @Tohru - san, @Nguyễn Như Tuyết

In the world, there are many non-renewable (thay cho reusable )energy sources such as oil, coal, ... So, we should use energy more economically to protect the environment(mình nghỉ không cần "to protect the environment" đâu). We can save energy by turning off the TV when not in use, not opening the refrigerator regularly and walking or cycling instead of driving, ... We also have the best way instead of using power the amount of power cannot be reused(chỗ này là sao mình chưa hiểu lắm), we should use renewable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy, etc. Those energies are available natural energy sources ,we can use them forever and generate electricity for everyone without polluting for the environment (mình nghĩ viết như vầy sẽ hay hơn). . The energy we are using is not an infinite energy source, so we need to use it in the best way to save for the future.
(mình sửa củng không chắc đúng hết nên để chắc hơn bạn nên nhờ chi @Phạm Dương sửa giúp)

Chị thấy bạn ấy sửa lại hợp lý rồi nha ^^ Chị chỉ thêm vài ý thôi
In the world, there are many non-renewable (thay cho reusable )energy sources such as oil, coal, etc (trong Tiếng Anh, người ta hay sử dụng từ này hơn nhé). So, we should use energy more economically to protect the environment(mình nghỉ không cần "to protect the environment" đâu) (mối quan hệ của nguồn năng lượng không tái tạo và việc sử dụng năng lượng tiết kiệm để bảo vệ môi tường là gì vậy em?). We can save energy by turning off the TV when not in use, not opening the refrigerator regularly and walking or cycling instead of driving, (những việc này tiết kiệm nguồn năng lượng gì vậy em?) ... (Linking word)We also have the best way instead of using the power the amount of power cannot be reused (chỗ này là sao mình chưa hiểu lắm), we should use renewable energy such as solar energy, water energy, wind energy, etc. Those energies are available natural energy sources, we can use them forever and generate electricity for everyone without polluting for the environment (mình nghĩ viết như vầy sẽ hay hơn). The energy we are using is not an infinite energy source, so we need to use it in the best way to save for the future.
Theo chị thì: We also have the best way instead of using the power the amount of power cannot be reused, we should use renewable energy => Instead of using non-renewable energy sources, we should use renewable natural energy sources .......