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tuananh982

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Social networking can help connect people with friends, give people the chance to share pictures online, and help people communicate easily. According to Facebook in 2016, there are over 618 million active users per day, and over a billion active users per month. But does too much time social networking harm children's schoolwork?
One study stated that " sending text messages and using Facebook while doing homework were bad for overall GPA". One small girl said that checking text messages and Facebook on her smartphone was the biggest obstacle to her homework. Other studies have found a negative relationship between social media usage and overall Grade Point Average (GPA). Several studies have showed opposite results. One 2010 study showed that only 37% of "heavy" media users had grades lower than the average, while 35% of "light" users lower in average grades. Some students are turning on software such as " Block Facebook" to block certain websites on their computers, and allow them to have only certain amounts of time on Facebook so that they can focus on homework.
In this study, there was no relation between an excess of social media and a below average grades.
 

ng.htrang2004

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Parents can help the children use the internet beneficially avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
They can know what their children use is bad to avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
... (Mình thường viết 2 ý)

Tiêu cực:
The children feel uncomfortable when using social network
They can't do what they want to relax such as watching films, listening to music, ect => They may do them when their parents go out ...
Parents sometimes don't know that what their children do on the internet are good => Prohibit => The children can't develop about this field ...

Mình nghĩ vội nên chỉ có thế!
 

Nguyễn Trần Uyên Thi

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Social networking can help connect people with friends, give people the chance to share pictures online, and help people communicate easily. According to Facebook in 2016, there are over 618 million active users per day, and over a billion active users per month. But does too much time social networking harm children's schoolwork?
One study stated that " sending text messages and using Facebook while doing homework were bad for overall GPA". One small girl said that checking text messages and Facebook on her smartphone was the biggest obstacle to her homework. Other studies have found a negative relationship between social media usage and overall Grade Point Average (GPA). Several studies have showed opposite results. One 2010 study showed that only 37% of "heavy" media users had grades lower than the average, while 35% of "light" users lower in average grades. Some students are turning on software such as " Block Facebook" to block certain websites on their computers, and allow them to have only certain amounts of time on Facebook so that they can focus on homework.
In this study, there was no relation between an excess of social media and a below average grades.
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tuananh982

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Parents can help the children use the internet beneficially avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
They can know what their children use is bad to avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
... (Mình thường viết 2 ý)

Tiêu cực:
The children feel uncomfortable when using social network
They can't do what they want to relax such as watching films, listening to music, ect => They may do them when their parents go out ...
Parents sometimes don't know that what their children do on the internet are good => Prohibit => The children can't develop about this field ...

Mình nghĩ vội nên chỉ có thế!
Social evils là một cụm từ rất cũ, dù không sai, nhưng nếu khi nói thì không khuyến khích dùng, dù rằng không có cách nào khác (social issues chắc ok)
 

Nguyễn Trần Uyên Thi

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Parents can help the children use the internet beneficially avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
They can know what their children use is bad to avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
... (Mình thường viết 2 ý)

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Một vài ý cho bài viết nhé:
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Parents can help the children use the internet beneficially avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
They can know what their children use is bad to avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
... (Mình thường viết 2 ý)

Tiêu cực:
The children feel uncomfortable when using social network
They can't do what they want to relax such as watching films, listening to music, ect => They may do them when their parents go out ...
Parents sometimes don't know that what their children do on the internet are good => Prohibit => The children can't develop about this field ...

Mình nghĩ vội nên chỉ có thế!

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The children feel uncomfortable when using social network
They can't do what they want to relax such as watching films, listening to music, ect => They may do them when their parents go out ...
Parents sometimes don't know that what their children do on the internet are good => Prohibit => The children can't develop about this field ...

Mình nghĩ vội nên chỉ có thế![/QUOTE
Một vài ý cho bài viết nhé:
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Parents can help the children use the internet beneficially avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
They can know what their children use is bad to avoid the danger of social evils on the internet
... (Mình thường viết 2 ý)

Tiêu cực:
The children feel uncomfortable when using social network
They can't do what they want to relax such as watching films, listening to music, ect => They may do them when their parents go out ...
Parents sometimes don't know that what their children do on the internet are good => Prohibit => The children can't develop about this field ...

Mình nghĩ vội nên chỉ có thế!
E cám ơn ạ!!
 

ng.htrang2004

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Social evils là một cụm từ rất cũ, dù không sai, nhưng nếu khi nói thì không khuyến khích dùng, dù rằng không có cách nào khác (social issues chắc ok)
Trong bài viết thì hoàn toàn có thể dùng ... Social evils nó mang tính chất trầm trọng hơn là social issues ...
 
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