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Unit1: Friendship
Writing: rèn luyện kỹ năng viết.

I have a best friend. she's jocelyn, it's her name. she's is seventeen years of age. she's lives NothingVillage, Binh Duong city. The fisrt time i met her in class ten at school.
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She's a beautiful girl, but she's lessbian. she tall and her hair is let a tuft of hair hang at the end the turban. she have an oval face, dress very style, very lovely. she has strong charater. About her personalities is agile but not talkative, accessible but not that talk to everybody, she kind but not good-natured and sulk easy but not sulk long.

i like her because she like as a kids, lovely, share everything with me and between us have no secrat. i hope friendship of us to be in being forever.
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[o0honeybaby0o]

I have a best friend. she's jocelyn, it's her name. she's is seventeen years of age. she's (bỏ luôn) lives in NothingVillage, Binh Duong city. The fisrt time (that) I met her is in class ten at school.

She's a beautiful girl, but she's a lessbian. she is tall and her hair is let a tuft of hair hang at the end the turban (Không hiểu >"<). she have (has) an oval face, dress (dresses) very style (fashionable), very lovely. she has a strong charater. About her personalities is agile but not talkative, accessible but not that talk to everybody(hok hiểu lắm, sữa hok được), she is kind but not good-natured and sulk easy but not sulk long.

I like her because she is like as (bỏ luôn)a kid, lovely.She shares everything with me and between us have no secrat (hok hỉu tiếp). I hope our friendship will be forever.

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[pedung94]

I have a best friend. she's jocelyn, it's her name( bỏ đi đc rồi... viêt lại her name jocelyn) . she's is seventeen years of age( she is seventeen years old). she's lives NothingVillage, Binh Duong city. The fisrt time i met her in class ten at school.
( cái này nên viết lại là : "we are become friend at the fist met " như vậy cho thấy hai người rất hợp.... nó mang nghĩa cao hơn cái kia... nhưng mà câu này của mình ko sát nghĩa với của bạn lắm...)
She's a beautiful girl, but she's lessbian. she tall and her hair is let a tuft of hair hang at the end (đến đây nên thêm từ "of" vào ) the turban. she have ( has... giống của bé mật í) an oval face, ( nên thêm "her" vào)dress very style, very lovely. she has strong charater. About her personalities is agile but not talkative, accessible but not that talk to everybody, she ( thiếu "is" )kind but not good-natured and sulk easy but not sulk long.

i like her because she like as a kids, lovely, share everything with me( nên thêm " such as...joyful, sadness..) and between us have no secrat ( nhầm rồi phải là "secret"). i hope friendship of us to be in being forever. ( i hope our friend will be forever)( bé mật sai rồi... phải là friend chứ ko phải là friendship)

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trên kia viết sai từ lessbian phải là lesbian (n ): người đàn bà đồng tính luyến ái ???


tổng bài của bé mật và bé dung là đủ rồi thì phải???

 

[pedung94]

I have a best friend. Her name jocelyn . she's is seventeen years old. she lives NothingVillage, Binh Duong city. The fisrt time that i met her is in class ten at school. And we are become friend at the fist met. (hoặc có thể viết khác là We grew up together and we were always joined at the hip.( nghĩa là chúng tớ lớn lên cùng nhau và chúng tớ rất thân)

" She's a beautiful girl. she tall. She has long hair, kind of a round face. And she has a really nice smile. She has strong charater. About her personalities is agile, she is an active girl and accessible but not talk to everybody, she also talk with people that she like. she kind and very friendly. " ( giữ nguyên khúc này)
i really like her. she share everything with me such as...joyful, sadness..or something nomal in our life and between us have no secret. i hope our friend will be forever!
hoặc là" jocelyn and I did everything together and she was my confidant about everything. she always had my back and I could always count on her to give it to me straight ".. nghĩa là " jocelyn và tôi đã cùng làm với nhau mọi thứ và cô ấy là người bạn tâm tình của tôi về mọi chuyện. cô ấy luôn luôn ủng hộ và giúp đỡ tớ và tớ có thể tin tưởng cô ấy để có thể kể cho cô ấy nghe mọi chuyện

A friend like that is hard to come by ( nghĩa là Rất khó tìm được một người bạn như thế)
. i hope our friend will be forever!


bài này bé làm lại như thế này... ko biết có đc ko ???